As for Yu Jie, he is indeed an erudite young scholar, a young scholar I admired very much at that time, a high flyers from the Chinese Department of Peking University, and a geek. Unexpectedly, the poem Baiyun, which was criticized by Yu Jie, appeared on the Internet like a ghost. If Yu Jie knows, I wonder if he will write a critical article in an impassioned tone to crusade.
Now, I also graduated from college. Rereading today, I still have some thoughts and opinions. Maybe it's not as rubbish as Yu Jie criticized. Of course, it's hard to say what it is. At most, it's just a word game, so there's no need to spend energy and time criticizing it. Let it die.
It happened that some people love to play tricks and brag, fearing that the world would not be chaotic. So my generation is idle, so let me interpret Han Dong's so-called "genius initiative" and see how "genius" and "initiative" it is.
First of all, who is Qing Wu? Even with a lyrical, straightforward, vague and powerless "nonsense poem"-"Baiyun", it became popular on the Internet and became famous overnight! Then let's take a look at this poem "Baiyun", which is praised by Yu Jian and Han Dong who are not even second-rate poets.
White clouds in the sky are really white.
real
Very white, very white, very white.
Very very white.
Super white, super white
Extremely white
Thief white
It died in vain.
ah ...
It is such a poem "Baiyun" with straightforward language and vague lyricism that has been highly praised by famous poets Yu Jian and Han Dong: "I said this poem" Baiyun "before. Now I see more. Thanks to Weibo, he has many good poems. " The poet Han Dongze said: "You said that it was not poetry, that was your ignorance, but you said that it was the only way to write poetry, and that was also ignorance. Even if Qing Wu said so, it was his ignorance. Qing Wu writes poetry, and such persistence is a feat of genius, just don't be so serious. "
Here, I want to analyze the reasons why Yu Jian and Han Dong are called good: First of all, this poem is effortless and straightforward. To express the feelings at a glance is nothing more than a girl who is still naive and romantic expressing and praising Baiyun and her strong love and admiration for Baiyun. This kind of praise is real, it is true from the author's heart, and it is not artificial.
Let's see that the author uses several adverbs (including: true, very, very, special, special, extreme, thief and simply) to modify and express Baiyun and the author's admiration for Baiyun. It can be said that the admiration and admiration for Baiyun is unprecedented, and this rhetorical way has indeed reached the incisive level and degree in the concentration of emotional expression. Maybe there's nothing like this Qing Wu.
We can imagine that this may be a white cloud seen at close range on the plane, but from the poet's point of view, it should be looking up on the grassland. But the problem is that the expression of this single emotion is too vague. Although this lyric way seems to be very effective. However, we can also see from here that this poet named Qing Wu is poor in imagination and vocabulary. We haven't seen any poetic images except the ever-changing adverbs!
We only read her praise until we couldn't find an expressive word to express that sigh, but it came to an abrupt end with an "ah". Admittedly, as Han Dong said, I believe this is also a way to write poetry, and it is also a poem; But the question is, is this kind of poem too easy to write? Can people who are proficient in literature and ink write this kind of poem? The answer is undoubtedly yes.
Of course, you can't say that this poem is useless. At least formally, its advantage is that it also has a sense of rhythm and emotion, which is the second point I want to talk about in this poem. Let's take a look at my division of the beat of this poem:
White clouds in the sky/so white,
real
Very white, very white/very white.
Very very/very white
Extra white/extra white
Extremely white
Thief white
This is simply/meaningless.
ah ...
When reading aloud, there are many words that need to be stressed. Really, the first one is "very", very, hot, special, extremely, thief and white. Only by rereading these words can the author feel his feelings. In a sense, this poem is the first poem written, that is, when you can't fully express your love for something, you can express it in this lyrical way.
The question is, doesn't this lyric feel a little funny? Don't you think you are playing with words? I believe that the author's love for Baiyun is sincere, but is this expression too naive and ridiculous? The answer is self-evident. This lyrical way is simply too handy and easy to use. It can be said that it is always tried and tested in everything, but is this lyrical way mixed with some funny ingredients?
And Han Dong and Yu Jian's enthusiasm for this poem, that kind of praise tone, added a flavor of comedy and farce, how to see how to feel that they are all performing farce!
But the most exaggerated is Han Dong's so-called "genius feat"! Is this really a genius feat? Is the feat of genius that simple? In my opinion, one of the characteristics of the ignorant is that they often like to say such excessive words, and Han Dong is such an ignorant poet. Because he is not sure what this poem is, he can only fool people with these big words! It is not illegal to fool a person, at most, it is laughed at and scolded.
I even suspect that Han Dong is Qing Wu himself. Look at how similar the writing mode of the song "Wild Goose Pagoda" he wrote in those days is to the writing mode of "Baiyun" now! Or maybe Han Dong's "Wild Goose Pagoda" is really notorious. At this time, there happened to be a poet named as his scapegoat, so Han praised this "white cloud" with no artistic level to the sky!
Who's Qing Wu? Maybe it's another Han Dong!
Beijing northwest 20 12-4-5