1. "Rewriting Mulan's Poem" is more than 600 words long, choose 1 or 2 paragraphs to rewrite
The full text (shorter) The sighs come one after another, and Miss Mulan should The door is weaving.
When the loom stopped, the loom stopped making any noise, and only the girl could be heard sighing. Ask the girl what are you missing when you sigh like this? (Mulan replied) Girl, I don’t miss anything.
I saw the recruitment documents last night and knew that the king was recruiting a large number of soldiers. There were so many volumes of recruitment documents, and each volume had my father's name on it. My father has no grown-up son, and I, Mulan, have no brother. I am willing to buy a saddle and a horse, and from now on, I will go to the army in my father's place.
Bought a horse from the East Market, a saddle and saddle pads from the West Market, a bit and reins from the South Market, and a long whip from the North Market. I bid farewell to my parents in the morning and set off on the road, and camped by the Yellow River at night. I couldn't hear the parents calling for their daughter, but could only hear the rushing sound of the Yellow River.
Say goodbye to the Yellow River in the morning and hit the road, and arrive at the top of Black Mountain in the evening. I can't hear the voices of parents calling for their daughters, but can only hear the chirping of the horses of the Hu soldiers in Yanshan. Traveling thousands of miles to the battlefield, flying across the mountains and passes as quickly as possible.
The sound of fighting came from the cold wind in the north, and the cold moonlight reflected the soldiers' armored shirts. The soldiers went through countless life-and-death battles and returned victorious ten years later.
After returning from victory, he went to see the emperor, and the emperor sat in the palace (discussing merit and giving rewards). Mulan is the highest-ranking person who is awarded a meritorious service, and the reward she receives is more than a thousand gold.
The emperor asked Mulan what she wanted. Mulan did not want to be an official like Shangshulang. She wanted to ride a good camel and use its foot power to send me back to my hometown. When the parents heard that their daughter was back, they supported each other and went to meet her outside the city; when the elder sister heard that her sister was back, she dressed up in front of the door; when the younger brother heard that his sister was back, he was busy sharpening his knife to kill pigs and sheep.
Open the door to the east of my boudoir, sit on the bed to the west of my boudoir, take off the war robe I wore during the war, put on my old girl’s clothes, and tidy up like a dark cloud in front of the window Her soft sideburns were decorated with flowers on her forehead in front of the mirror. We went out to meet our companions who were going on the expedition together. Our companions were very surprised and said that we had been together for twelve years and we didn’t even know that Mulan was a girl.
The male rabbit's feet like to scratch and flutter around, while the female rabbit's eyes are always narrowed. When they run next to each other on the ground, how can they tell who is male and who is female? Full text (Longer one, which part you want. Take it!) Mulan Weavers Mulan is a good weaver, but today I did not hear the sound of Mulan weaving, but I heard the sound of sighing.
The father asked Mulan what she was missing and what she was missing. Mulan told her father that her daughter didn't think about anything or miss anything.
I just saw a notice from the army yesterday afternoon. Due to the invasion of the Huns, the Khan was recruiting troops on a large scale. There were many names on the announcement, including my father's.
But the father did not have a son who could go to war, and Mulan had no brother. Mulan is willing to buy a saddle and a horse to go on the expedition for her father.
The father immediately retorted: "You are a girl, and you are of marriageable age. Stay at home and let your father go. Anyway, my father will not live for many years."
Mulan said : "My father was fighting in the war when he was young. Now he is old and should have a good rest. If he goes, he will die in vain."
After Mulan's repeated persuasion, his father agreed. Father said: "Be careful, if others know that you are a woman.
But it is a crime of deceiving the emperor." Mulan was on her way to join the army. That afternoon Mulan ran around buying war supplies.
The next morning I said goodbye to my parents, mounted my horse and galloped away. In the evening, Mulan came to the Yellow River and saw the desolate scene, not only missing her family.
I couldn't hear the voices of my parents calling Mulan, I could only hear the sound of the Yellow River rolling by. I left the Yellow River in the morning and rushed to the battlefield at full speed. In the evening I arrived at the top of the Black Mountain. I didn't hear my parents calling for Mulan, but I heard the neighing of the Huns' horses at the foot of the Yan Mountain.
Mulan rushed thousands of miles to the battlefield, flying over every pass and every mountain. Finally, came to the battlefield.
In the cold air coming from the north, the sound of cunning fighting came to report the watch. When Mulan joined the army in the military camp, he maintained the mentality of a daughter. Later, Mulan decided to abandon the mentality of a daughter. She drank, laughed, and did not take a shower with those men. She was as dusty as them, heroic and hearty, and stepped into the battlefield like them. Life and death are at your feet.
When she first entered the battlefield, Mulan raised the weapon in her hand and was unable to kill the enemy. Just when he was stunned, his left hand was slashed by an enemy soldier, and blood gurgled out.
The companion raised his sword and killed the man for Mulan. Among the thousands of troops, he shouted to Mulan, there is no one on the battlefield, either he dies or you die! The pain in her hands was sharp. Mulan cried with tears and shouted at the top of her lungs, "I don't want to die, I don't want to die!" The weapon in his right hand was dancing rapidly, and wherever the cold light touched there was blood and wails. Mulan cried and cried all the way. She never knew that she would kill so many people in one go. It must not be me who killed them. I have never known them. I have never even killed a chicken since I was a child.
The war drums finally stopped, everything was dead silent, the setting sun was like blood, the battlefield was a mess, and corpses were everywhere. Mulan was so shocked by the scene in front of her that her knees became weak and she fell to her knees.
This is my first time killing someone. When the company commander asked Mulan how many people she had killed, Mulan's mind went blank.
Someone stood up and answered for Mulan, twenty-eight. "No, not that much!" Yes, he said calmly, just a lot more.
Your left hand was cut, and I was watching behind you. That crazy moment came back. Mulan's eyes were red, she endured the pain in her left hand, and fought her way out of the siege to save her life. Those who stood in my way died, and those who stood in my way were so numerous, they were like felling trees.
Mulan has a high understanding and aura about killing. Mulan and Qi competed with each other on the battlefield. Gradually, Mulan killed more and more people! Twelve years, exactly twelve years, Mulan's youth was buried here.
The Huns finally lowered their heads, and the army prepared to return to the court tomorrow, sacrificing thousands of lives just to achieve the reputation of a general. That night, the three armies were jubilant and drunk.
As for the veterans from ten years ago, there are only a dozen or so left. After Mulan received the reward, she went to see the emperor, who was sitting in the main hall.
Because of her great achievements, the emperor asked Mulan what she wanted to be and what she wanted! Mulan said that I am no longer a minister, and all I need is a thousand-mile horse to send me back to my hometown! Mulan's return to her hometown. News of Mulan's return to her hometown in splendid clothes reached her village, and the whole village was in a state of excitement. The faces of the villagers all showed unprecedented joy, and Mulan's family was even more happy.
Mulan’s parents held each other’s arms to greet her. 2. Select a part of "Mulan Poems" and rewrite 150 words
The night is particularly quiet, the bright moonlight shines on the earth, everything is so beautiful and quiet.
The stars were still twinkling in the sky as usual, and the evening wind was blowing slowly. However, during this period of time, Hua Mulan always sat by the loom and sighed constantly, making the sound of weaving. Sparse down. Hua Mulan was leaning against the loom in a daze, with many thoughts on her mind.
Late last night, a piece of military proclamation broke the tranquility of the family: there were twelve lines in the military letter, each of which urged my father to re-dress and go to war. Tears welled up in Hua Mulan's eyes. Her father was old, and Mulan had no older brother. Her younger brother was a virgin and not yet an adult, so it was her unshirkable duty to protect the family and the country.
She made up her mind to join the army on her father's behalf. Early the next morning, Hua Mulan went out to the streets to buy horses, saddles, bridles, and riding whips. After working for a long time, she prepared her battle attire, then said goodbye to her parents, disguised herself as a man, and left without looking back.
After bidding farewell to her parents in the morning, Hua Mulan stayed by the Yellow River in the evening. She could not hear the voices of her parents calling for her daughter. All she heard was the "swishing" sound of the Yellow River water. The next morning, she bid farewell to the Yellow River and stayed at the top of the Black Mountain at night.
After more than ten days of long journey, Hua Mulan finally arrived at the foot of Yanshan Mountain. She heard the neighing of the Hu soldiers and horses. Hua Mulan vowed: For the sake of her parents and the country, she must go all out to defeat the enemy! "Kill..." The battlefield was filled with artillery fire. The neighing of horses, the shouts of soldiers, the thunderous sound of horse hooves, and the "mouth-dang-dang-dang" of knives and swords resounded throughout the land. The sky was filled with yellow sand and blood. It flowed into a river, and enemy corpses were scattered all over the battlefield. Many soldiers were injured.
Hua Mulan, who has been promoted to general, led the soldiers and rushed forward. The sound of fighting came in the cold wind, and the bright moon reflected on the iron armor. Many soldiers had gone through hundreds of battles and died for the motherland.
After more than ten years of fighting, the warriors finally returned in triumph. After more than ten years of fighting, Mulan returned with the victorious army, and the emperor held a grand celebration banquet for her.
At the banquet, the emperor toasted Hua Mulan, who had outstanding military exploits: "You have made great contributions, can you be a minister?" "No!" Hua Mulan smiled and shook her head: "Serve the motherland. , This is what it should be. I don’t need to be a minister, thank you for your kindness.
But can you give me a thousand-mile horse to send me home? "The emperor looked at Hua Mulan with admiration." Well, since you say so, I will give you a thousand-mile horse. If you want to go home, I won’t force you."
Then he asked his men to bring out his favorite one from the palace. Hua Mulan was given a thousand-mile horse as a reward. Hua Mulan made fists with both hands and thanked the emperor, then mounted the horse and left. "Ta-ta-ta", Hua Mulan hurried home, the soil around her rising up.
At this time, Mulan, who was eager to return home, was so excited that she wished she could fly home immediately. The parents were overjoyed when they heard the news about Hua Mulan's return. They supported each other and staggered outside the house, staring at the city gate eagerly... "Father, mother——" Hua Mulan The parents followed the sound, and Hua Mulan was riding a horse, galloping over, waving to them.
Hua Mulan's parents were so excited that their hands were shaking. They were startled at first, and then staggered over. Hua Mulan pulled the horse, jumped off the horse impatiently, opened her arms, and hugged her father and mother tightly.
My mother touched Hua Mulan's face and said, "Lan'er, you have lost weight. You are much thinner, but are you getting more and more beautiful?" "Let's go, it's getting late. Lan'er can just go home." !" The father said as he led the horse and patted Mulan's mother on the shoulder. Hua Mulan's family and the comrades who accompanied her home talked and laughed all the way home.
Hua Mulan felt that everything was so kind and beautiful. "Sister is back, sister is back!" the younger brother cheered, and then the young brother picked up the knife and returned to the kitchen to kill pigs and sheep, busy cooking something delicious for his sister.
After returning home, Hua Mulan opened the door of the east pavilion, sat on the bed in the west pavilion, took off her shirt and put on an old dress. Looking at the old things in the room, she felt friendly and warm. Sitting down, she put a yellow flower on her forehead in front of the mirror and combed her black hair on her temples.
"Squeak—" the door opened, and Hua Mulan walked out with a smile: "I've kept everyone waiting." She said as she sat down.
"Ah?" Soldiers, you looked at me and I looked at you, dumbfounded: "I have lived on the battlefield for more than ten years, but I didn't know that you were actually a girl!" "Hahaha..." Cong Hua There were bursts of laughter from Mulan's house... 3. A description in Mulan's poem
Mulan rode a thousand-mile horse, majestic, and rushed back to her hometown in a hurry. Outside the city gate, parents supported each other to welcome their beloved daughter whom they had not seen for ten years. My sister dressed up carefully and was also in the welcoming team. The younger brother picked up a sharp kitchen knife and slaughtered the pigs and sheep, preparing to wash the dust for his sister. Mulan returned to the boudoir. Everything in the room seemed so familiar yet so strange. Put on your own clothes and regain your daughter's body. Dress up properly and look in the mirror: the person you see in the mirror is no longer the shy little girl ten years ago, but a woman who has gone through many trials and hardships! "Ten years!! I'm ten years older! It's true that 'time is not forgiving'!" Mulan felt a sense of loss in her heart. I went out to see my comrades who were traveling with me. They were all drinking and having fun. She was very surprised to see Mulan dressed in daughter's clothes. After living together with Mulan for many years, you didn't realize that Mulan was a girl? Everyone was surprised and couldn't help but sigh: Mulan is really a hero among women, admirable! !
The male rabbit’s feet are constantly crawling and scratching, while the female rabbit’s eyes are often squinted, making it easy to identify. But when the male and female rabbits run together on the ground, who can tell which is the male rabbit and which is the female rabbit? 4. Rewrite any paragraph of Mulan's poem and add details, characters, etc.
Chirp again chirp, Mulan is flying a plane, what kind of plane is she flying? Boeing 747! I asked my daughter what she was thinking about and what she was remembering. She was also thinking about it. She had no money to buy an airplane. Last night I saw a military post saying that bombers were needed. There were twelve airplanes and I couldn’t afford them. My father didn’t have much money, and Mulan didn’t have much money. Gold and silver, I am willing to buy steel and build airplanes from now on. Buy blueprints in the east market, screws in the west market, glass in the south market, and iron sheets in the north market. Once I say goodbye to my mother-in-law, I will stay in the old hangar at night, without hearing my mother-in-law calling for a girl. But I heard the iron scraping against each other. I left the hangar in the morning and went to the military camp at dusk. I didn't hear my mother-in-law calling for a girl, but I heard the general shouting hahaha. After flying the plane for thousands of miles, it didn't pass the mountain. The heat spread through the wings and the sun shone on the glass. The general was frightened to death, and the warrior's soul had flown. He flew into the emperor, who was lying on the hospital bed. He was rewarded with twelve turns and slaps in the face. The Khan asked what he wanted, but Mulan did not want to enter the cell; she was willing to drive 747 and fly back to her hometown. When the father and mother heard that their daughter was coming, they raised their machine guns; when the sister heard that my sister was coming, they raised their pistols; when the younger brother heard that his sister was coming, they sharpened their swords to the mentally retarded ones. Open the door of my plane, enter the hiding place of my plane, take off my war robe, and change Put on a flight suit, load more grenades, set up planes and guns to the outside world, and go out to lay landmines. Relatives and friends are all frightened: after twelve years of separation, Mulan has become rampant. The madman kicks on the ground, the idiot's eyes are closed, the two of them walk side by side, who can Say I'm abnormal? . 5. Choose a storyline from Mulan's poem and rewrite it into a modern text, using reasonable methods of characterizing.
Sighs came one after another, and Mulan was weaving toward the door.
The sound of the loom weaving could not be heard, only Mulan's sigh was heard. Ask Mulan what she is thinking about? Ask Mulan what she is thinking about? (Mulan replied) I'm not thinking about anything or worrying about anything.
I saw the recruitment documents last night and knew that the monarch was recruiting troops on a large scale. There were so many volumes of recruitment documents, and each volume had my father's name on it. My father had no eldest son, and Mulan (me) had no brother. Mulan was willing to go to the market to buy saddles and horses, so she began to fight in her father's place.
Purchase horse gear throughout the market. I left my parents the next morning and camped by the Yellow River that night. I couldn't hear the parents calling for their daughter, but could only hear the sound of water flowing in the Yellow River.
I left the Yellow River on the road the next morning and arrived at the top of Montenegro at night. I could not hear the voices of parents calling for their daughters, but could only hear the chirping of the horses of the Hu soldiers in Yanshan. He traveled thousands of miles to the battlefield, climbing over mountains and rivers as quickly as he could.
The sound of a watch came from the cold air in the north, and the moonlight reflected the soldiers' armor. Soldiers went through hundreds of battles, some died for their country, and some returned victorious from fighting for many years.
After returning from victory, he went to see the emperor, who was sitting in the palace (discussing merit and giving rewards). Mulan was credited with great meritorious deeds and was rewarded with more than a thousand gold coins.
The emperor asked Mulan what she wanted. Mulan said that she did not want to be a minister, but wanted to ride a thousand-mile horse and return to her hometown.
When the parents heard that their daughter was back, they supported each other and went to meet her outside the city; when the elder sister heard that her sister was back, she dressed up in front of the door; when the younger brother heard that his sister was back, he was busy sharpening his knife to kill pigs and sheep.
Every room opened the door and went in to take a look. They took off the war robes they wore during the war, put on the clothes of girls in the past, and arranged their beautiful hair in front of the window and in the mirror. Put decorations on your face. We went out to see our friends who were fighting together. They were surprised that they had been together for several years and didn't even know Mulan was a girl.
(When holding the rabbit's ears and hanging in mid-air) The male rabbit's two front legs are always moving, and the female rabbit's two eyes are always squinting, so it is easy to distinguish. Two rabbits, a male and a female, run side by side. How can you tell which rabbit is the male rabbit and which is the female rabbit? . 6. Write a 300-word essay on appreciation of Mulan’s poem
Mulan’s poem describes the story of the ancient heroine Mulan who joined the army for her father, and portrays Mulan’s vivid image and noble quality of the heroine. The style of the whole poem is clear and vivid, simple and vigorous, and it can be called an outstanding work of northern folk songs.
The poem raises questions in the reader at the beginning, and then explains the reasons why Mulan joined the army. The author does not directly describe it, but starts from Mulan’s psychological activities. While narrating, he pays attention to the character description. The readers see the image of a decisive and brave woman who dares to shoulder heavy responsibilities and is full of responsibility.
The second part of the poem describes Mulan embarking on a journey, saying that Mulan left her parents and rushed to the battlefield, which also shows the urgency of the war. Although Mulan can resolutely join the army for her father, she is still a woman after all, and she is still attached to her hometown and her parents. This highlighted her identity as a woman, which did not weaken her heroic image. On the contrary, it made her military behavior more legendary and fascinating.
Next, I wrote about the scene after Mulan returned from her meritorious service. First, it is written that Mulan met the emperor after she returned from meritorious service. However, Mulan did not care about official position or rewards. She just wanted to return to her hometown as soon as possible to reunite with her relatives. This shows that she is eager to return home. At the same time, it also shows that this heroine of commoner origin does not like fame and wealth. Good moral character.
After Mulan returned to her hometown, the poem used parallelism to describe the joy of Mulan and her family after hearing the news. Then he wrote about Mulan's return home, describing Mulan's excitement that she couldn't wait to transform back into a daughter.
On the whole, Mulan's poem expresses Mulan's hard-working, kind, innocent, simple, and brave character and her spirit of understanding righteousness, honoring her parents, being loyal to the country, and not being moved by fame and fortune. 7. Choose any scene from Mulan’s poem to describe it. T T
Early the next morning, Hua Mulan went out to the streets to buy horses, saddles, bridles, and riding whips. She was busy for a long time. , prepared the battle uniform, then said goodbye to her parents, disguised herself as a man and left without looking back. After bidding farewell to her parents in the morning, Hua Mulan stayed by the Yellow River at night. She could not hear the voices of her parents calling for her daughter. All she heard was the "swishing" sound of the Yellow River water.
The next morning, she said goodbye to the Yellow River and stayed at the top of the Black Mountain at night.
After more than ten days of long journey, Hua Mulan finally arrived at the foot of Yanshan Mountain. She heard the neighing of the Hu soldiers and horses. Hua Mulan vowed: For the sake of her parents and the country, she must go all out to defeat the enemy!
Everything was so quiet, only the neighing sound was heard, and nothing else could be heard. Mulan's heart could not calm down, and she was so excited that her heartbeat seemed to have stopped. 8. Who can help me write this? A rewritten composition of "Poetry of Mulan"
The neighing of war horses could be heard over the ancient road. A heroic female general wearing armor was vaguely visible at the front. She was waving her riding whip vigorously and running on the rugged ancient road.
This female general who is eager to return home is the famous Hua Mulan. It is said that more than ten years ago, Mulan's family received a military notice from Khan to recruit soldiers for war. The kind and filial Mulan wanted to prevent her elderly father from suffering the pain of war. Mulan, a delicate woman, decided to disguise herself as a man and join the army in place of her father. In the battle, she fought bravely and returned triumphantly. Faced with the tempting fame and wealth, Mulan remained unmoved and returned to her longed-for hometown without hesitation.
The news of Mulan's return home in fine clothes reached her village, and the whole village was in a state of excitement. The faces of the villagers showed unprecedented joy, and Mulan's family was even more happy.
Finally, this day came. Mulan’s parents held each other’s arms to welcome their daughter’s arrival, and the villagers also gathered to welcome the approaching army. The biting cold wind howled, and the two old men The hearts of the villagers and the villagers were hotter than ever. listen! A burst of horses' cries came from far and near. Suddenly, the road was filled with dust. Suddenly, a powerful horse flew out of the confusion. Hua Mulan jumped off the horse and threw herself into her mother's arms. Calling emotionally: "Mom, Lan'er is back, your Lan'er is back!" The mother stretched out her trembling hand and stroked her beloved daughter's cheek. She didn't say a word, but she broke down in tears. My father couldn't help but burst into tears. Everyone present was moved by this scene. There are colorful lanterns hanging high and the sound of firecrackers everywhere in the small village. Mulan's sister came out with a fresh make-up. Looking at the mighty general in front of her, she was really surprised and happy. "Little sister!" "Sister!" The long-lost sisters held their hands tightly.
"Sister, why don't you see my little brother?" "He is busy!" My sister pointed to the backyard mysteriously. Mulan heard the sound of sharpening knives and came to the backyard. After more than 10 years of separation, the little naughty boy of the past has grown into a handsome and strong young man. In order to cleanse his sister, he was killing pigs and sheep: "Report to General Hua, everything is ready!" Mulan looked at her younger brother with a smile on her face.
When the hall was closed, there was the sound of everyone laughing and drinking. Mulan came to her girlhood boudoir. The furnishings in the room are all the same as before, and the loom in the corner seems to be telling stories from the past. Mulan took off her shirt and put on a beautiful red dress. She sat tenderly in front of the mirror and dressed up carefully... After combing, Mulan moved lightly and came to the main room shyly. For a moment, everyone was stunned by this charming beauty. An old friend said to Mulan's father in surprise: "Dad, I didn't expect you to have such a beautiful daughter!" Mulan's father smiled heartily and said to everyone: "Look carefully, she is Mulan. "Ah!" "What?" Everyone couldn't believe their eyes. Hua Mulan, who had been with them for more than ten years, was actually a young girl! Seeing this, Mulan waved her sword and danced freely, dazzling and amazed. In addition to being amazed, everyone sighed: Mulan! Mulan! What a wonderful woman!
Since then, the story of Mulan's expedition on behalf of her father has become a legend and will be remembered for generations to come. 9. Mulan's poem rewritten as narrative 1
During this time, Mulan always sat by the loom and kept sighing, and the sound of weaving became fainter.
Hua Mulan was leaning against the loom in a daze, with many thoughts on her mind. Late last night, a piece of military proclamation broke the tranquility of the family: there were twelve lines in the military memorandum, each of which urged my father to re-dress and go to war.
Tears welled up in Hua Mulan's eyes. Her father was old, and Mulan had no older brother. Her younger brother was a virgin and not yet an adult, so it was her unshirkable duty to protect the family and the country. She made up her mind to join the army on her father's behalf.
Early the next morning, Hua Mulan went out to the streets to buy horses, saddles, bridles, and riding whips. After working for a long time, she prepared her battle attire. Then she said goodbye to her parents and disguised herself as a man. He left without looking back. After bidding farewell to her parents in the morning, Hua Mulan stayed by the Yellow River at night. She could not hear the voices of her parents calling for her daughter. All she heard was the "swishing" sound of the Yellow River water.
The next morning, she said goodbye to the Yellow River and stayed at the top of the Black Mountain again at night. After more than ten days of long journey, Hua Mulan finally arrived at the foot of Yanshan Mountain. She heard the neighing of the Hu soldiers and horses.
Hua Mulan vowed: For the sake of her parents and the country, she must go all out to defeat the enemy.