Self-evaluation of calligraphy homework

This week, I created an assignment and four articles "Yi Ying Bei". I'm not good at kung fu. If there is anything wrong with my self-evaluation, please correct me!

Disadvantages:

? 1, serious meditation is not enough.

2, the "flat method" is not enough to grasp the pen. The brushwork of the tablet is completely different from that of the paste. Looking closely at WordPad and Paste, from a technical point of view, the pen belongs to both Fiona Fang and Fang Bi. I sometimes overlook this point in my writing.

3. Master the rhythm of writing while learning. When writing a lot of "horizontal paintings", the middle section slipped away and I didn't grasp the rhythm of using the pen. It seems that words lack strength. Pay attention to opposition and increase the friction between pen and paper.

? 4. The structure is not accurate. Straightness, length, weight, size, back, need to read the post carefully.

Advantages:

? 1, practice more than before.

2. When practicing calligraphy, I still calm down and read the post and compare it with the original post repeatedly. I have read some comments about Yi Ying Bei.