During this period, the essay topic of Beijing Paper of College Entrance Examination-"Guo Ping takes care of all hardware" has received unprecedented attention. However, the views of experts and candidates are not consistent. Experts believe that Beijing Paper's composition is open and easy to write. However, candidates generally find it difficult to "shine" this composition. How to get high marks or even full marks in college entrance examination composition? Luo, an expert in composition research and founder of Sunshine Oh, and Wen Youyi, general manager, made a profound analysis of this.
High-scoring compositions must be unconventional.
"Looking at the perfect college entrance examination composition, all of them are unconventional. Otherwise, even if the structure is complete and the language is beautiful, it is difficult to stand out in the college entrance examination. " Luo said that in recent years, Beijing's college entrance examination composition has formed its own routine, that is, high openness, moderate difficulty, easy incision and difficult ranking. Simply put, it's easy to write, but it's not easy to get high marks. Because this puts higher demands on the candidates' literary talent and creativity.
Take "Guo Ping does all the hardware" as an example. More than 90% of the candidates must have written an argumentative essay on sportsmanship from the perspective of the third person. No matter they hold the view of strength, development or honesty, they have not jumped out of the "normal" old road in the final analysis. In fact, it is not difficult to make a brilliant composition for the college entrance examination. Conception, angle, composition and literary talent are all breakthroughs. For example, from the perspective of writing, candidates can try to appear as "a table tennis". In the selection of materials, if we can jump out of the sports circle and mobilize historical, military and daily life materials to clarify our thinking, we will definitely make the marking teacher shine. Unfortunately, most candidates have not received professional training, so there are few flashes of inspiration in the college entrance examination.
Focus on breaking through the "creativity" barrier
Luo suggested that according to the stable characteristics of Beijing papers, Beijing candidates who are about to face the big exam should spend at least 50% of their energy on improving their literary talent and creative ability.
He said that when writing a composition, examining the topic is a key step. Take "Guo Ping does all the hardware" as an example. The three thoughts of "deserved reputation", "development is the last word" and "deliberately losing is against sportsmanship" are all negative, while the positive one is to jump out of the three positions and form its own unique comprehensive view. For example, when there is a contradiction between the three viewpoints, can we look at the problem comprehensively with the idea of "golden mean"? Extending to the selection of materials, we can't just pay attention to social phenomena: for example, key middle schools rely on "strength to speak", which also aggravates the imbalance of education. It can also be proved by historical events, such as Zheng He's voyage to the West, which not only showed his own strength, but also promoted the local economic development and realized the unity of "strength" and "development". "Before the third year of high school, if candidates can master 50 historical stories carefully, they will shine quickly when writing college entrance examination compositions." Luo said to.
In Wen Youyi's view, it is one of the important reasons why candidates are difficult to shine. Therefore, only by sticking to the theme, spreading ideas and fully mobilizing the knowledge base in the mind can we write a thick and wonderful exam-oriented composition.
Lay a good foundation for primary school composition
Wen Youyi said, just like practicing martial arts, it is necessary to squat and lay a good foundation for writing, and the primary school stage is the most critical period for laying a good foundation for writing.
"People's Chinese thinking and writing style are mostly formed in primary schools. However, because the focus of Chinese teaching in primary schools is literacy and reading, thinking training is neglected, which affects the improvement of children's Chinese literacy. " Wen Youyi said that at present, many schools and parents have misunderstandings in guiding their children's Chinese learning. For example, you can write a good composition by reading more books? According to the sunshine theory, Chinese learning is mainly divided into three stages: input, information processing and output. And information processing is the process of "thinking assembly". If children read too many books and don't sort them out, their minds will be messy and disorderly, which will lead to the failure to "output" writing and oral communication normally. After systematic and effective training, students not only have the ability to look at problems from multiple angles, but also can quickly retrieve useful information from different types of "knowledge bases". This process requires both training and writing speed. Objectively speaking, it takes two to three years for a primary school student to have the writing ability of a high school student. Unique and profound thinking will explode great energy after children enter junior high school.