In my daily life and study, I made many mistakes, and the most influential one is still fresh in my memory. It was a profound lesson when I recounted my confrontation with my father.
It was a Saturday afternoon and my parents had something to do. I did my homework at home alone and went to the living room to answer a phone call. When I was packing my schoolbag at night, an accident happened: huh? Where is the first draft of my composition? It's due tomorrow! After searching for nothing in the study, I began to be a little agitated and took it out on my parents: I was just here, why did I disappear? Dad must have thrown it away as garbage! The more I think about it, the angrier I get, and the more I can't control my emotions. I simply put down my schoolbag and rushed into the living room, arguing indiscriminately with my father. Unexpectedly, my father denied it and said, "You may have put it in the wrong place. Think again and look carefully. You usually have a bad habit of misplacing things and blaming others. You should correct both your faults. " But I couldn't listen to anything at that time, and I still tried my best to make trouble with my father without reason. Dad was angry at me for being too arrogant and unreasonable. He yelled at me, and the patient persuasion just now turned into more severe criticism. Seeing that my father was really angry, I didn't dare to refute him at that time. I stormed into the room and slammed the door, and war at home came to an end.
Sitting in the room, I began to calm down and recall what happened in the afternoon and just now: doing my homework, answering the phone, and arguing indiscriminately with my father ... I thought about it over and over again, and began to remember that I took my composition to the living room when I answered the phone ... Just as I was thinking, there was a knock at the door from my father. I reluctantly opened the door. I saw dad holding it in his hand.
Look at my composition: "Is this what you are looking for?" You put it on the phone table yourself. If you don't look carefully, blame others. You must not do this next time. "Father's tone with a little blame, face is full of expectations for me to correct mistakes. My face immediately turned into a "flaming cloud", and I nodded in shame. Dad smiled and said to me, "I believe you!" " "I'm ashamed to find a crack in the ground.
As the ancients said, once you fall, you will gain wisdom. Since that lesson, I have not only got rid of the habit of putting things about, but also developed the good habit of calming down and thinking more when things happen. Even my parents praised me as if I had changed. How do they know that it was that incident that educated me and taught me a profound lesson before I made progress?
2. How to write a composition? I am walking on the road. It's gloomy. It is already late autumn, and the bleak autumn wind blows off a few yellow leaves. The wind is a little cold, which makes my indifferent heart colder ... is it because I don't work hard enough? Is it because I didn't work hard enough? Why do five submissions seem to sink into the sea and never return? My steps are heavier. Looking back on these two months, I studied hard and sought advice desperately, only to be "the first" in a certain contribution, but I was disappointed five times in a row. I began to doubt myself and whether I really have the ability to write. I hobbled towards the stone chair in the park. A gust of wind made me adjust my collar, shrink my neck, put my hands around my chest to keep warm, and continue to think and reflect! Since junior high school, I have never lost interest in writing for any reason. I like writing, I like to express my feelings in my composition, praise the deeds of great men and criticize the foolish style of writing. When writing, I will feel more carefree than ever before. I hope someone will give me affirmation, so I will submit my excellent articles to the newspaper. I thought I would be the first. I thought my own article would be well received. Is it really because I don't have this talent? Should I choose to give up? ...... "Baby, take your time and come to mom!" A kind and gentle voice came into my ear and interrupted my train of thought. I raised my drooping head. A child with a childish face stood unsteadily, and his mother stood not far from him, with her hands open and a smile on her face, repeating the sentence gently. The child took a step slowly, wobbled and stood unsteadily, and soon fell down. Her mother ran to help him up. I quickly stood up again. Mother stepped back slowly, repeating the actions and words just now. This time, the child firmly entered her arms. Every time he took a step, his mother clapped her hands until the child came to her arms, and she cried and hugged the child tightly. This short scene, less than three minutes, has shocked my heart for a long time. When a person learns to walk, it is inevitable to fall. Prove that you have taken a step forward. As long as you don't go back, don't back down, and move on, you will come to an end one day, won't you? Life is the same, bumps and bumps are inevitable, but every time you encounter difficulties, it proves that you have taken a step forward. So stick to it, no matter how hard and tired, the end of success will arrive in an instant. Although we may be bruised all over, the taste of success often covers it up. I stood up, stood up and took a generous step forward. I can do it anyway. I am the best.
3. How to write an exam-oriented composition, teachers generally review it from two aspects, on the one hand, the basic language skills, which we often say, and on the other hand, the ideas and contents of the article, which is what we say the article is written at the end. Regarding the first aspect, we usually pay attention to whether the language is fluent and vivid, whether the rhetorical devices are novel and appropriate, and whether there is a novel breakthrough in writing methods. On the other hand, you should pay more attention to whether your vision is broad, whether your ideas are unique, and whether you can break away from convention and innovate.
According to the preferences of marking teachers, their emphasis on these two aspects is different. Therefore, if you want to write a good composition, especially an exam-oriented composition, it is necessary to know your own writing advantages and the preferences of marking teachers. This composition is not an exam-oriented composition, you just need to give full play to your strengths. Strong language organization ability, fluent writing, thinking about the written sentences will show your advantages and make your literary talent shine. At the same time, students who are good at thinking from the perspective of story innovation can write articles with novel content, unique vision and positive ideas, as well as excellent works, without having to work hard on words and sentences.
So how to write a good composition and give full play to your strengths at the same time? According to my own experience, the author talks about some conventional writing methods.
First of all, let's start with students with good writing skills. This kind of students should pay more attention to the training of written language, consult dictionaries and dictionaries, know more words and understand their meanings. When writing, using these novel words, if used properly, will make the language more vivid. When reading a book, we should also pay attention to the usage of words, especially verbs and adjectives. Verbs in some details can deeply reflect the essence of things, which is very worth learning and using for reference. When you meet words you like, words you don't know and beautiful paragraphs, you should write them down so that you can imitate them when you write them. In addition, we should pay attention to the writing angle, especially the profile description, and carefully observe what unique perspectives the author starts from. For example, to write about how beautiful a person is, the conventional way is to write about eyes, hair, lips, clothes and so on. The characters are portrayed directly by line drawing, but when you are writing, you can show the beauty of the characters from the reaction of others to her, from the expression and psychological description of others, which is a very unique vision. There is also the need to pay attention to deleting annoying words, simplifying the complex, and making the text concise and not cumbersome, which requires us to ponder over the text more.
Secondly, I come from a classmate who is good at content setting. This kind of students must read a lot of books at ordinary times, no matter what the content is, they must dabble in it. Only when they know more can they broaden their horizons in writing. The story is novel and unique, plus sincere feelings. Although the language is slightly inferior, it is a reward.
Rich content will cover up some flaws and make the article more readable and attractive to readers. When reading a book, you must think more, get used to summarizing and summarizing the content of the article, and think about the author's writing background and writing purpose. After reading an article, you should always write your own thoughts, often visit some forums, read other people's comments, and have a set of ideas in your mind. Therefore, the advantages of such students are their thinking ability and habit of being diligent in thinking. In addition, with a good new story theme, we should also observe the nuances of life and feel it close to life, so as to integrate our true feelings into our own articles and be sincere. Sincere feelings can arouse the hearts of many readers.
Finally, talk about how to improve these two types of students. For the first kind of students, your language is good and your writing is good, but most of the content will be ordinary. If you don't handle it well, it will look old-fashioned. Even some students pay more attention to the choice of words in order to show their literary talent, which leads to the phenomenon that the writing is off topic. Others are good at lyric writing, such as prose and poetry, but they don't know how to start when they encounter arguments and arguments. Therefore, we should pay more attention to reading and training our thinking. You may not be able to read widely, but thinking more about a work you have read will gradually refine your thinking ability, thus making the article more meaningful and informative. Recommend such monthly magazines as Reader and Yilin. The latter students are more observant and impress readers with unique vision and sincere feelings, but they may have some skills in language and writing. Therefore, we should pay more attention to word training. For example, read some books such as classical poetry and exquisite prose, recite more and write more, and then apply them to writing, so that you can improve gradually. If you think about it after writing a paragraph, is there a concise expression that can achieve better results by replacing individual words in the sentence? Regular training in this field will definitely improve your writing. Pay more attention to the difference between written language and spoken language in life. How to express a sentence by speaking, but use words instead?
4. How to write an article is to write down what you usually see, hear, think of and personally encounter. As long as it is meaningful, it is expressed in words around a center in a certain order.
Write what's on your mind on paper. Writing down interesting things and touching things is a good composition.
First, read Chinese textbooks carefully and read extracurricular books extensively. Reading is the basis of writing.
Turn other people's things into your own things, internalize the external language into your own language, and then you can export it later. Spend some time reading the text every day, reading with expression, memorizing paragraphs and wonderful sentences.
Read it a hundred times, and its meaning is self-evident. This is the truth that "you can recite poems even if you are familiar with 300 Tang poems".
Read all kinds of books and develop good reading habits. Excerpt good chapters and paragraphs.
It is necessary to read China's classic American literature purposefully and systematically. Second, choose the right writing materials to write articles. Choosing suitable writing materials is the basis of practice.
(1) center is contained in concrete material and serves the performance center. Therefore, the selection of materials must be closely around the center and obey the needs of the center.
(2) Choose authentic materials, which should be authentic, reliable and reasonable. In our usual practice, we should choose subjects that we are familiar with or understand, and it is best to choose realistic materials that we have experienced, heard and seen personally.
Only these real materials can express inner feelings, and the articles written can be convincing, inspiring, fascinating and inspiring. (3) Select typical materials.
Choosing typical materials means choosing the materials that are most representative, can best reflect the essence and can best explain the problem, and those that can best highlight people's ideological quality and clearly reflect the spiritual outlook of things. (4) Select novel materials.
Novel material refers to fresh, lively, unique, refreshing and rewarding material. So try to choose materials that others have never written or rarely written.
Life is not a lack of novelty, but a lack of discovery. Therefore, we should observe patiently at ordinary times and pay attention to finding and looking for novel materials in our lives. Only in this way can the article be closer to life and more contemporary, and the purpose of seeking beauty with literature and refining people with literature can be achieved.
Third, carefully organize the writing materials. (1) parallel method.
In other words, the center of performance is to interrupt the continuity of time and disrupt the position of space. Around the center, it connects related life segments or events in series, selects several identical or similar materials according to the nature of things, and arranges them side by side to show the center from different angles in a detailed and concise way. (2) Contrast method.
That is, the use of mutually opposing materials, or the use of different aspects of the same thing to compare, so as to show the truth, goodness, evil, beauty and ugliness of people and things, so that the image of people and things is distinct and prominent. (3) Progressive method.
That is, around one thing, taking the development process of the thing itself and the passage of time as clues, arrange the materials step by step. This method is very common in our homework.
(4) Detailed methods. That is to say, when expressing a center, there are ways to organize the materials in detail for several similar materials.
This method can highlight the key points and make them clear. Organizing composition materials, no matter which method is adopted, should serve the performance center, meet the needs of different articles and genres, and arrange the materials in the articles reasonably.
Fourth, write the article concretely and vividly. Concrete and vivid is one of the basic requirements of exercises and the key to writing a good article.
This article infected readers with concrete and vivid images. (1) Use the total score method.
(2) Use rhetorical devices such as metaphor and parallelism to make the article concrete and vivid. (3) Write the article vividly with examples.
(4) Write the article concretely and vividly by descriptive methods. (5) Make the article concrete and vivid through comparison.
(6) Use the method of data explanation to make the article concrete and vivid. In addition to the methods mentioned above, in order to make the article concrete and vivid, we should also pay more attention to observing the things around us. Only by careful observation can we show the observed scenery concretely and vividly.
Fifth, express your true feelings. (1) Choose the material that you feel most deeply.
In practice, according to the requirements of the topic, it is easy to express the true feelings by choosing the materials that feel the deepest. (2) express true feelings with concrete things.
Without concrete things, the article has no true feelings. True feelings are generally expressed through narration, description and discussion of specific things.
(3) Words are used to make sentences accurately and realistically. The article is based on emotional people, and this "feeling" refers to true feelings.
To make the thoughts and feelings of the article true, words and sentences should be more accurate, true and appropriate. Sixth, write the beginning and end of the article.
(1) Write a good beginning As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle". An appropriate and novel beginning can not only make you write flowers, but also increase your literary talent and attract readers. (1) confessed four elements from the beginning.
That is, simply explain the time, place, people and events at the beginning. ② Cut to the chase.
That is, the article does not beat around the bush at the beginning, but directly puts out the people, things or things to be described and introduces them into the text. Directly express the author's point of view, point out the center, and guide the full text.
(3) Description of the scene at the beginning. That is to say, at the beginning of the article, people, events and scenes are described first, and the atmosphere is rendered, giving readers an immersive feeling and paving the way for setting off characters and touching scenes.
(4) Ask questions at the beginning. That is, at the beginning of the article, asking questions makes people think, thus attracting readers' attention and interest.
⑤ Flashback method. That is, at the beginning of the article, write the result of the matter first, and then write the reason and process of the matter, so as to create suspense and enhance the attraction of the article.
6. The starting method of expressing feelings. That is, express the author's personal feelings and thoughts and feelings at the beginning of the article.
⑦ Reveal the central opening method. Some articles summarize the full text at the beginning and directly point out the center of the article.
⑧ Introduce the background opening method. According to the content of the article, in addition to introducing the time and place of the incident, it also introduces the form and related situation before the incident.
The outline is always changing. If you read more, Syaraku will be fine.
5. How to write a good composition First of all, the most important thing is not to be afraid of writing badly. Be sure to practice more, then give it to the teacher for evaluation, and then modify the evaluation until you are satisfied.
I'm sure the teacher won't bother. Here are a few more points.
1. Writing means speaking with a pen. 1. Write whatever you say. 2. Tell the truth. Write whatever you say. 2. Learn to pay attention to the "content" (what to write) of things around you and decide the "form" (how to write). Writing material is the first, overwhelming. When writing, nothing to say, nothing to write, is the most worrying.
As the saying goes, "a clever woman can't cook without rice." So, how can we make the composition have something to say and something to write? There are several ways out, among which learning to observe and forming the habit of paying attention to things around you and life is the most important way.
Balzac, a great French writer, once said: "Life is nothing more than a bunch of small situations, and the greatest enthusiasm is controlled by these situations." Some people may complain that life is monotonous now, and the surroundings of life are even more boring, and there is nothing to observe and pay attention to.
Is that really the case? Life itself is a flower tube, and today's life is more colorful and full of colorful sunshine. As long as we pay attention to observation and feelings, we will find that there are many things around us that can be written; As long as we love life, pay attention to the life around us and think seriously, we will find that there are many seemingly insignificant things in life, which are really good composition materials.
In a word, there are endless contents in life. It can be said that life is full of articles.
I'm afraid of blindfolding, plugging my ears, turning a blind eye, listening but not hearing. Learning to pay attention to things around you is not an easy task, and it needs to take "three steps": the first step is to learn to follow and observe; The second step is to learn to observe directionally; The third step is to learn to observe at random.
4. Learn to follow and observe. Learn to observe at random, that is, in your own life, in the face of a colorful world, pay attention to observation at any time and place, and capture people, events and scenes in all aspects of life in time, as well as events that you accidentally see, hear and think of. Random observation, no preparation in advance, no special purpose and direction.
Therefore, this kind of observation is difficult to achieve. Paying attention to life and developing good observation habits are the highest stage of learning. Of course, it is also the goal that students should strive to achieve. Because most of the materials in the composition come from "random observation".
This requires us to keep our ears (listening), eyes (seeing), hands (touching) and hearts (thinking) no matter where we go and what we do (going to school, shopping malls, markets, visiting relatives, watching movies, traveling, visiting, etc.). In short, the scope of random observation has expanded to the extent of one's own life; Pay attention everywhere and be a person with a conscience in life; Random observation should be brought into life and become a part of life. The practice of seeking quick success through observation for the present composition should be completely abandoned.
Pay attention to learning and articles everywhere. Mr. Ye Shengtao, a famous writer, once emphasized: "It is a preparation to develop the habit of accurate observation and careful understanding in real life. If you don't write articles, you have to form this habit.
If developed, it will be of great use to writing articles. Third, pay attention to the accumulation of composition materials. Solve the problem of "not writing" in composition, learn to observe and form the habit of paying attention to the life around you. This is the premise.
On this basis, I am still learning to accumulate materials. To accumulate materials is to take notes in time and store what you have seen, heard and thought, or meaningful and interesting experiences.
Accumulating materials can strengthen memory and resist forgetting. If the material is not recorded in time, it will be blurred and forgotten over time.
The more materials are acquired and accumulated, the greater the space for optimizing and screening materials when writing. With an empty mind, there will naturally be no good materials to choose from when writing.
In addition, strengthening accumulation can gradually improve your understanding ability. With the improvement of cognitive ability, the level of composition will naturally become easier.
The best way to accumulate materials is to prepare a small notebook, record materials and store composition information. This notebook is a material library. When you need to write a composition, turn it over, look for it and give the information.
You don't have to worry about what to write when you write like this. There are many ways to accumulate composition materials, including observing the surrounding life, accumulating in one's own life, accumulating in communication with others, accumulating in reading inside and outside class, and accumulating in one's own composition.
6. Accumulate material from observation 7. Accumulate material from life 8. The specific methods of accumulating materials from reading are: (1) writing reading notes. For example: ① extract aphorisms, beautiful words and phrases, main points of the article, or record the wonderful fragments, good beginning and end of the original text (abstract reading notes).
(2) summarize the main content of the article or the subheadings of each paragraph (department) (inductive and outline reading notes). (3) Write your opinion on the characters and events in the article, or on the writing form of the article (comment on reading notes).
(4) Write out the feelings and experiences after reading (perceptual reading notes). (5) rewrite the article, or expand or supplement a part of the article, or continue to write the end of the article (imaginative reading notes).
What needs to be emphasized is that when writing reading notes, it is best to build a book by category for future reference. (2) making newspaper clippings.
Cut out what you need from the subscribed newspapers and paste it in the newspaper clippings. It's best to classify newspaper clippings and have a catalogue for easy search and use.
(3) Make reading cards. After reading a book (or an article), make a reading card, and write down the title (or article name), author, name of publishing house (or newspaper) and the main contents of the book (or article) on the card.
Never perfunctory, be sure to write carefully. After a long time, you will find yourself writing better and better, and you will gradually like writing.
6. How to write a composition that I want to escape? When the wind blows the first grain of sand in the morning, the whole world is like a TV screen. After unnatural distortion, it will fall into chaos.
I saw a dreamy color in the east, indicating the dawn, but the street lights on the road flickered and the surrounding scenery suddenly became blurred and dark. Ghost is the narrowest, and it is suspected that it is not a person.
Mountains are nothingness and trees are ethereal. All of a sudden, there were waves of consternation on the horizon in the distance, which was as boring as ringing a bell.
Ming people have three urgent things. Even the rising sun sometimes sets, not to mention people. I finally found a convenient place, and the scenery in front of me made me hesitate: I saw clouds hovering above the toilet, and from time to time several lightning bolts slipped out, surrounded by purple demons, and several ghosts appeared from time to time. And the black arms stretched out in all directions, all of them extended underground.
The shape of the city wall is even more peculiar: under the dim light, the wall keeps twisting, as if the devil of hell redesigned the toilet overnight, which is refreshing. Suddenly, my body twitched unconsciously. "No, I'm coming out soon."
I gritted my teeth and ran to the front of the toilet. This facade is not bad: I vaguely see a couplet on the door frame, "Everyone is drunk and I wake up alone, and everyone is drunk and I wake up alone", criticizing "Xanadu" sideways.
It turned out to be a clean place, and my hanging heart finally swallowed it. I reached out and pushed open the door. Suddenly, several red and black clouds floated out, and I was surrounded by various smells.
"Boy!" I secretly let out a cry. Suppressed the residual oxygen in the lungs and plunged into it.
Where is the hell on earth? But today I really saw it in a place like this! The ground is full of filth from the devil's body: some are twisted like bananas, some are shaped like cakes with cigarette butts, and some are just baked and steaming. Some have turned black and dried, and some have simply turned into black charcoal. Moreover, the toilet paper of the devil's country is scattered all over the floor, all glistening, yellow and black.
It can be said that resources are precious and will never be wasted! But there is no way out of this treasure land! No one knows the story behind the toilet paper. Be careful with every foot, one foot will let you touch the minefield, which stinks for thousands of years. I struggled with altitude sickness and strode across the minefield, but I ran into a group of "foodies" head on.
They are short, with a pair of wings, constantly hovering in the air, and some are still hovering at low altitude. Their green eyes make your hair stand on end, they are covered with black blood, and they constantly comb their messy hair with their legs. "Oh, my God!" I immediately vented my "true spirit".
In order to prevent them from coming in at the sight of cracks, I put my hand over my nose decisively and took a breath of turbid gas. This suction doesn't matter. My ph has been rising to 14, and the blood in my body suddenly boils, the internal organs keep vibrating, and the cerebral cortex also produces a * * * vibration response.
Faster and faster, more and more uncomfortable. "Oh, my God!" I shouted in my mind.
Finally, after careful consideration, I decided to give up resistance, concentrate on completing the "task" as soon as possible and then leave this hellhole. But contrary to expectations, I finally found a spacious place. The sudden scene made my blood coagulate into a piece: it was a desperate stagnant water, and the spring breeze could not blow out any fragrance. It was covered with pearl-like bubbles, and small beads turned into big ones, and some were punctured by those foodies.
There is also a yellow "gasoline" flowing around. I swallowed a mouthful of saliva, and the ph value plummeted to 1.8, and my stomach acid suddenly flooded.
Before I could control it, I finally calmed down after a while. I give up! Gave up the sacred plan.
I cursed the old man who looked after the toilet, hoping that he could come and see the situation here. Before I finished, another middle-aged man came in.
He skillfully picked up two red bricks and slammed them at the bud area. I saw that the mines under the red bricks were detonated one after another, and the yellow "shrapnel" splashed everywhere.
When everything was calm, he stood in those two palm-sized places and unfolded his masterpiece. I finally see clearly that it is not a person, but a devil without sense of responsibility.
They "revel" here unscrupulously, and then walk away and continue to do their own work. There are big bosses, students, migrant workers, unemployed people and people who are immersed in the darkness! Although my temporary insistence has brought a tragic ending, I still want to say: "The thing is that people have to stop everything, and tears flow first!" .
7. How to write the composition, * * * and the result;
Interpolation; Dialogue description;
Action description, mastering the main points of writing
For example1;
(2) After reading, define:
Write according to several aspects of things:
2;
(4) Writing
Write in azimuth order;
Language description: language description and comparison;
Order: the order in which things develop;
Flashback: first result, then reason: action description; Detailed description;
(2) Writing
Narrating in the order of things; Decentralized description; Meticulous Description and Practical Writing
(1) letters and metaphors;
3. Explanatory text
Description method: list numbers and descriptions.
(1) writer
Appearance description: concentrated description: inserting the narrative of other things into the narrative of one thing;
(3) Writing about scenery
According to the description of spatial order:
Write a scene at a fixed point;
Move and change the scenery;
The combination of fixed-point scenery writing and scene changing
8. How to write the format of the inscription? The general format of the inscription is to write a sentence below the topic, followed by a dash, and write the inscription. Generally, the words used as inscriptions are beautiful or philosophical, but they are generally refined and should not be too long. That is, "write the inscription with two spaces at the beginning, and then write a line on the right after writing"-inscription. "That is, after the composition topic. It is also a kind of inscription that a paragraph before the main text and some articles have an postscript, which is mainly summative. A good inscription can attract readers and guide them to think. Readers should be able to see through the highlights of the article and touch the pulse of emotion. Inscriptions should not only be concise, but also elegant and literary. The format of the inscription is generally to write a sentence under the title, followed by a dash. Write the word "postscript". Some articles have a postscript, which is also a kind of inscription. Write the word "postscript" in the last paragraph with a dash. Generally, the words used as inscriptions are beautiful, but the requirements are generally concise, short and philosophical. Besides, it must be about the topic. In fact, the inscription is also an eye-catching point. That is, the content of the inscription is written in the first two blanks, and after writing.