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The first couplet was written by the legend named after the balcony, followed by imagination; By comparing past and present, fantasy and reality, Zhuan Xu gives a high artistic summary of the ups and downs of history and the sadness of the rise and fall of personnel, which sets the tone for the whole poem. Necklace is written in front of the real scene from ancient times to the present; Couplets end with the word "sorrow". Judging from the beginning, inheritance, transformation and combination of the metrical poem, it is still quite organized.
Difference:
On Nanjing Climbing the Phoenix Terrace was written by Li Bai imitating the brushwork of "Climbing the Yellow Crane Tower", so it is said that its artistic value is inferior. He himself said, "There can't be a good time in front of us, but Cui Hao wrote a poem on it." In addition, another poem by Li Bai is also an imitation of the Yellow Crane Tower, named Nautilus Island. On the seven-character poem, Climbing the Yellow Crane Tower is a masterpiece. The poem "Yellow Crane Tower" is a farewell, while "Climbing the Phoenix Terrace in Nanjing" is even more nostalgic. The Yellow Crane Tower has a lofty artistic conception and extends perpendicular to time and space. Full of feelings of farewell. The latter poem has a deep artistic conception, full of historical heaviness, and laments the changes of history. All the ups and downs of honor and disgrace have been buried by history. Stylistically, the previous "Climbing the Yellow Crane Tower" is a seven-character quatrain, while the latter "On Climbing Nanjing to Phoenix Terrace" is a seven-character quatrain.
Attach the original poem
Huangdenghelou
[Tang] Cui Hao
The fairy of the past has flown away by the yellow crane, leaving only an empty Yellow Crane Tower.
The yellow crane never revisited earth, there have been no long white clouds for thousands of years.
Every tree in Hanyang has become clear due to sunlight, and Nautilus Island is covered with sweet grass.
But I looked at my hometown, and the twilight was getting thicker, and the mist of sadness was filled on the river waves.
Climb the Phoenix Terrace from Nanjing.
li po
There used to be a phoenix on the phoenix platform, and the phoenix went to Taiwan, only Jiangdong returned.
Martial arts flowers were laid on deserted paths, and the number of relatives and friends in the Jin Dynasty has become a famine.
The mountains are shrouded in clouds, such as blue sky, and the river is divided into two.
There is always a traitor in power, like covering the sky, and Chang' an is depressed when he can't see it.
Both poems are based on the name of the building and closely follow the theme; Then the legend began to daydream, reminisce about the past and feel the ups and downs; Then return to the description of the real scene in front of you; Finally, on this basis, express sadness.