First, the original poem
You are an April day on earth, a compliment to love.
I said you are the April day of this world.
Laughter lit up the surrounding wind;
Your soul dances in the glory of spring.
You are the cloud on the first day of April.
Breathing the soft wind at dusk
The stars twinkle with unconscious light.
The rain in Mao Mao sprinkled the flowers with joy.
That's light, that's elegant, and you are,
You wear a crown of flowers,
In your naive and serious way
You are the full moon every night.
When the snow melts, you look like a yellow gosling
You are as tender as a bud.
How subtle! Long live!
Water floats with white lotus in your dreams.
You are a blooming flower from tree to tree.
Swallows chirping on the beam.
You are love, warmth and hope,
You are the April day on earth!
Second, appreciate
"You are April Day on Earth" has basically the same sentence structure from one to four, forming a complex stack and a symmetrical movement. The love in my heart is compared with the rich pictures in April, and the pictures are connected with a fast-paced sentence. Emotions are like ripples on the water, and the works are not only beautiful but also easy to sing. The fifth verse of Lang Lang's touching poem/You are love, warmth and hope,/You are April on earth. It is an ending action, comparing you with abstract love, warmth and hope. It's amazing. It's beautiful. You are an April day on earth, echoing the beginning of the poem. There are changes in repetition, poetry rotates and flows, and there is no sense of stagnation.
As the most formal expression of poetry, the rhythm, rhythm and words of this poem are in a neutral state, without the gaudiness and sharpness of red, purple, pure black and pure white, and the voice is gentle and elegant, even charming and lazy; You not only highlight the theme, but also play a rhyming role. In the process of poetry operation, the appearance of your every sentence, like a node in the band performance, highlights my direction in a frequency way. This is a deep combination of formal beauty and content beauty, and it is a subtle place that has not been studied and recognized by people. Singing hymns to April is actually talking to you. There is only one dash in the poem. This dash says: You are love, warmth and hope. What kind of hope? Connecting with Lin's knowledge background, we can see more clearly that behind the gorgeous picture of this poem, the rational expression is moderate and the writing is elegant, which fully embodies the noble atmosphere of English classical poetry.