Encourage excellent compositions

In daily study, work or life, many people have written compositions. Composition is the transition from internal speech to external speech, that is, from compressed, concise and understandable language to The transformation of external language forms that is carried out, has a standardized grammatical structure, and can be understood by others. I believe that writing essays is a headache for many people. Here are some encouraging and excellent essays that I have collected for you. You are welcome to share them. Encouraging excellent compositions 1

Language is a flower waiting to bloom, a charger that releases energy, and a timely and stern solace...

In the early morning, I read carefully on campus , my voice was small and loud, because I was not confident. At this time, the teacher walked into the classroom, and I began to feel nervous, and my voice was a little bit inconsistent. The teacher saw me at this time, and after class , let me go to his office.

When I walked out of the classroom, I felt uneasy and thought: The teacher might want to educate me and encourage me. I walked into the teacher's office hesitantly. The teacher asked kindly: "Xiaoxin, why did your voice sound soft and loud just now?" "I...I" I hesitated and couldn't say a complete sentence, tears welling up in my eyes. "Xiao Xin, I know that your voice is getting louder and softer because you are very nervous. Then you can read it four or five times in preview." I looked at the teacher and nodded. "Xiao Xin, you still have one shortcoming: you are not confident enough. You have to trust yourself. When you don't trust yourself, who will trust you? I hope you are confident." "I know, I will work hard to correct it!" "I said with confidence.

A week later, I taught reading again. This time my voice was so loud that I was no longer afraid when the teacher came. The teacher asked me to read the text during class. Because my voice was loud, I won bursts of thunderous applause from my classmates. Looking at the teacher’s gratified eyes, I felt so happy!

I am here again In the teacher's office, the teacher praised me and said: "Xiaoxin, you are really a role model for the classmates, you are awesome!" The teacher also showed me off to the teachers in other classes! Normally, the teacher treats me like his own child. The same care, love and education. My heart is so sweet.

The teacher’s words of encouragement are like spring rain nourishing my young heart, guiding me to move forward in my studies! Encouraging excellent compositions 2

In life, it is inevitable to encounter difficulties and dissatisfaction. At this time, you need something to encourage yourself so that you can persevere and complete the task. And these things that can motivate me are also the three gifts I want to give myself now.

First of all, the first gift you want to give yourself is "Lego bricks". It can be assembled into various shapes as you like, but if there is no stable foundation, then the things above will definitely collapse. No matter how tall a building is, without a solid foundation, everything is nothing. So, I want it to encourage me to lay a good foundation and build a path for my future.

The second gift is a mirror, which reminds me to use others as a mirror to discover the strengths of others and improve my own shortcomings. With it, you can make yourself more diligent and "keep improving" at the same time.

The third gift is a writing brush. In addition to being a writing tool passed down from ancient times, it is also a good tool for practicing calligraphy. The brush, one of the four treasures of the study, represents the wisdom of the ancients and the long history of Chinese culture. China has a history of more than five thousand years. For thousands of years, ancient people have used brushes to create moving works. Only then did calligraphy masters such as Liu Gongquan and Ouyang Xiu emerge. Therefore, it can make me determined to practice calligraphy. Once you reach proficiency and become a literati in the new era, you must practice writing more frequently to make your writing even better!

These three gifts can ignite your fighting spirit, lay a good foundation, improve your shortcomings, and continuously surpass your abilities. Not only can it guide me on the road of life, but more importantly, it must have a good "foundation" in order to build the building higher and higher.

They really have extraordinary meaning to me: motivating myself to move forward! Encouraging excellent compositions 3

A back view made Zhu Ziqing shed tears; a silence made me secretly make up my mind.

After the midterm exam, my parents just asked lightly about the exam status and didn’t ask any more questions. However, facing this silence made me uneasy. On Sunday, my father called me to my room. I knew that nothing good would happen. Sure enough, he took a piece of paper and read, "Mathematics 85, English 81, Chinese, ranked 21st in the class, 284th in the school." After hearing this, tears began to well up in my eyes unknowingly, and I lowered my head. , trying not to shed tears. My father handed me a piece of paper. I didn't dare to look into his eyes, I just heard it. "You did average in math and English this time, but slightly worse in Chinese and Physics. Logically speaking, Chinese is your strong point, so why did you only take such a small test?" I was silent. The moment I walked back to the room, I heard my father He said to his mother: "Oh! I am too busy this semester and don't have much free time to teach her. It seems that I really need to take some time to tutor her in the afternoon. How can I do it without teaching?" My mother said: "But she is also under a lot of pressure. Don't always teach her." Mention the grades in front of her."

I returned to the room, sat at the table, sobbing quietly, and accidentally glanced at the semester plan made at the beginning of the semester. The first item read "At the mid-term and end of the semester. In the exam, he ranked among the top ten in the class and among the top one hundred in the school. "I thought I was really ambitious at the time, but the current situation has been greatly reduced. Faced with my father's silence, I understood it and secretly made up my mind to work harder.

With my current results, I I disappointed all the teachers and parents who were full of hope for me. Thinking back to my review before the exam, the teachers gave me encouraging looks, countless mornings, my parents’ careful instructions, and countless nights, the cups of hot water brought by my mother. , my father sharpened his skills until I walked towards the examination room with confidence, shouldering all my hopes, but ended up being disappointed.

Should I just face reality calmly? No, it’s impossible. This is definitely not the result I want. I am a very stubborn girl who refuses to admit defeat. Although I have faced failure more than once, I firmly believe that success must be ahead.

On the road to growth, there will be success. There are many thorns, if there is a cliff ahead, then hope must be around the corner. Encouraging excellent composition 4

In life, everyone needs applause, because applause can give people encouragement and motivation, even if they fail. A burst of applause can also give people comfort; and when people face difficulties, applause gives people confidence and courage.

When I was in elementary school, because my home was far away from school, I wanted to learn to ride a bicycle. . But my parents always thought that I was too young to let me learn to ride a bicycle, so that when I reached the fifth grade of elementary school, I still couldn’t ride a bicycle. When I graduated from elementary school, there was no summer homework, and my father couldn’t stand my hard work. , I finally bought me a bicycle that I had been dreaming about for a long time so that I could ride it when I was in junior high school. Now I was so excited! My father accompanied me to practice riding a bike every day in the scorching sun, except for his help on the road. Outside of my hard training, there were almost no pedestrians. I could only hear the screaming cicadas from the trees around me from time to time. My mood also became irritable because I didn’t know how many times I fell, even my knees broke. I didn’t know how much blood I had lost, and I finally wanted to give up. At this time, my father was sweating and exhausted, but he didn’t say a word of complaint. He just silently helped me onto the high bicycle again, and then he was very rhythmic. The ground applauded me and shouted to me: "Come on! Come on!" You will succeed, don't give up! "Hearing my father's applause, I felt energetic all over. I slowly stepped on the chain, gradually increasing the speed, and the car also sped forward. I didn't realize it at first, until I saw the happy smile on my father's face, I It suddenly dawned on me that I had already learned it, and my father’s hand had already been taken away from my back seat! My heart was really touched and excited, and the joy of success could not be described in words...

From then on, no matter whether I made a little progress in study or life, my father would give me a few rounds of applause, which made me full of confidence in life and future.

At the same time, I gradually understood that as long as you work hard and are not afraid of hardship, you can learn anything, and applause is the best motivation. Therefore, each of us should extend our enthusiastic hands, applaud ourselves, applaud others, and applaud a colorful life. You must know that life needs applause, everyone needs applause. Encouraging excellent composition 5

On Sunday, my mother and I went to my grandma’s house to visit my grandpa and grandma. I was extremely happy along the way, and laughter spread on the path. We arrived at grandma's house unknowingly. I opened the door and only heard "woof, woof, woof woof..." "Why did there suddenly be an extra dog in grandma's house?" I frowned and asked. I, Du Sijing, am not afraid of heaven or earth, only of dogs! My mother knows that I have been afraid of dogs since I was a child - I was bitten by a dog when I was a child. My mother encouraged me: "Daughter, you are the bravest and the best. How can a puppy defeat you?" I took a step forward, and suddenly, it yelled at me: "Woof woof——" I couldn't help but be scared. I was covered in cold sweat. I had some hope, but I was daunted by it yelling like this. Hope has turned into despair.

I turned around and said to my mother: "Mom, I don’t want to go there, please ask grandma to open the door." My mother said: "Baby, there are many difficulties in life. When you encounter difficulties, just Come to your mother, if you go to society and your mother is not with you, what will you do?" My mother's words gave me the courage to stop fighting, and I decided to try again. I tentatively walked into the courtyard, but the puppy was still very wary of me and stared at me eagerly. I had an idea, waved my hand to the little dog in a friendly manner, and called it "Hello dog!" Come. He also led the way in a friendly manner. I looked back at my mother happily: "I succeeded, yeah!" My mother smiled and said, "How about it, give it a try, and the problem won't be a problem, right?" "That's what mom said." I became happy again. , I walked arm in arm with my mother to my grandma’s house...

Since then, whenever I encounter difficulties and feel depressed, I will think of my mother’s teachings to me. It is my mother’s encouragement that makes me dare to face the difficulties. to difficulties. Encourage excellent composition 6

"Learn from the spring silkworms who spin silk continuously, and make candles to illuminate the roads." From ancient times to modern times, how many people compare teachers to hard cultivators, to gardeners, to Make rain and dew. In the blood and tears, in the selfless dedication, how many flowers of the motherland have become the pillars of China. Perhaps that silky silver hair is the best witness.

Unknowingly, we, the successors of the 21st century, entered the hall of middle school students. In that unfamiliar environment, it was you, the Chinese teacher, who gave me great encouragement. .

I remember that it was the lecture class after the first Chinese language test. Since my grades were not outstanding, I didn’t dare to raise my hand in class even if I knew the answer. Maybe you noticed it, so you have been waiting and cast encouraging glances at me. I mustered up the courage to stand up and answer. Although you stumbled, you were still very happy. You extended your thumb to me, showed your smile, and walked away. He came to me and said to me: "You have to keep working hard, you are not stupid." He returned to the podium and paced up and down on the podium. I was shocked. It turns out that there are still people who appreciate me. It turns out that I can still be saved. Since that sentence "You have to work hard, you are not stupid." rekindled the fire of my confidence. I have been studying hard and made great progress. Maybe this is the charm of encouragement.

It was you who encouraged me when I was least confident, making me confident in everything from now on. Perhaps this is the charm of encouragement. "You're not stupid" helps me overcome difficulties and achieve success.

The leaves are grateful to the sunshine, because the sunshine makes them grow; the stream is grateful to the sea, because the sea makes it strong; the grass is grateful to the soil, because the soil makes it thrive. You gave me the key to encouragement and opened the door to success.

Teacher, you are my favorite teacher, because you always encourage me and guide me with "you are not stupid", which makes me discover a new self. Adding a colorful touch to an ordinary life. The shortest encouragement, the greatest touch, maybe this is the charm of encouragement that makes your life different.

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There will always be twists and turns in each of our lives. When you encounter setbacks, face them bravely, have full confidence in yourself, and don't be afraid of how difficult the road ahead is. The difficult road is usually the best path for you to choose.

A friend is like a warm sweater, giving you warmth and words of encouragement when you cry. We all encounter too many troubles in our lives. I used to get nervous every time I took an exam. At that time, I wondered whether I had test anxiety. I slowly discovered my problem. During the vocal exam, I was in a terrible state of nervousness again. My heart beat faster and I stuttered when I spoke because I was nervous. My classmates laughed, I heard some sounds, don't be nervous. At the same time, they also cheered me up. When I forgot the lyrics, my classmates gave me lyrics reminders. I chose to give up at that time. It was something that troubled me and gave me a headache at that time. My classmates gave me encouragement. , I am very grateful to my classmates, thank you.

Regardless of the encouragement given by others, you should be confident and don’t be afraid of failure. Failure is just a process. It does not mean anything and does not depend on your progress. In the Failure Association, you will understand why you failed, find the reasons, and solve the problem of failure. "Failure is the mother of success." With failure, you will be one step closer to success. Give yourself more power to fly forward. You should learn to be grateful for the encouragement of others.

Encourage ourselves, we will be full of fighting spirit and meet new challenges; encourage ourselves, we will see the sunshine and gain hope; encourage ourselves, we will create new brilliance for ourselves. Encourage excellent composition 8

What is happiness? Where is the happiness? I have been asking and searching. I asked my mother, teachers, classmates, brothers, sisters, and father. What is happiness? Mom said happiness is the cup of tea given to you by your parents; the teacher said it was the look of approval she gave me; my classmates said happiness is the cheers you give to others; my brother said happiness is the experience of being close to nature and the mentality of overcoming oneself; My sister said that happiness is your tolerance for others; my father said that happiness is everywhere, and you can only discover the meaning of happiness by experiencing it yourself. The happiness I gradually realized was my mother’s encouragement when I failed the exam.

I remember that time, during the final exam, I looked at the test paper carelessly. I thought to myself: Huh, the test paper is too easy! It’s a hundred times easier than 1-1=0. My mother will definitely praise me and give me pocket money. I felt so happy when I thought of this. The more I thought about it, the happier and happier I became. I divided the test paper by two and got it done. Then I started reading the comic book, "ding ding ding ding ding..." It's time to hand in the paper. I will hand in the paper immediately. The teacher said to me: "Mengyao, can you get 100 points in the test?" I said confidently: "Yes." I put my schoolbag on my back and ran out of the classroom, wanting to go home immediately. The little bird chirped, as if cheering for me. When I got home, I said to my mother: "Mom, I will definitely get 100 in the test. If I don't do well, I will not watch TV for a month." My mother readily agreed. I watched TV with relish.

When the test papers were handed out, I was shocked. I only scored 79 points. This is the first time in my life that I got such a low score. On my way home, my steps became heavy and the world in my eyes looked so gloomy. After I got home, I showed the test paper to my mother with anxiety. I thought my mother would be furious. The volcano is about to erupt! Unexpectedly, my mother said kindly: "Yaoyao, it's okay. Just do well in the exam next time. Don't be discouraged. Failure is the mother of success. Let failure belong to the past and victory belongs to the future." After hearing this, I I felt happy to have such a good mother. I threw myself into my mother's arms, tears blurring my eyes. I called out "Mom" softly.

I found happiness! It is hidden in my mother’s encouragement to me! Encouraging Excellent Composition 9

"Study hard and make progress every day" This must be the encouragement that every student has been listening to since kindergarten.

When I was young, I thought this sentence sounded good, so whenever my parents, relatives, friends and teachers said this sentence, I always listened carefully and kept it in my heart.

Although I only understand the first half of the sentence "study hard", I still don't know whether the second half of the sentence "up every day" is looking up at the high, blue, and out-of-reach sky. My thoughts at that time were so simple, like spotless white clouds in the sky.

After the primary school entrance examination was over, I knew my results. I casually glanced at the familiar sky, and found that the previous light and comfortable blue was no longer there, replaced by a darker blue that made it difficult to breathe. "Did I not study hard?" I often blame myself, even though my parents never complained to me.

It’s another sunny day. The sky is a new kind of blue, which brings hope and uneasiness to people. I came to the door of this middle school that will "host" me for three years, but I still dare not take the first step. My mother hurriedly said to me: "Study hard and make progress every day." Then she left. When I heard this sentence again, I couldn't tell what I felt in my heart. I just felt, "Study hard and make progress every day." It is no longer an encouragement, but a requirement and a responsibility. So I stretched out my right foot in a daze and stepped over the railing.

Since I entered middle school, I have never heard that encouraging word again, but I finally understand the true meaning of that sentence: study hard and seriously, look high, and eliminate difficulties. , Climb up step by step until you can reach the place where you can touch the blue sky. At that time, I will proudly shout: Give me another encouragement! In this way, I can look up forever... Encouragement Excellent Composition 10

Encouragement is an invisible and colorless thing, and you can present it in any way. Sometimes it's just a word, sometimes it's just a look. But it can give you infinite power.

One day, when we were preparing for physical education class, it suddenly started pouring rain. I was secretly happy: Oh yeah! No need to test 50 meters times 8! But when I saw the teacher holding the mat and score sheet, I was dumbfounded. It turns out that the teacher wants to test sit-ups! I reluctantly went to line up.

Seeing that there were fewer and fewer people in front of me, I became more and more nervous. Finally, it's my turn.

I lay on the mat uneasily, feeling like I was about to hand out test papers. As the whistle blew, I started to do "1, 2, 3..." It became more and more difficult for me to do, but I couldn't stop, 40 is considered excellent! I closed my eyes tightly, gritted my teeth, and worked hard one by one, constantly cheering myself up: Come on, Liu Jiayi, you can do it! However, I still did it slower and slower. "29...30...31..." "Twenty seconds left!" The teacher gave an ultimatum. I collapsed on the mat and couldn't get up. "Come on! There are still 6 left!" Jiang Jiani next to me was cheering me on: "Keep on holding on, and you will be excellent after doing 6! Come on! Come on!" She clenched her fists with both hands, looking encouraging and anxious. looking at me. Suddenly, I was full of strength and thought: I can’t live up to my classmates’ encouragement, I must finish these 6! So I mustered up all my strength and said, "35...36...37...39, 40, 41, 42." "Stop! Time's up!" "Yeah!" I jumped up excitedly and gave Jiang Jiani a warm hug.

Look, how powerful encouragement is! Be sure to encourage your friends in the future! Encouraging Excellent Composition 11

Thank you for your words of encouragement, which allowed me to stand up bravely after falling and stride forward to where I am today.

——Inscription

The sky is gray, and the haze that tears apart in the sky makes people breathless. The melodious bell rang at this moment, as if trying to break the gloomy atmosphere by its own strength.

In the classroom, I packed my things mechanically, stood on my seat, and clutched the monthly exam paper tightly in my hand. Finally, as if he couldn't bear the blow, he rushed out of the classroom with his schoolbag on his back.

I didn’t know how long I ran. I looked around and ran on the road leading to home.

I knelt down on the cold and hard road, not even noticing that my knees were worn out. In my mind, I reflected the smiling faces of my teachers, classmates, and parents, recalling their ardent expectations.

However, all of this has long been shattered and turned into a shadow. Looking down with empty eyes, he saw the bright red maple tree. After a month of hard work and hard study, all he got in exchange was a dazzling red score.

I didn’t know how long I had been kneeling, but the clear numbness on my feet stung me. "Tick-" A drop of warm liquid rolled out of his eyes.

He stood up awkwardly, holding on to the wall, but it seemed that he had exhausted all his strength. When I got home, I didn't know how to explain this unbearable fact to my father.

"Girl, when you come back, wash your hands and eat first! I made your favorite Chiba tofu!" came the kind voice from the kitchen, looking at the busy back and the delicious food on the table The dishes made me almost cry. When I was eating, I was so preoccupied that I ate everything like chewing wax, still thinking about how to speak.

After night, my father came to my room with a cup of freshly brewed chrysanthemum tea. I was a little confused and didn’t understand what my father was going to do.

"Wait for it to brew." These four words made me focus on the tea. The originally wrinkled flower buds slowly bloomed into petals when soaked in water. The speed was not very fast, but it was undoubtedly elegant.

I took a sip. It's bitter at first, but the aftertaste is a little sweeter. I suddenly realized that my father was telling me that there is no need to lose heart, life is like tea, it will be bitter first and then sweet.

With a cup of tea, there are no words of encouragement. At that time, that voice of encouragement left me with endless aftertaste. Encouragement to Excellent Composition 12

Everyone receives different encouragement in his life. The encouragement that everyone receives is in words. But the encouragement my father gave me was a small gesture.

I have been very energetic since I was a child, so my father asked me to learn various sports. I learned skiing, skateboarding, table tennis... I still like table tennis the most. Every time I hit a good shot, my father would never say good job, he would only give a thumbs up and smile. I was very sad because other people's fathers are different from my own. If I want to encourage you, other people's dads will say good things, and he will just give a thumbs up and smile, but he is my dad. For once, I no longer felt this sad mood.

Once, I was playing table tennis with others. This was not an ordinary competition, but a school district competition. At first, my classmates had the upper hand, but I was not nervous at all. Dad gave me a thumbs up and smiled. Somehow, this gave me great encouragement. Gradually, I felt that I couldn’t hold grudge against my father, because my father’s action really gave me great encouragement. This moved me very much. I secretly swore that this game I must win, and I cannot let my father’s hard work go to waste. So I fought more and more bravely, and finally won the game with a score of 15:10. My father stretched out his hands, gave me two thumbs up, and applauded me.

This is the first time in history that my father gave me two thumbs up. I immediately threw myself into my father's arms and started crying. My father stroked my head and smiled.

I understand that if it weren’t for my father’s small action, I think I would be discouraged and unable to face life, unable to face the tomorrow that no one knows and longs for! Encouraging Excellent Essay 13

Some people may ask my mother what encouragement she gave me, and I will tell you that my mother gave me encouragement when I was cooking. Because today is the first time in my life that I make wheat cakes! At first, I was a little worried: Will the wheat cakes I made taste bad? However, my mother next to me encouraged me and said: "Don't worry, you can definitely do it!"

So, I mustered up the courage to put 3 tablespoons of flour into the plate, and then added water while stirring. , no need to add water until it reaches a certain level. I then used the "Nine Yin White Bone Claw" to rub it vigorously. "I rub, I rub, I rub, rub, rub!" until it becomes a "solid"!

Then, it’s time to make wheat cake crumbs! I first used the "quick knife magic" to cut the tofu into pieces easily! Below is a cut of meat fresh out of the "oven" (refrigerator).

I touched it with my hand: "Ah! It's so hard!" I picked up the knife to cut the meat, but the meat was like a powerful doll, and I couldn't cut it. I thought angrily: Okay! You are so stubborn! Now I want you to see whether you are stubborn or my knife is stubborn! I pulled out the knife and chopped hard at the meat. After a while, the meat was chopped into pieces by me! Next, I mixed the tofu and meat into one, and rolled the "solid" into a circle. Next, I put the crumbs into the "solid". I thought to myself: I am not good at this! At this time, my mother's words were like a gust of wind blowing to my ears: "You can definitely do it!" I mustered up the courage to put the crumbs into the "solid" "perfectly". "Haha! It's finally better!" I let out a long breath.

However, I encountered a problem again - Shaomai cakes. I thought worriedly: What if it gets burned? At this time, my mother's words rang in my ears again: "You can definitely do it!" I mustered up the courage again and put the crushed "white dolls" one by one into the pot. oil), when I saw the wheat cake in the pot turning from white to golden, I thought to myself: Is it better to turn over? I turned the "golden doll" over. At a glance, it was like a layer of yellow gauze draped on a wheat cake. It was so cute! After a while, the fragrant wheat cakes came out of the oven!

I took a bite, wow! It tastes great! I thought to myself: Such a delicious wheat cake was born, so thank you to my mother for her encouragement! Encouraging Excellent Composition 14

A person laughs when he accidentally wins a lottery, he laughs evilly when he makes a calculation, and his mother smiles when she encourages me.

"How about this?" Mom asked. I weakly replied, "It's okay." 'Forget it, this one isn't that good, let's go to the next one! "My mother waved her hand and left without looking back. I dragged my clumsy steps to follow my mother. When I came across a chair that was like mud, I wanted to fall down and sit on it. My mother dragged me I picked right and left and finally saw one thing. I accidentally caught a glimpse of a sign next to me: x yuan - x yuan can be exchanged for a pair of gloves... I looked at the consumption ticket and muttered: "You can also exchange it for a pair of gloves..." Two pairs of socks. "I couldn't, but my sharp-eared mother heard: "Really? You go up and have a look. ""Why should I go alone? Not going? "

I wanted to shake my head like a rattle, and would rather die than go up alone. My mother smiled and said to me: "Hey, you go up alone to exchange socks, and I'll hand over the money. Waiting for you below. "I looked at my mother's intoxicating smile, and I was shaken by the exam in my heart, wandering repeatedly between going and not going, not knowing where to stop." Huh? Go or not? I'll be down there, okay? I'll come up to you after paying the money. ""All right. "I reluctantly went online and nodded.

On the way, I was holding the consumption ticket, and my palms were sweating. I didn't relax a little until I finished redeeming it. At this time, my mother came out with that smile on her face. The smiling face was still so intoxicating and warm. Later I found out that my mother followed me all the way to make me brave.

My mother always smiled when I was hesitant. Her face always appears in front of me. She gives me courage and encouragement. Excellent Encouragement Essay 15

A smile, a look, a word... Encouragement comes in different ways for me. , If it hadn’t been for my sister’s encouragement, I would not have had the opportunity to see the beautiful scenery of this city.

Last summer, my sister and I agreed to climb Cuiping Mountain. From here, We could see the "emerald green ocean", and I was already eager to try it. As soon as I started, I walked quickly, leaving my sister far behind. In the embrace of nature, I listened to the crisp and graceful sounds of the birds. singing; enjoying the shade cast by the intertwined dense green leaves; looking for wild flowers exuding a faint fragrance on the grass. As I walked, I was so tired that my legs felt like lead. It was getting heavier and heavier. The originally light backpack was now like a hill, weighing me down so much that I couldn’t straighten my back. “Oh,” I thought to myself, “If I had known I was so tired, I wouldn’t have come. "Although I saw the pavilion not far from the top of the mountain, the idea of ??giving up became stronger and stronger.

At this time, my sister caught up. She seemed to have read through my mind. She smiled and encouraged me and said, "I have seen the pavilion not far from the top of the mountain. It will be there soon. 'Nothing is difficult in the world, as long as you are willing to climb', as long as you have perseverance , If you have perseverance, you can climb to the top of the mountain." As she said that, my sister gave me another encouraging look. I looked up at the pavilion not far away. There was only a little way left, why give up? So I speeded up my pace unconsciously. Gradually, we saw the top of the mountain, one step, two steps, three steps... I climbed up hard.

Standing on the observation deck on the top of the mountain, listening to the "symphony" of birds, feeling the cool wind blowing on my face, and looking around, half of the city can be seen.

My sister’s words and eyes gave me encouragement to persist to the end, allowing me to see half of the beautiful city and enjoy the joy that persistence brought me.