The first couplet "Apricot curtain attracts guests to drink, and there is a mountain villa in the eye" divides the topic into two sentences, which are natural in syntax and closely related to the topic. Write the following four sentences about the villa scenery seen by tourists.
The sentence in Zhuan Xu's poem "Sang Yu Water is a Goose, Water is a Swallow" depicts a vivid picture: geese swim in the dragon water full of pools, and swallows fly out of mulberry trees and build nests among the roof beams. This couplet only uses nouns to compose poems, not verbs or adjectives, which is a special syntax of Chinese classical poetry.
Necklace couplets "leek cooked in one spring, rice fragrant in ten miles" highlight the field landscape of "apricot curtain in sight" and draw an imaginary harvest scene.
At the end of the couplet, "There is no hunger in prosperous times, so why bother farming?" Write the feelings of visitors. Because it was written for Yuan Chun, it was very clever to end the poem with a hymn of saints.
In this poem, Lin Daiyu describes an ideal Taiping grange, but in fact it is just a false grange model in the Grand View Garden. Zhi Yanzhai commented that "fantasy becomes fantasy, push the boat with the current".
Spring in the Yuan Dynasty is just like the emperor asking his officials to write poems. One by one, everyone was asked to write a poem and a plaque, and she would judge whether it was good or bad. But her brother, she loved it. It is enough for others to do four sentences. You must make eight sentences, not one, but four. She thinks the best places, such as Xiaoxiang Pavilion, Garden and later Daoxiang Village, require him to write a poem everywhere. Jia Baoyu was in great pain, and finally Lin Daiyu couldn't stand it and "derailed". The last song was not finished, and it was Daoxiang Village. After she finished writing the poem Apricot Curtain in Sight, she wrote it in a small paper ball and threw it to him. As a result, he immediately copied it in and finally evaluated it. This poem is the best, the best of all. After Apricot Curtain in Sight, it was changed to Daoxiang Village. "Apricot curtains attract guests to drink, and there are villas in the eyes" is a sophisticated style. The first poem I wrote was about this topic. She divided the topic into two sentences and said it at once, so naturally. "Apricot curtains attract guests to drink", wine flags attract guests, "I can see a villa", and it seems that the words "Apricot curtains are in sight" have been put in. How about the second couplet "Lingbi Goose Water, Sang Yu Swallow Beam"? Which of these two sentences is the subject? Which is the predicate? There is no such thing. There are no verbs, no adjectives, and all nouns are put together, "water on a goose", which is a special syntax of poetry. It is conceivable that geese are playing in the water there, and there are dragonflies on the water. Don't tell them. Just use "Lingbi Goose Water" and "Sang Yu Swallow Beam". Swallows go through the Woods, make their nests out of branches of mulberry trees and elms, and come back to make their nests. Imagine for yourself. It is such a grammar, especially neat grammar. Third and second couplets, parallel couplets and neck couplets, please pay attention to those who learn to write poetry. Change is very important. The front is serious and the back is hilarious. Sit in the front solemnly and run at the back. The posture of the two couplets is different, the front is thick and the bottom is light. Therefore, the following couplets are natural: "One spring is green with leeks, and ten miles of rice flowers are fragrant". These two sentences are natural and changed from above. The same face, you just write poetry, which means you can't write poetry. But the last two couplets of this poem are good. Daoxiang village is a scene. Don't think it's really rural. Jia Baoyu has said that there is no mountain in this place, and there is nothing beside the water. Suddenly, there was an artificial village, which was artificially written in the past. No one is farming or spinning there. It's just a scenic spot. Lin Daiyu is too clever. Isn't this for Yuan Chun? Therefore, if you want to praise the saints, you must write poems. So, you said "not hungry for big things". Now that there is peace and prosperity, no one will go hungry. "Why farm and weave? Why farm and weave? Then buy it, because you can't eat all the food. Therefore, Zhi Yanzhai's comment on writing is like this: "Turn fantasy into fantasy and push the boat with the current." What does this mean? That is, when no one is farming in the Grand View Garden, there is a scene there, where people are good and go with the flow. Therefore, "without losing the system", without losing the body of the system, because it is not just my sister who wrote to Yuan Chun, she is a high-ranking imperial concubine, and she came out on behalf of the emperor. If she asks you to write poems, you must treat the emperor as a courtier and praise the peace and prosperity. Therefore, it is said that "there is no hunger in major events, and there is no need to plow and weave." Therefore, when Yuan Chun read this letter, she was very happy. She thinks that her brother is so smart now and has written such a good poem, but she doesn't know that it is cheating in the exam. Lin Daiyu definitely wrote this place. Of course, Lin Daiyu's own poems are also good and clever, but if she writes the best poems to her favorite person and contributes to him and her bosom friend, her poems will be particularly good.