Five little fingers, holding a long branch, paddle around under the tree. Tired, they picked up a thick story book, put it under the tree, put a round head with two long braids on it, picked up a little white cat squinting and licking its tongue, and lay down in the "bright light" to embrace that happiness with their hearts. Sometimes they vaguely regard that feeling as a dream, and there is no bright sky. "You have to lose weight." It pawed at me, as if it understood. The natural smile and the song of birds flying over monotonously explained me at that time. I will giggle at the sky for a long time, but I will not be friendly to anyone, perhaps with contradictions.
At that time, I was five.
Spread out two short arms, run on the path in the field and let it dance freely in the wind. At that time, I began to have friends and share, but behind me, it was still that little white who followed my happy notes and came to my other world. There are some colorful things on muddy feet and uneven pants corners. Whenever my mother asks me, to be honest, I don't know where I learned it. Watching my friends splash, squint, wipe the water, and then take off their shoes and put them on again, the cat looked at my shoes again and again, and then bit them like eating. When the sun went down, I dragged four long shoelaces on my way home, stepping on the dry and hard mud, and a cat looked at the ground on my shoulder, very scared. The sound of sunset debris rings in my ears.
At that time, I was seven.
When I used this little note to record my big past, I may not be able to bear the change, but yesterday's voice is still as charming as ever, like a painting hanging in my heart forever, guarding the warmth with the strongest frame.
2. Write a composition on the topic of writing. 450 words "Tick-tock, Tick-tock" It's raining cats and dogs outside the window. Oh, I see it. It is the footsteps of summer.
She walked softly into the mountain. The mountains suddenly seem to be covered with a layer of pure white silver gauze. Mountain, blurred; Books and trees are blurred. This catkin-like rain fairy floated down and instantly swallowed up Wan Li Castle Peak. Ah, spring-unrestrained.
Slowly, she stepped into the field. Her beautiful figure is flying everywhere in the field. She played happily with Uncle Tian, splashing high, just as she laughed like a clear spring. It began to rain heavily. Isn't it her silvery laughter? Oh, summer.-Frankly.
Slowly, she walked into the campus. Innocent children happily threw themselves into the arms of summer and greeted her with lark-like laughter. On campus, handfuls of small umbrellas printed with Mickey Mouse have been propped up one after another; A pair of petite feet flapping the spray, how comfortable it is! Some creative children hold umbrellas high and spin quickly. The rain that hit the cement splashed out one after another, splashing a pool of lovely laughter. Ha, summer.-interesting.
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I don't know how long it will take before the rain stops. Grandpa Sun can't wait to stick his head out. The little girl by the river beside the field pulled her mother's skirt and pointed at the sun in the sky with her little hand: "Mom, mom, look!" " Grandpa Sun has changed and become more kind! Mother stopped her work and gently stroked the little girl's head: "Look, this is the summer sun. Summer is coming! "
Yes, summer has come and a new and vibrant season has begun. Although summer is not as gentle as spring, autumn is so cool and winter is so white, her sweet sunshine and warm wind are unparalleled.
Friends, have you seen the footsteps of summer?
3. Write a composition on the topic of writing. I like writing as well as calligraphy. Calligraphy has a long history in China.
Calligraphy is a unique art and a treasure in the cultural heritage of the Chinese nation. "Character is a person's second appearance". Since primary school, my parents have enrolled me in calligraphy interest classes.
My handwriting is the worst in the calligraphy class. On one occasion, the teacher organized several students with good handwriting to take part in a writing competition. Seeing to be no.1 they brought back, I was envious and determined to practice my handwriting well and strive for good grades. Since then, I have paid special attention to calligraphy classes. Listen attentively in class, write class notes, and practice the homework assigned by the teacher every day after returning home.
Many things happen, and in the end, he won prizes frequently in some calligraphy competitions. Looking at the hard-won awards, I feel indescribable moved and proud. Calligraphy has given me unlimited confidence and taught me the true meaning of "where there is a will, there is a way". I deeply feel the happiness and beauty brought by calligraphy.
I believe that as long as I persevere and study hard, calligraphy will definitely bring me more unexpected income.
Write a composition around the topic of "writing" On hearing this topic, everyone will think: What is unforgettable about writing? We wrote all day! I want to tell you about it. What impressed me this time is that this time, we wrote with our left hand.
In the afternoon, while the students were absorbed in reading, Miss Li suddenly said, "All right, everybody put away your books. Now take out a piece of paper and start to memorize the third unit. " So, the students silently took out a piece of paper, ready to be silent, but at this moment, Teacher Li said, "But this time, I ask you to write with your left hand!" " "ah? As soon as I heard it, I had a heated discussion with them. Anyone can write by hand, but it is difficult to write with his left hand. I really don't know what medicine Miss Li sells in the gourd.
Finally, I started writing. The students all grinned and frowned. It seems awkward to write with your left hand, but some students have answers, especially Li Hao, because he used to be left-handed. The students' postures are even more strange. Pastoral writing is actually written by holding a pen on both sides, and Ma Haofeng also writes with his mouth biting a pen. However, some people hold the pen in a good posture.
Don't mention the words written by the students. Some are like swimming snakes, winding; Some are like racetracks; Some are like tracks painted on mountains; Some are like winding mountain roads and narrow paths; And bird's nest! I am not satisfied with a few articles, because my handwriting is always inconsistent, and my hands don't listen to me. It seems that I am writing with someone else's hands, and my arms seem to weigh a thousand pounds. I used to write more than 100 words in ten minutes, but now I can only write 2 1 word in ten minutes. At this time, Mr. Li said that he would accept it, and my heart was pounding. How did I get this word? Later, fortunately, Mr. Li said to take it back to write, and I was relieved.
Why is writing with your left hand not as smooth as writing with your right hand? Because we all write with our right hands for a long time and get used to it, it is not easy to write with our left hand. From this activity, I learned several truths: No matter what you do, you must persevere and not be impatient, otherwise you will accomplish nothing. And in life, you should not only use your right hand, but also use your left hand flexibly, which can also inspire you to get more new attempts in your future life. Just like studying, you can't be partial.
5. How does the composition end? First, the most taboo at the beginning is to give people the feeling of digressing with a pen. It tells the marking teacher bluntly that the author will not judge the meaning of the question and the composition score will be greatly reduced.
Example 4 "Communication begins with language": "Language is a bridge, connecting this shore and the other shore; Language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; Language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth. Only when the language is expressed accurately can communication be successful.
If the language is wrong, it may have unpredictable consequences. So how can we express the language accurately and promote the success of communication? Therefore, whether the opening is well written or not, the core issue is still in the exam; When judging the meaning of a question, seek accuracy first, and then seek image.
Many methods are introduced at the beginning. 1, quote the famous saying (1) ask how the world is and teach people to commit themselves to life and death.
Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His question can be said to have been asked for a long time
Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But every family's words are as different as everyone's face.
Shi said, "Love is a tool. "(What is Love in the World) In a medieval church, a saint began his speech:" I became a saint because I saw through money, and what I have belongs to everyone. "
Long years, a snap of your fingers. In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine."
Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. "
Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success. ("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format 1 Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice.
(A Letter to Confucius) The hateful standard answer: I am really outraged to see you. Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you.
The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat. You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened.
The following are your three major crimes: ... ("A Letter to the Standard Answer") 3. Borrowing Zhang Hui's novel style (1) "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time." At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past.
And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world. The Juyi Hall in the Water Margin is now brightly lit and full of people.
One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently.
It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin. That's why all the heroes gather here and argue endlessly.
Who is the hero who killed the tiger? 4. Clever use of rhetoric can easily express the author's feelings and arouse readers' interest in reading. For example, in 2002, the beginning of "Choice of Heart" wrote: "If you choose wings, you will embrace the whole blue sky; If you choose fins, you will kiss the vast blue sea; If you choose a quadruped, you will appreciate the vast green forest.
And my choices are one by one. "The sentence pattern at the beginning of the parallelism sentence is neat, and the language is sonorous, which forms a contrast before and after, which not only points out the topic but also sets suspense to promote people to enjoy reading.
In addition, the article "Honesty-Forever Green Card" written in 200 1 College Entrance Examination begins: "Honesty is like the first sunshine in spring, which is desirable; Such as a sweet watermelon in summer, contained in the mouth, sweet in the heart; For example, the autumn wind sent a fiery maple leaf from a distance, which attracted infinite attention; Such as snowflakes flying in winter, cover the wheat fields with thick quilts. " At first, metaphor and parallelism were used to describe the value and significance of honesty and express the desire for honesty.
5. Lyric method. That is to say, pour out your true feelings directly at the beginning of the article to point out the main idea of the article.
There are three common lyric ways: hypothetical lyric, comparative lyric and comparative lyric. For example, the 200 1 college entrance examination masterpiece "Carrying a Backpack of Honesty" wrote at the beginning: "If life is a Mercedes-Benz train, then honesty is an indispensable wheel; If life is a long-distance ship, then honesty is an indispensable backpack, which will accompany you all your life. "
The author uses metaphor and contrast to illustrate the importance of honesty from comparison. Another example is the beginning of the excellent composition "The Footsteps of Choice" in the 2002 college entrance examination: "What suddenly crossed my mind and left an instant glory? What is it, quietly watering the heart and cultivating sweet memories? What gently taps the soul and brings eternal beauty? What makes your heart, my heart and his heart play that magnificent movement together? One by one is a shocking choice, a difficult and beautiful choice again and again, a song of one's own choice ... "The four parallel questions at the beginning cause people to think deeply, expressing the value and significance of choice to life, thus expressing the author's feelings.
Step 6 cut to the chase. Because this kind of beginning is straightforward, it can go straight to the subject, enter the scene described by the writer at once, or grasp the essence of the discussion at once, so it is suitable for many styles.
For example, the excellent composition "Choosing the Chinese Soul" in the 2002 college entrance examination begins with "Looking through the past history and looking for the choice of the soul without regrets", and the subtitle is: 1, the choice of heroes. 2. The king's choice.
3. Choice of scientists. In this way, a few words are directly introduced below.
Another example is the excellent composition "Wisdom and Thought-My Choice" in the 2002 college entrance examination.
6. Write a 200-word composition on the topic of writing. I like writing.
I like reading and painting, but I prefer writing.
I remember when I first started writing, my handwriting was like an earthworm crawling all over the floor without a word. For this reason, my teacher and mother criticized me a lot. I feel embarrassed myself, and I am determined to practice my good handwriting. I told my mother what I thought and she didn't support me very much. Bought me a copybook. Since then, I have to write posts every day, copying first and then copying. After writing the copy, compare it with the copybook, find some shortcomings and improve it! Sometimes my hands are swollen from practice, but I still stick to it. Where there is a will, there is a way. My handwriting is getting better and better. Once, the school organized a hard-pen calligraphy competition, and I volunteered to win the competition. The day to announce the ranking has finally arrived, and I am waiting for the result in fear and trembling. The teacher called my name first and said, "Congratulations, Hu Bijing, you are the champion of this calligraphy contest." I was relieved and jumped with joy. Looking at the adoring eyes of my classmates, I have more spirit to write.
Now, I am not satisfied with writing hard pen, and I have begun to challenge the writing brush. "As long as the kung fu is deep, the iron pestle is ground into a needle."
7. How to write the beginning and end of the composition The writing at the beginning of the composition is 1. That's right. Write the key words or phrases in the topic in the first paragraph. (point) 2. Positioning. On the one hand, it mainly refers to determining the scope of writing, that is, determining what to write in this paper. On the other hand, it also refers to the completion of emotional positioning, that is, whether you like or hate the person or thing you wrote. Is it a compliment or a disgrace? Make one's point. 3. The quotation is as follows. Why do you say that? What is the specific situation? Lead to the following. Like climbing Tiandu Peak. The middle of the rich Xisha Islands is written as 1. Is to write from scratch. Because the beginning requires "deduction", of course, it will not digress. It's important to write a composition that stays on topic. For example, the Summer Palace. 2. Write in order. Is to write in an orderly way in a certain order. For example: chronological order. Spatial order. Emotional order. 3. Detailed points. Is to write the key parts in detail. Which case do you think is the most typical, convincing and powerful to highlight your point of view? Just focus on this paragraph and write it in detail. The writing at the end of the composition is 1. Take care of the beginning (point) That's contact. Echo the content at the beginning and use the keywords at the beginning again. 2. Write down your feelings. It is to write your own feelings, feelings or sentiments (only one of them). If you write "feeling" at the end, you can point out or sublimate your own point of view. Example: Summer Palace, charming Zhangjiajie, race against time, green.
What if I can't find the right words to express myself?
When writing a composition, students often encounter such a situation. When describing something or someone, they just can't find the right words to express it, despite their good intentions. What should we do?
First, read widely.
Extensive reading is to read more extracurricular books and learn the "nutrition" of words from them.
Second, focus on reciting.
For a good work, we should be familiar with it and recite good words, good sentences and particularly beautiful chapters. The functions of recitation are: firstly, you can thoroughly understand the content of the original text; Secondly, you can accumulate vocabulary; Third, can master the collocation of words; Fourth, it is easy to use for reference or application when writing. For example, in Zhu Ziqing's Spring, it is "red as fire, pink as chardonnay, and white as snow" and "hair like cattle, needle like silk". Many students draw lessons from or use them in their compositions, which is obviously the result of familiar reading or reciting.
Third, careful analysis.
After accumulating a lot of vivid vocabulary through extensive reading and key recitation, we should also master the skills of using vocabulary.
Satisfied answer.