You have to go through difficulties and obstacles to succeed in doing anything. After all this, I suddenly understood this truth.
(The following is to write that thing) 2. "Only a mother is good in the world, and a child with a mother is like a baby." This song is a household name, but how many people have really experienced it? On the occasion of Mother's Day, let's have a holiday for our mother! 3. "If you don't work hard, the boss will be sad."
We should cherish the present time and study hard in order to achieve something in the future. 4. "Perseverance can open the stone."
In our life, everything we do can only be successful through unremitting efforts. 5. "Friendship is the bright light of our life."
After reading the book Charlotte's Web, I really think friendship is priceless. We must cherish it.
2. How do students quote poems in their compositions? In the famous articles selected from junior middle school Chinese textbooks published by People's Education Press, many of them are quoted from poems.
In "Spring", Zhu Ziqing quoted "Blowing the face without cold wind" in the poem "Jueju" by a monk from Zhinan to describe the softness of the spring breeze. In order to express the scientific workers' spirit of exploration, Hao Mingjian quoted "The road is long, Xiu Yuan and Xiu Yuan are Xi, and I will go up and down to seek" in Li Sao, a poet of Chu State. In "Litchi Honey", Yang Shuo wrote the beauty of litchi with only "300 lychees a day, but he didn't hesitate to grow up to be a Lingnan person" (from Su Shi's "A Unique Skill in Huizhou").
Some excellent compositions are also brilliant by quoting poems. Example 1. Today's basketball game ... our class lost the last basketball game, and this is the last chance.
I don't know how to feel the tragic feeling that "the wind is rustling and the water is cold, and the strong man is gone forever." Teacher Chen's whistle sounded, and my heart tightened: "It's time to play!" "I really appreciate Mencius' efforts from' Heaven will descend to Sri Lanka, and he must first suffer his mind, his bones and muscles, his body and skin, and his body'. From "Spring silkworms will keep spinning until they die, and candles will cry dry every night", I understand the depth of responsibility.
From the story of "How much love there is for every inch of grass, I get three spring rays", I understand the contribution that children make to their parents. From a small photo of Lu Xun, I understand the broad mind of "I recommend Xuanyuan with blood"
From The Call of Responsibility 3. Looking for the ancients in Japan and China is Tao Qian's leisure to "pick chrysanthemums under the east fence and see Nanshan leisurely"; It is the magnificence of Di Wei's "bleak autumn wind and surging waves"; It is the joy of Yi 'an's "returning to the boat at night and straying into the depths of the lotus"; Releasing Weng's "Julian Waghann Beiding Central Plains Day, Family Sacrifice Never Forgets" is a free and easy way; Looking for the past in Japan and China is the firmness of "clothes are getting wider and wider, never regret, and languish for Iraq"; "The Arctic court does not change, and the western hills steal from each other" is Du Gongbu's confidence; It is a surprise of "looking for her with thousands of Baidu, suddenly looking back". -from "Classic Plot" 4. I found a kind of pride in "the great river does not return, the waves are exhausted, and the eternal romantic figures"; "When is the moon in spring? How much do you know about the past? " I found a way to look back; "I made an appointment not to come in the middle of the night, knocked on a chess piece and fell to my death." I found a silence; "I smile at the sky from the horizontal knife, leaving two Kunlun mountains in my liver and gallbladder." I found a kind of heroism; "Clear water produces hibiscus, and carving is natural." I found a simple.
-"Pursuing Your Dreams" These paragraphs are all selected from the perfect composition of the senior high school entrance examination. It is precisely because the author makes good use of poetic sentences that the language of the article is bright and poetic, such as the refreshing and exciting smell of tea.
It also makes the author's thoughts penetrate into some classic plots and become more and more heavy. It better reflects the candidates' literary accumulation and accomplishment, giving people a refreshing feeling.
This is also the main reason why these articles can stand out from many compositions. There are many ways to add icing on the cake at the end of a poem, or to summarize the whole text to reveal the main idea; Or show the future to boost morale; Or express your feelings to enhance the appeal of the article; Or the language is implicit, making readers cover their books and daydream.
1, quoting the end of a poem, has a strong appeal and often gives readers a strong sense of regret. For example, according to the sea and heaven, at the end: "Didn't you see how the water of the Yellow River came out of the sky into the sea and never came back?" .
Have you seen the lovely hair in the bright mirror in the high room, although it is still silky black in the morning, it turns into snow at night? "Time is like running water, time is like electricity. Perhaps, only history can make the "monument without words full". Perhaps, only history can best interpret Zeng Guofan's words of his life when the sky is broken and the yellow robe is about to be added: leaning on the sky and shining on the sea, countless flowers are spent, and the heart is self-aware.
Candidates quote Li Bai's poems and Zeng Guofan's own poems as the conclusion, which further deepens the author's point of view and leaves readers with endless reflection. 2. Use the philosophical characteristics of famous poems to summarize the full text and deepen the theme.
Good poems and your good articles are icing on the cake, and people will agree with you after reading your articles. This has played a "finishing touch" role.
At the end of the junior high school Chinese textbook "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", I wrote: "I look at these energetic Hani girls and the white pears, and I can't help but think of a poem:' Pears in the Post Road are everywhere'." This ending not only describes the natural pear flower, but also describes the futile spirit of Lei Feng, which takes care of the theme in structure, deepens the theme in content and has rich implications.
Quoting poems skillfully closes the full text, which is memorable and thought-provoking. This is the charm of quoting poetry.
If the beginning and end of the article can flexibly quote poems and echo them back and forth, the effect will be better. For example, in 2003, the perfect composition "Youth Sorrow" was written like this.
Beginning: Xin Qiji once sang such a sentence: "Teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow and fall in love with the floor;" Fall in love with the floor, say worry gives new words. "Our cross-century teenagers have long tasted sadness.
This is not "arguing irrationally", but "telling the truth", which is a heavy burden for us young students every day. ..... Conclusion: But in any case, I still want to say to all the students who "don't know what to worry about" and have tasted the taste of worry: "Teenagers should understand the taste of worry, look forward to it, never forget it and never be afraid of it."
-Xin Qiji was quoted at the beginning; The ending is flexible and plays a sublimation role; Of course, when quoting poetry, it must be natural and harmonious, and never quote for the sake of quoting. In a word, clever quotations and flexible use of ancient poems can make your composition language vivid, and also show the author's profound literary accomplishment and unusual writing skills.
I hope that teachers can guide students to accumulate more famous sentences flexibly, which can not only make students' compositions shine, but also carry forward our classical culture and make ancient poetry shine today.
The composition quoted from the poem purified the soul.
Dongguan Xiaojudeng Composition School Junior 1 Liu Yuan
In the center of the campus, there is a faint book fragrance, ethereal and refreshing.
School is over. Unconsciously, the footsteps were thin and came here again. Standing proudly in front of the wind, the library is a holy land with priceless treasures, which supports people's pure land of mind.
I walked in, Ran Ran sandalwood, through the title page of the book, through the mezzanine of the bookcase, through my skin, to my every blood and nerve. Brown-red paint decoration makes the whole library echo the books here from a distance, making people want to make a cup of hot tea, sit down and expand their rich reverie.
Think about it, in the far east, there is a China. ...
The fog cleared, and a scholar stood above the castle in the distance, looking at the river in the distance and chanting his own poems. What a Su Dongpo, what a Nian Nujiao, and a good sentence: "A river never returns, a romantic figure through the ages"! Only the running water in the distance is still swift and eternal.
Running water, running water, Li Qingzhao is in a boat. When she was drunk, she strayed into the lotus root and started a pool of gulls and herons. Flying to a beautiful morning after a storm, the shutter said "Haitang is still there". She shook her head and said with a smile, "It should be green, fat, red and thin". Beautiful begonia, floating and floating, floated to the end of the Northern Song Dynasty. At this time, Li Qingzhao had only the sadness and sadness of "looking for it, being cold and clear, miserable and miserable".
Walking into the depths of the library and opening a book, I was baptized by the spirit.
The flames of the Opium War burned on the land of the Central Plains, and the Japanese invaders began to wantonly occupy and slaughter the sacred Middle Earth. 18 September 18, helpless people lost their homes. What is the fate, what is the outcome, and whether the evil is cleansed? Only the phrase "the people of China and the country were formally established" can be known.
Resist! It's not the sick man of East Asia who stands out! For home and motherland, at all costs!
In this way, I thoroughly carried out a spiritual purification. And the center of the campus, the place of spiritual purification, sandalwood, lasts forever.
4. Start to quote the composition of ancient poems or famous sayings beginning with 1. "The blade comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom is bitter and cold."
You have to go through difficulties and obstacles to succeed in doing anything. After all this, I suddenly understood this truth.
(The following is to write that thing) 2. "Only a mother is good in the world, and a child with a mother is like a baby." This song is a household name, but how many people have really experienced it? On the occasion of Mother's Day, let's have a holiday for our mother! 3. "If you don't work hard, the boss will be sad."
We should cherish the present time and study hard in order to achieve something in the future. 4. "Perseverance can open the stone."
In our life, everything we do can only be successful through unremitting efforts. 5. "Friendship is the bright light of our life."
After reading the book Charlotte's Web, I really think friendship is priceless. We must cherish it.
5. How to quote poems at the beginning of the composition to write a little happy heart?
Stepping on that old and slightly shabby alley and seeing that holly tree as low as yesterday, I smiled and felt very comfortable.
In recent days, my heart has always been a little noisy and uneasy, so I think of the alley, the tree and the past that made me comfortable.
In spring, the faint misty rain gently kissed my forehead as if the wings of an angel passed through my heart, with an indescribable meaning. I want to catch her with my hand, and it melts in my palm.
The alleyways in Suzhou always give people a sense of tranquility, especially in foggy rainy days. I walked gently on the bluestone board with an umbrella, quietly and gently, for fear of breaking the comfort in the ancient porcelain bottle.
The alleys in Suzhou are not spacious, dense and tight, like girls who are not wet behind the ears, shyly snuggling together. It really feels like a small jasper! Now most of the alleys are inhabited by old people, who have lived a leisurely and comfortable life.
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Walking in the alley, it seems to have been integrated into it. I looked at the people in the alley carefully. The walls are not high, gray, and close together. The scarlet door is as high as the wall, but it looks high there. Push open the wooden door,
With the creak of wood, a hole appeared in the sky, and elegant gardens were scattered in the hole. Walking inside, there seems to be an unspeakable cold and loneliness. This is my only love. I'm mean to anyone.
I share this quiet feeling. I stood in the middle of the yard, looking up at the sky illuminated by oil tiles, like the rain of cows' hair, like the petals scattered by fairies, emitting the unique fragrance of Jiangnan town. I took a deep sniff and tried it.
Distinguish the smell of the wind, the simple atmosphere of the earth, the gentle and pleasant drizzle, the chilling fragrance of "Biluochun" and the spreading smell of holly branches and leaves. The comfort in my heart came.
With the smell, I touched the blue wall with my hand in the drizzle, and a little comfort came to my heart. Holly is not tall, only one head taller than me. The green leaves are shiny and shiny, and they flutter back and forth with the warm wind. The drizzle falls on the leaves, and the blue leaves are bathed in the spring rain, sucking and moistening rudely.
I gradually put away my umbrella and walked under the tree. I gently carry his branches, so soft, hold him, like holding dad's hand; Is so strong, holding him, as if holding up a responsibility, moving and praising the alley.
It suddenly occurred to me that when we were young, we played games under the tree and were very happy. Wonderful music is spinning in the alley. Is it a boat girl's song? No, that's too long! Is it the singer's desire No, that's too passionate! Is Su Xiu's mother a needle in Hui Zhilan's heart? ……
My mood is dancing back and forth in the alley like this laughter. Looking around, raindrops hung on the black tiles, and Wu Yun was playing in the long cloister.
Black-and-white wall tiles, misty rain and winding alleys are quietly vented in the ancient city of Suzhou, flowing with the comfort of the soul.
I am enjoying, experiencing and singing the charm, wandering in the comfort that has come to my heart for a long time.
My alley in Suzhou is here, my holly is here, and my comfort is here. ...
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Analysis:
Bathed in the misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River, wandering in the quiet Gu Xiang ... It is as beautiful and long as the fragrance of Biluochun tea. With a delicate and keen heart and beautiful and vivid brushwork, the author painted a beautiful and moving picture of Gu Xiang in the south of the Yangtze River. light
The misty rain, the faint slate, the patchwork elegant gardens, the black-and-white wall tiles, and the rhythmic ballads reverberate in the long corridor: natural and affectionate narration, exquisite and beautiful images, giving people a refreshing feeling, a little cozy and casual.
Haunt readers' minds. The article is exquisitely conceived, the language is freely put and put, and the brushwork is skillful. However, the first few paragraphs are not smooth, the expression is not concise enough, and there are slight flaws.
6. Teach you how to quote poems in your composition (turn) and teach you how to quote poems in your composition. In the writings of ancient poets, grass often represents the poet's feelings. It can show exuberant vitality and make people admire its strong spirit, such as: "Wildfire never completely burned them, and they are tall again in the spring breeze"; It can represent vibrant spring and make people feel the vitality of beautiful spring, such as: "In February and March in Yangchun, grass and water are the same color"; You can also express sadness and sadness. When you see lush vegetation, you will think of life and express your feelings of melancholy. For example, "Every tree in Hanyang becomes clear in the water, and Nautilus Island is a nest of herbs."
We quote poems to express our feelings in our compositions, which can add icing on the cake and add a lot of color to the articles. How to use poetry in the text? I believe students will understand after reading the following examples: Example 1: In spring, everything seems to be full of vitality.
You see, the willow branches swaying in the wind, "Jasper makeup trees are high, and thousands of green tapestries hang down." I don't know who cut off the thin leaves. The spring breeze in February is like scissors. "
Beautiful! The grass that grows happily under the spring rain, "The rain in the sky is crisp, but the grass color is far away." Cool! Flowers competing to open, "Wait for the east wind, colorful is always spring."
Wonderful! When you are enjoying this beautiful scenery, there may be some naughty Mao Mao rain like cows' hair, needles, filaments and children. "Jiangnan has a lot of grass in February, and it is drizzling in spring." Strange! There is also the gentle and cool wind, and the spring rain is also on the stage by the ancient canal.
"I want apricot flowers to get wet and my face is not cold." Cool! In spring, it is impossible to have no children. Look, those children are running happily, trying to catch the butterfly, but they can't find it. "The children rushed after Huang Die and flew into the cauliflower."
Fun! Look over there, some of them are still flying kites. "The children came back from school early, so they were busy flying kites in the east wind." Music! Ex. 2: The most beautiful part of Humble Administrator's Garden is the lotus pond.
"Lotus can be picked in the south of the Yangtze River, where is the lotus leaf?" This sentence has been chanted for the lotus for countless times. The three lotus ponds in the Humble Administrator's Garden have their own strange songs, and the spacious but not empty garden scenery is built according to the lotus pond. Large tracts of clear lotus leaves are strewn at random, red and white lotus flowers are in bud, delicate and charming, and graceful in a green ocean, like a girl.
There is no more vivid description than Zhou Bangyan's "The leaves are dry and rainy, the water surface is clear and round, and the wind and the lotus blow at one stroke". Being in the lotus pond and watching dragonflies fly around reminds me of the classic sentence in Yang Wanli's Little Pond: "Xiao He just showed his sharp corner, and dragonflies have long stood on his head."
Every step is a new landscape, a portrayal of the humble administrator's garden, surrounded by lotus flowers and willow trees on three sides. Happy, I always miss you infinitely, like white clouds miss the blue sky, like grass is infatuated with the earth, like trees take root and sprout.
Once upon a time, I was so naughty and naive that I still linger in my mind ... "In February and March, grass and water were the same color." I put on bright clothes and walked leisurely among the flowers and plants, watching the fragrance of spring and feeling the scenery of "the sky is raining and the grass is near and not far"; In summer, I wear printed vest shorts to run among the small trees, stop by the noisy pond, and watch the perfect atmosphere of "trees are overgrown and grass is lush" and "leaves are endless and lotus flowers are of different colors". In autumn, the ancient canal adds a sense of calm and atmosphere. I stepped on the golden field, watching the fiery maple leaves "stop to sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are red in February flowers", listening to the touching story of fallen leaves returning to their roots and feeling the magnificence of "bleak autumn wind and rough waves"; In winter, I miss being wrapped in white, looking at the colors of heaven and earth, and feeling the magnificence of "thousands of miles frozen, Wan Li snowing". Spring is green, summer is red, autumn is golden, winter is white, and my childhood is colorful.
In the above three examples, the learned poems are properly applied to paragraphs to express the author's feelings. These poems, like beautiful pictures and close-ups, left a deep impression on readers. There is a poem that says, "How can the canal be so clear, because there is running water at the source." If you can quote the classics, you will certainly achieve wonderful articles.