At the age of sixteen, Bai Juyi, a teenager, went to Chang 'an to take the exam. Before the exam, Bai Juyi showed the examiner the exercise "Farewell to Fude Ancient Grassland". After reading it, the examiner was amazed. Within a few days, the name Bai Juyi became a household name. This time, Bai Juyi is not only famous on the list, but also famous all over the country. Even so, he continued to study hard and worked day and night, and finally became famous. Moreover, he was not proud after his success, but continued to study hard. How many students can be like Bai Juyi in our study? Some students don't want to succeed, study hard and are not diligent at all. All they can think about is how to play games and watch cartoons, and they can only be empty-handed Others get excited and arrogant day and night when they get a good grade in the exam. They can't look down on the world and study hard like Bai Juyi, but their academic performance is like a roller coaster.
Therefore, we should not only learn from Bai Juyi's excellent quality of getting good grades and not being proud, but also learn from his spirit of perseverance and hard work. Only in this way can we achieve greater success!
2. A good start to reading poetry. Recently, I read Bai Juyi's poem into Chang 'an, and I was deeply touched. At the age of sixteen, Bai Juyi, a teenager, went to Chang 'an to take the exam. Before the exam, Bai Juyi showed the examiner the exercise "Farewell to Fude Ancient Grassland", and the examiner was amazed after reading it. Within a few days, Bai Juyi became a household name. This time, he took the exam. Working hard day and night, I finally became a famous poet. Every time I read this, I think: Bai Juyi is immersed in hard work, with big blisters on his lips and tongue, and his elbows are calloused by his desk. Obviously, what a diligent spirit this is! Moreover, he was not proud after his success, but continued to study hard. How many students can be like Bai Juyi in our study? Some students don't want to succeed, study hard and are not diligent at all. All they can think about is how to play games and watch cartoons, and they can only be empty-handed Others get excited and arrogant day and night when they get a good grade in the exam. They can't look down on the world and study hard like Bai Juyi, but their academic performance is like a roller coaster. It is very unstable. Therefore, we should not only learn from Bai Juyi's excellent qualities of getting good grades and not being proud, but also learn from his perseverance and hard work. Only in this way can we achieve greater success.
3. The whole story of the ancient poetry after reading (1) quotation-around the feeling point, citing materials, the whole story of the feeling after reading. Briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text. The feeling after reading focuses on feeling, which comes from specific reading, and "quotation" is the foothold of feeling. The so-called "quotation" refers to quoting the original text around the feeling point: the material is short and can be quoted in full; The material is long, or the key words and sentences that lead to "feeling" are extracted, or the main points that lead to "feeling" are outlined. No matter which way you quote, the "quotation" should be concise, accurate and targeted. Such as the title of the book, the author, the year of writing, the original book or the abstract of the original text, etc. This part is written to explain where feelings come from and pave the way for the following discussion. In this part, we must highlight the word "Jane", and we must not describe the specific content of books and articles in large paragraphs, but simply describe the parts directly related to feelings and omit things unrelated to feelings.
(2) Discussion-analyzing materials to improve the sense of practice. Clarify the basic point of view. After introducing the content of "reading", we should make some comments on "reading". We can analyze the content of "citation" on the basis of facts; It can also be excavated from phenomenon to essence, from individual to general; It is necessary to analyze the meaningful materials and then naturally "light up" your feelings. Choose the point that you feel most deeply and express it clearly in concise sentences. Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence expresses the central point of this article. The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the text can be flexible, which can be at the beginning, at the end or in the text. Beginners of writing had better come straight to the point and write their own opinions at the beginning of the article.
(3) Connecting with reality and expanding vertically and horizontally. Put facts and reason around the basic point of view. The most taboo in writing after reading is to talk about things in general. If you can't talk about the matter, you can't go deep, and the article is too superficial. Generally speaking, it often makes reading feel lack of pertinence and can't give people a shock. Contact means close contact with reality, which can not only be related to similar phenomena in real life from one place to another, but also to the opposite problems in real life from ancient times to the present. You can focus on the overall situation, or you can start with small things. Of course, when analyzing and demonstrating with reality, we should also pay attention to turning back or echoing the "quotation" part from time to time, so that "connection" and "quotation" and "silk connection" become the main part of the argumentative paper, which is an exposition of the basic viewpoint (that is, the central viewpoint), and prove the correctness of the viewpoint by reasoning with facts, making the argument more prominent and convincing. In this process, we should pay attention to the facts.
(4) Conclusion-Summarize the full text and sublimate the sentiment. Integrating practice around basic viewpoints. A good feeling after reading should have the flavor of the times and a true feeling. To do this, we must be good at connecting with reality. This "reality" can be personal thoughts, words and deeds, experiences, or a social phenomenon. When connecting with practice, we should also pay attention to closely surrounding and serving the basic viewpoints, rather than blindly connecting and disconnecting. Knot can not only respond to the last article, but also emphasize feelings; You can also raise hopes and issue calls. No matter which way it ends, it must be integrated with the previous article. After reading, you should always be bound by "reading", quote "reading" at the beginning, counter-attack the content of "reading" from time to time in the middle, and counter-attack the content of "reading" appropriately at the end without relaxation.
The above four points are the basic ideas of writing the post-reading feeling, but this idea is not static, so we should be good at mastering it flexibly. For example, "brief the original text" usually comes before "clarify the point of view", but the order of the two can also be interchanged. Furthermore, if the facts in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, then the fourth part need not be written.
Examples of the beginning and end of reading:
Reading begins with:
1, "One chopstick is easy to fold, and ten chopsticks are held together". It's true. In the face of great difficulties, personal strength is small and insignificant, and many individuals can form strong strength and finally win.
I finished reading Robinson Crusoe with great excitement. I admire Robinson's will to survive, admire Robinson's indomitable spirit, be moved by it, be shocked by it, this is the vibration of the soul, the call of the soul.
I have been reading the book "Around the Earth in 80 Days" these days, and I was deeply attracted by this book unconsciously. As if I had just returned from an adventure, I felt nervous and strange, but also relaxed and interesting.
4. Among the books I have read, there are not many impressive ones, but Notre Dame de Paris left a deep impression on me, for nothing else, because it showed me not only the history at that time, but also the deepest soul and the deepest call in the world. ..
End of reading:
1, finished reading this book. Suddenly, I realized that every minute in my life is precious. Life is like a stream, and you will encounter different hardships. If there is no difficulty and the road is unimpeded, that kind of life will be worthless and meaningless. ...
2. "Reading a good book is like talking to a noble person". I fully believe and understand this sentence. I want to study hard, read more books and read good books with all my energy.
4. Read ancient poems, feel a glass of wine, a decade of lights in rivers and lakes, and a word from Huanggu. Every time I read this, I feel sad that I can't help clapping my hands and sighing. I have nothing to do with the journey, not to leave sadness, but to remember calmly. People always do this. When they were young, they were high-spirited. When they were old, they were lonely, like flowers all over the sky, and gathered in the blink of an eye. Let's still think carefully when we are trapped by the snow in our twilight years. Seven feet in the valley, wandering for half a life, reading all the vicissitudes of life, never forgetting. It's just that the spring breeze of peaches and plums makes good wine. A peach and plum spring breeze, ten years of rain in the rivers and lakes, two people look at each other for half a life, what friends, what peach and plum spring breeze, what mountains and waters grow, their feelings. How many decades can a person's life last? Ten years, maybe nothing, running around for ten years, maybe childish, I can't remember that I said I would struggle for ten years, maybe the philistine is trivial, maybe everything is fragrant, and many things will change.
If one day, we are scattered in the end of the world, facing the lonely lamp on a sleepless rainy night, will we still remember that cup of anodyne wine? Take this opportunity to make it friendship or love, without crying or hurting, with beautiful scenery, proud spring breeze and dancing wine. Liu Xia flowers, jade cup full of amber light, young drunk. Seeing the spring breeze of peaches and plums all over the world at the moment, I think of the young people in front of me. This is worthy of flowers and plants, worthy of ten years of night rain ~ ~ Huang Tingjian sent yellow flowers. Peach and plum spring breeze, a glass of wine, ten years of night rain. Housekeeping, but with four vertical walls, does not cure diseases; I want to study, my head is white, and apes cry over streams.
5. How to write ancient poems?
1 Make some preparations before the next game. Read through the poems first to understand the general idea of ancient poems or words. If nothing else, we must understand the central idea of poetry, because it is most important to grasp the direction of the whole reading experience. It is also easy to forget to read its source and background intensively. When writing, we should distinguish between primary and secondary, and strive to "read" the key points and "feel" the writing experience.
Secondly, choose materials. Reading is the basis of writing. Only by reading carefully can we deeply understand the content of the article, so as to grasp the key points and grasp the thoughts and feelings of the article, and then we can have some feelings. Only by studying hard can we find the connection point of reading experience, that is, the central idea of the article, that is, the sentences that point out the central idea in the article For a work, you should write about the changes in your thoughts and actions after reading it, and make a fuss about one of them.
Third, you should start with a brief introduction of the contents of the works you read, and then write your experience. It is often appropriate to summarize the original content in 3-4 sentences. Finally, you should mainly return to the works you have read. You should focus on the word "feeling" and remember to contact your real life. Most of the tips I summarized quoted the words in the original poem. First, let the marking teacher feel that this classmate's writing is closely related to the original text. Second, the writing is good and practical. Third, you can get enough words in the exam. Fourthly, the rhetorical method of quotation is also used to enhance the literariness of reading comprehension. Combined with the reality, our teacher said that no matter whether it is the senior high school entrance examination or the college entrance examination, there is a * * * similarity in high-scoring compositions-that is, sincere feelings, and combining with yourself is the best and most direct method. 4 Error-prone places: 1) The writing experience after reading is by no means a copy of the original text or a simple retelling, but should be based on the "experience" of writing. 2) It should be written with true feelings and from the bottom of my heart, not a "criticism letter" or a "guarantee letter". 3) Write unique and fresh feelings, and strive to be innovative, attracting or infecting readers.
6. When reading ancient poems, I feel very much looking forward to it. Trees are all autumn colors, and mountains are only sparkling.
The shepherd brought the calf back, hunted horses and brought birds back. Care for no acquaintances, Long song pregnant with Cai Wei.
Gao Dong. Point out the scene, a waterfront hill to the east of the village.
Of course, you can think of it as a small river. The poet crossed the bridge and landed here. Here, it is not only the commanding height in the field of vision, but also the wandering place in the poet's mind.
That's how it all started. When the sun goes down, the faint twilight in the field has been curling up on the harvested field.
Look at your eyes. Twilight is a very simple word.
This place, this time. If you have a close friend and partner, then wine is a song, and a gentle singing is a beautiful scenery.
But the poet left alone, so he was very sad. Literally speaking, there is no rain pavilion, no specialty museum, an empty and desolate place, and there is nothing to rely on when wandering, which is a metaphor for inner loneliness and hesitation.
The present scene is beautiful and affectionate. Trees near and far are yellowed by the arrival of autumn, reflecting the golden light of the sunset and showing magnificent autumn colors; The high and low peaks are deep and ethereal because of dusk, and the sunset glow, draped over them, adds grandeur ... this is a quiet color.
Shepherds drive wild cattle and sheep from time to time, and it is obviously a kind of wild interest to watch them turn around on the side of the road to chew a weed and whip it gently. The hunter rode home, and although the birds and animals hanging on the horse died, they danced with the horse's galloping ... This is the beauty of being moved.
Two pairs of beautiful workers, combining motion and static, naturally and appropriately wrote the desired scene. In the twilight, the trees and mountains are quiet, the cows, horses and animals are back, and the shepherds and hunters are back.
So, where will the poet's sentimental heart return? Respond to previous desires. It's hard not to sigh! Many beautiful thoughts and feelings in life need to be listened to with others.
However, "caring for each other and not knowing each other" is because this deep understanding of thoughts and feelings is by no means a casual acquaintance. Therefore, it can only be "Long song pregnant with Cai Wei".
A sense of frustration and helplessness is beyond words. It coincides with dusk.
The word "picking Wei", which originated from The Book of Songs and Biography of Boyi, has become a beautiful image in poetry.
7. After reading ancient poems, I have a feeling that it is difficult to walk.
Most of Li Bai's poems are romantic. However, it is hard to walk, but it describes a difficult world and a sense of depression after political setbacks.
This poem is the first in a series of poems (* * * three poems) written by the poet when he left Chang 'an for the south after being demoted. The first four sentences of the poem show a friend's deep affection for Li Bai, and he spared no expense to bid him farewell. After that, I wrote about the hardships and helplessness on the road of life, and the whole poem formed a sharp contrast.
I think this poem is not only about writing, but also a truth. Perhaps "it's good to be at home for a thousand days, but difficult to go out for a day" is the true portrayal of this poem! A friend is forever, and he won't save that little money for himself. Such people are good friends!
When we walked out of the circle surrounded by friendship and affection, we were greeted only by the biting cold wind. These ups and downs may be tempering on the road, but they will also be confusion that hinders growth. How helpless it is when you can only do things by your own feelings without the advice of your friends. ...
Li Bai, a great poet, described not only "doing", but also being a man! How difficult it is to leave the arms of friendship and affection when the feathers are not full!
Perhaps, at that time, what the poet expected was not gorgeous, but just a word of concern ... When setbacks and difficulties hit, thousands of babies were not as good as a greeting and a pair of hands, because it was not just "affection", but also encouragement and radicalization!
In fact, this also tells people that no matter what they do, they should be prepared to meet the hardships and bumps on the road! After leaving home, setbacks and difficulties seem to become commonplace! Without the warmth of home, you must learn to face it yourself, face everything and learn to put away your tears. Smile, it's no big deal!
Suffering sharpens life. In the face of difficulties, any help is useless. You can only rely on yourself, raise your sails and fight against difficulties. You think this level is too difficult because you are still weak. "Difficulties are like springs. If you are weak, he will be strong! " Don't be afraid, your family will give you strength; Don't be afraid, believe in your efforts! Everything will be settled in the end! Come on! Leaving the warm embrace, we can only walk through this rugged road with our firm hearts!
"Sometimes I ride the wind and waves, raise my muddy sails and sail in the deep sea!" Nothing is impossible as long as you work hard. No matter how long and rugged the road is in the future, as long as the sails are raised, the ship will always break through the waves and sail to the other side by its own efforts! ! !
8. With the theme of "Reading Ancient Poems", a 650-composition "Reading Ancient Poems" (Author: Zhu Peng)
"I think of heaven and earth, there is no limit, there is no end, I am alone, and my tears fall." When I read this poem for the first time, I seemed to roam in the rich world of ancient poetry, meet with ancient poetry full of philosophy, get in touch with ancient poetry full of ecstasy, and be impressed by poems full of profound meaning.
"Moonlight in the pine forest, crystal stone in the stream." When I read this poem, I had sunk into the sea of books, as if the poet Wang Wei was in front of me. I can feel the bright moonlight in the poem shining sparsely on the pine forest, and the bottom of the crystal clear river is silent at the end of peace. How quiet this scene is, it makes people feel a burst of thoughts. There is no official intrigue, no mortal sentimentality, only infinite beauty in mountain life.
"We waved goodbye and my horse kept neighing." When I read this poem, my ears seemed to echo with the sad cries of zebras. The friendship between Li Bai and his friends is so deep that even horses sing with them. The sunset entrusted him with infinite care and worry, while the floating clouds entrusted the poet with sad feelings. Friendship is deeper than ordinary people can build. Their friendship is so touching, missing and caring, just like a continuous silk thread.
"Until, holding up my cup, I asked the bright moon to bring me my shadow and let us become three people". I seem to imagine the poet Li Bai drinking alone, feeling depressed and without friends. Raise your glasses and warmly invite the Moon Shadow to drink together to dispel their worries. No one can accompany you to complain, you can only bury your inner loneliness in the deepest part of the ground, so lonely that you regard Moon Shadow as your drinking partner, but the only drinking partner Moon Shadow can't drink, and the only confidant Moon Shadow can only follow in vain. Loneliness makes him lonely and bothers him.
Where is the sunset, there is a sad fog on the river waves. I saw Cui Hao's sad face. It was dusk and the Yangtze River was choppy. Where is my home? I am like this river, going forward bravely, but I can't go back to my hometown. A strong homesickness pervaded the whole room. What kind of feeling should it be?
When I read ancient poems, I feel extremely comfortable and happy, just like a free fish in the water; Reading ancient poems, I feel my vision broadened, like birds flying in the sky; When I read ancient poems.
9. Comments on Reading an Ancient Poetry: Comments on Li Bai's Thoughts on a Quiet Night.
Ye Jingbai
The foot of my bed is shining so brightly. Is there frost already?
I looked up at the moon and looked down, feeling nostalgic.
This little poem has neither strange and novel imagination nor exquisite and gorgeous rhetoric; It only uses narrative style to write the homesickness of distant guests, but it is meaningful and intriguing, which has attracted readers so widely for thousands of years. Strangers in a foreign country will probably feel this way: just one day, in the dead of night, homesickness will inevitably ripple in my heart; What's more, it's a moonlit night, what's more, it's an autumn night with a bright moon like frost!
The white frost on the moon is clear, which is the night scene of clear autumn; Describing moonlight with frost color is also common in classical poetry. For example, in the poem Xuanpu Liang Na written by Emperor Wen of Liang Jian and Xiao Gang, "jathyapple is like autumn frost". Zhang, a poet in the Tang Dynasty who was earlier than Li Bai, wrote a bright moonlight with "frost flowing in the air" in "Moonlight on a Spring River", which gave people a three-dimensional sense, especially a wonderful idea. However, these are all used as rhetorical devices in poetry. "Is there frost already?" This poem is narrative, not figurative words, but a temporary illusion of the poet in a specific environment. Why is there such an illusion? It is not difficult to imagine that these two sentences describe the situation that the guest can't sleep at night and has a short dream for the first time. At this time, the courtyard was lonely, and the bright moonlight hit the bed through the window, bringing a cold autumn chill. At first glance, the poet was in a blur and trance, and it really seemed that the ground was covered with frost; But a closer look, the surrounding environment told him that this is not a frost mark, but a moonlight. The moonlight inevitably attracted him to look up, and a round of Juan Juan Su Ling hung in front of the window. The space in autumn night is so bright and clean! At this time, he was fully awake.
The moon in autumn is especially bright, but it is very cold. For lonely and distant travelers, it is the easiest to touch their yearning for autumn, which makes people feel depressed and the years fly by. Staring at the moon is also the easiest way to make people daydream, think of everything in their hometown and their relatives at home. Thinking, thinking, head gradually lowered, completely immersed in meditation.