Appreciation 1. Good jokes+appreciation+appreciation+appreciation.
1 after a few days, clusters of grape-like buds suddenly appeared, like a light green dragonfly covered with branches-when it spread its wings, its thin wings were dyed dazzling silver under the mild clouds in spring. That morning, you will be awakened by a flower fragrance in your dream, which is sweet, elegant and provocative. You will find this fragrance and go to the upper terrace. As soon as your eyes shine, the whole world suddenly becomes magnificent: a tree of white snow rolls down and splashes like a waterfall. The petals like silver beads are floating slightly in the breeze, which is intoxicating and intoxicating. Appreciation: This passage is beautifully written and vividly shows the beautiful scene of acacia flowers. The author uses metaphor, personification and synaesthesia, from details to the whole. It expresses the author's love for Sophora japonica, which is infectious. The mountains in autumn are no longer thin, and the white velvet reed sea is also at low tide. Robinia pseudoacacia is dark green, paulownia is light green, Hsinchu is green, and the sprouted grass is yellow-green. It is still the light green of those old trees, and the light green of wisteria plants is as prosperous as a mountain. I walk slowly, I walk. I am green. -Appreciation of Zhang Xiaofeng's Magic Season: This passage is exquisite and beautiful. Choose typical scenery and write different levels of green. By using rhetorical devices such as personification and parallelism, Chun Lv's diversity and beauty are vividly displayed, and the author's love for spring is expressed. In all mankind, I have the right to be the first person to love you. They must see you, know you and know you. But I don't need it. Your smile soars in my dream, concrete and real. I love you and have nothing to boast about. In fact, no one can bear the love for children. -Appreciation of Zhang Xiaofeng's The First Snow: This is a beautiful, straightforward and touching speech. The author expresses the most sincere maternal love in the most plain language, which makes people move. The author also adopts a comparative method. By fashion? By the mainland? Through international? By the economy? By culture? By reputation? By strength? With human feelings? By efficiency? They seem to have many supporters, but everyone is a little vague. They are the easiest to go out freely, but they often feel a kind of free and easy loneliness. -Appreciation of Shanghainese in Yu Culture Tour: This passage shows the contradiction of Shanghainese as a group with a series of questions. Shanghai people seem to have a lot of things attached to them, but they seem to have nothing. The author expounds the free and easy loneliness of Shanghainese from many angles. With a hint of cynicism. Fish swimming in the water is like floating in the air. There are many mountains on both sides of the river, and there are many excellent bamboos in the mountains that can make paper. They are dark emerald color all year round, attracting attention. Those who are close to the water are mostly in peach blossoms and apricot blossoms. In spring, just pay attention. Where there are peach blossoms, there are people who can sell wine. In summer, they can dry their purple clothes and trousers in the sun, which can be used as their flag. They all stand out. Yellow mud walls and black tiles are always placed in the right place, which is extremely harmonious with the surrounding environment and gives people a very pleasant impression. Appreciation: They are also writing about the scenery, describing the four seasons scenery of the lake for us: fish swimming in bamboo forest, peach blossom apricot forest, summer flower coat, tile house in autumn and winter, with beautiful scenery and calm water, creating a quiet and beautiful environment.
2. The aesthetics of good words and sentences
A cluster of plum blossoms
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Fragrant fragrance permeates the cloister, streams gurgle and songs burst.
However, Tao is destiny takes a hand, and there is no chance. How many lovesickness I put aside early.
Wherever the spring mountain tears play goes, it caresses the silk string and between friends.
Looking at the distant mountain from the window has nothing to do with the clouds, but the fog contains Dan.
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Why does the west wind blow for a year and the maple leaves turn red, revealing a frosty day?
Who misses the fate of this life, who is full of wrinkles?
Who will pay for my bosom friend and play a piano and jade hand?
Why pay for the dust between the lines?
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In summer, I went to Qiu Lai. It was the Mid-Autumn Festival, so I wanted to dream and go canoeing alone.
Birds are singing outside the courtyard, leaving poems indoors to send them to the west building.
On August 15, the flowing water gurgled and the magpie bridge was new. Who will solve the worries?
Moon Jade Rabbit, a golden seagull, is happy and smiles.
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Who will it flow to after a one-night infatuation?
It's pathetic to have a drunken string. I love a song. Who do you want to play with?
Wild geese become hazy after a night, like the bright moon. Who is lingering?
Before Chai Fei's cold wind and thin shadow, there was a half sentence. Who will finish it?
3. Appreciation of beautiful sentences (100 sentences)
Example 1: "Under our feet, the waves gently kissed the rocks as if they were sleepy."
Appreciation: A verb "kiss" describes the intimate and gentle modality of the waves. Ex. 2: "The sea rages and engulfs islands far and near."
Appreciation: "Crazy", "Surge" and "Swallow" are powerful words, depicting the fearless character of the sea. Example 3: "The forest is majestic, covering the sky and the sun, and it is boundless.
The wind is like a green sea, and the night is as quiet as a solid wall. Appreciation 3: Taking "sea" and "wall" as metaphors, vast expanse and indestructible forest are written.
Through the glossary, we can get the author's love and appreciation of the forest. Example 4: "how many years have passed, the wind has turned the surface rocks on the top of the mountain into soil, which is barren and fine;" It took pains to bring seeds from the dense forest in the distance and let the rain wake them up.
The green seedlings on the slope are loved by the sun, who caresses them generously. Appreciation 4: This sentence uses anthropomorphic methods to endow the wind, rain, seedlings and sunshine with human spirituality, which makes us feel that the acquisition of life is so poetic, which is in sharp contrast with the desolation of the canyon, and naturally leads to the following.
Example 5: "The voice is as gentle as the dim moonlight and the morning mist of roses; It is as fragrant as a lover's honeyed words; Deep and gentle, like a breeze blowing through the strings; Like a fallen flower floating on the water. "Appreciation: The author captures the characteristics of clear waves and ripples in the sea, expands his imagination and uses multiple metaphors to describe several patterns of tides.
Use "moonlight dim, rose morning mist" to compare the softness of the sound of the waves; Use "lover's sweet words" to compare the sweetness of the waves; Use "falling flowers into the water" to describe the modality that the sound of the waves gradually fades away until it is silent. This multi-angle metaphor describes in detail the softness and quietness of the sea at low tide, which makes people feel as if they are in the environment.
Ex. 6: "The distant bell suddenly awakened the deep dream of the sea." Appreciation: This sentence is a turning point, which plays a connecting role in structure, and is the link between the sea from sleeping to waking and the tide from falling to rising.
Ex. 7: "I like the sea and spoil it, especially at high tide." Therefore, even if my wife and I sit quietly in the room, listening to the faint sound of the tide outside from the closed window, I feel satisfied, which is enough. "
Appreciation: the article is coordinated from beginning to end, starting from listening to the tide in the room and ending from listening to the tide in the room, which makes the article structure rigorous. Example 8: "Although the trees there are far less tall than the grass on the mountain, they can proudly declare that I am a forest!" " "Appreciation: The reason why grass is higher than trees is not because of itself, but because of the terrain; Trees rely on their own advantages. Here, the author writes the author's appreciation of the underground forest in a comparative way.
Example 9: "The big and small islands embrace and snuggle, and the mountains fall asleep quietly. The stars blinked their lazy eyelids on their heads, as if they were going to sleep. "
Appreciation: With the scenic islands, mountains and rivers and stars around the sea as the foil, the "quiet beauty" of sleeping sea is further promoted, so that readers can feel that it is a beautiful, gentle and quiet "sleeping sea". Example 10: "I like the sea and love it, especially at high tide." Appreciation: The author is outspoken, clearly expressing his praise for the great power of nature and showing the author's positive attitude towards life.
Example 9: "Because the island blocked its rotation, it kicked with its feet, pushed with its hands and bit with its teeth. Every moment is getting more and more exciting and harder. "
Appreciation: The author uses parallelism to show the violent turbulence of the sea after waking up, showing the rough and unrestrained character of the sea, which makes readers read smoothly. Example: 1 1: Sunshine doesn't like canyons. Don't canyons know that? Is sunshine fair? Don't you understand the canyon? Appreciation: The author expressed his protest against unfair sunshine with two rhetorical questions and one rhetorical question, and the word "Murphy" made people feel the author's disgust.
Example l2: At the end of the article "If you want to be Chimonanthus praecox", I wrote: "At the moment, the north wind is knocking on my window, and my Chimonanthus praecox plant is still blooming silently, silently spitting beautiful fragrance." Combine the full text and talk about your understanding of this sentence. Appreciation: "selling" means showing off, "boasting" means showing off, and "arrogance" means describing extreme arrogance. These three words were originally derogatory, but they are used in praise here, showing the spirit and extraordinary momentum of men playing drums.
Example: 13: The men who beat gongs and drums in Drum God are solid and dignified. These people who usually work hard in the mountains are full of energy and flushed. (1) They are arrogant and arrogant. (b) I saw him knocking hard and slowly, tapping hard, sometimes knocking on the edge of the drum, sometimes hitting the drum surface with his elbow, sometimes banging hard, and sometimes stroking the drum surface. Softness is like silk without bones, firmness is like shooting steel plates, chaos is like dark clouds, and uniformity is like disposal. Iron horses fly with arrows, the lotus pond is clear in the drizzle, the mountains are people, and then listen to the sound of textiles in front of the hall ... appreciation. A series of parallelism portrayed the posture and movements of drum gods vividly and magnificently.
With the help of metaphor and contrast, the variety of drum sounds is expressed, which makes readers immersive. Example 14: "The wind roared, air billow was scorching, sand and stones were flying, magma was overflowing, it suddenly became dark, and the earth seemed to be the end of the world ..." Appreciation: This is the scene describing the initial geological mutation. Although there are not many words, they are vivid and vivid, which also explains the source of the canyon.
Example 15: "You seem to be bottomless and unfathomable, and no one has seen your whole picture. Although you have precious trees and priceless wealth of nature, you are silent and indifferent-how unfair, you are a rare underground forest in the world.
Where did you fly from? What misfortune happened to you that made you sink into this dark abyss and live for so long? Appreciation: The author directly expresses his feelings face to face in the second person, and strongly expresses his concern, sympathy, injustice and infinite respect for the canyon. In the drizzle, the raindrops gathered on the wire, like the whole notes on the staff, are arranged in a string, and like crystal beads sliding between them.
4. What are the general ways to appreciate sentences?
Writing appreciation is a good way to learn Chinese. Students can write appreciation on their favorite content. A thousand readers have a thousand hamlets. Different appreciation of the same article fully shows students' different personalities and embodies that "reading is a personalized behavior". In the process of communication, students can inspire each other, collide with sparks of thinking and get inspiration. This is also conducive to improving students' interest and hobby in learning Chinese. For teachers. Through students' appreciation, we can understand their current Chinese literacy, so as to prescribe the right medicine and better cultivate and improve their Chinese literacy over time. "How can I ask you to be so clear, so that there can be flowing water?" The root of learning Chinese well lies in students, who are full of vitality in spring. Students should be actively encouraged to appreciate and think. Teachers can't replace students' thinking with their own explanations and analysis, but many students are personal preferences and are not systematic. Teachers should give guidance on methods. I have briefly summarized some methods as follows: a. Starting with conventional words, China people's surnames are of course inseparable from words. First, start with words. Chew these words and you will feel the profoundness of the motherland's language. For example, there is a mass of white flowers on the top of the tree, like a Japanese nurse. (Lao She's Jinan is like a "heap", you can't, because it is a light snow, so it is not appropriate to use "heap", while "top" describes the unique meaning of small trees after a light snow, which is light and smart, just like the metaphor behind, "like a Japanese wet nurse". B. Appreciate some special sentences, which are often related to the theme of the article and hide profound rhetorical sentences: rhetoric can better write scenery and convey feelings. For example, the whole field has become a painting embedded in a glass frame. Appreciation: The combination of egrets and paddy fields is anthropomorphic, metaphorical, vivid and harmonious, giving people a sense of beauty; Descriptive sentences: those sentences that describe the characters and express the environment often play a role in setting off the characters' personalities. For example, in summer, the wind rustles among the trees overlooking the unknown tomb, and the warm sunshine hits the grave; In winter, snow gently covers this dark land. Appreciation: With this beautiful and comfortable scenery, Tolstoy, a great writer, was buried here. It can be seen that Tolstoy, who is accompanied by nature, is as eternal as nature, thus embodying his great personality. Contradiction: seemingly contradictory, but it contains the author's profound meaning. For example, the appreciation of About Kong Yiji Really Died (Lu Xun's Kong Yiji) shows that "About" and "Really" seem to be contradictory, but in fact they are the author's ingenuity, which reveals the inevitability of Kong Yiji's tragic fate, and also reveals the cruelty of society and people's insensitivity through this character image. Make the finishing point: eyes are indispensable for painting dragons. These sentences are the eyes of the article. Examples. Suffer the pain to say that I play well in order to hope my son can make progress "(Zou Taofen's My Mom) Appreciation: From this complicated mentality, the image of a great mother who hopes her son to make progress but loves her son very much is vividly reproduced. It is also penetrating the paper to express the theme of the article with such a sentence. Conclusion: The above summary may arouse readers' association and inspire readers to think. Example: "I had a good dream that we. As tall as sorghum, with ears as long as brooms and grains as big as peanuts. A few friends are sitting under the ear of rice to enjoy the cool. " (Qu Zhihong, Zhu Dongju, Li Bin's Garden of Dreams in Yuan Longping) Appreciation: Ending with Yuan Longping's beautiful dream can not only make the article stop; It also further highlights Yuan Longping's spirit of pursuing his "dream" (ideal), higher goals and lofty ideals all his life. In addition, some epigrams and lyric sentences in the article are also worthy of attention. Note: Appreciation should be based on the overall perception of reading. Don't pick words and make sentences, take them out of context, and be divorced from the text, but fully connect with the central idea of the article, the characters and the author's thoughts and feelings. Comment context. Generally speaking, a, the idea of the article is tailor-made: some articles express the theme through clever ideas. For example, Window highlights the theme through virtual windows, which is unique in creativity. B. Unique and novel idea: What do you associate mud with? Probably few people will associate it with maternal love. In Sweet Soil, I tasted the sweetness of the soil melted with milk sugar, which led to the theme of the article. Motherly love is like that soil, broad and thick, everywhere, everywhere. This is an article with novel ideas and unique style. C. Appreciate other writing techniques: Each article has its own unique features in writing, such as seeing the big from the small and contrasting techniques. Chewing slowly is of great benefit to improving writing level. What needs to be mentioned is the appreciation of some special styles, mainly for poems and novels in literary genres. Poetry: mainly the beauty of image: what is image? Simply put, image is a meaningful image, an objective object image used to entrust subjective feelings. For example, Wang Wei's appreciation of "Living in a Mountain on an Autumn Night": "The crystal stone in the stream, the washerwoman returns to the bamboo language, and the lotus leaves are harvested in front of the fishing boat", describing the scenery of the mountain village after the autumn night rain, which is beautiful in artistic conception, but not lifeless. There is movement in silence, movement is contrast, and silence and noise are integrated. Such as vigorous pine trees, soft moonlight, gurgling springs, bamboos, violets with leaves, playful girls, fishing boats sliding among lotus leaves, etc. Can evoke visual images and draw pictures on the wall. In the layout of the scenery, the author also made ingenious arrangements, from the bright moon to the fishing boats, arranged in the direction of flowing water, creating a sense of integrity. Like an elegant ink painting, the novel mainly describes the environment and characters. A successful character image should have a real and credible typical environment, which is the historical stage of character activities. The environmental description includes the setting of the scene, the emotion moving with the scene, the emotion in the scene, the blending of the scene, the contrast of the scenery and so on. For example, in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, Cao Cao wrote poems and expressed his boldness with river views.
5. Excerpt and appreciation of good paragraphs
Needless to say, green vegetable fields, smooth stone wells, tall acacia trees and purple mulberry trees; Needless to say, cicadas are singing in the leaves, fat wasps are squatting on cauliflower, and the swift call to the son of heaven (lark) suddenly rushes to the sky from the grass. Just around the short mud wall, it has unlimited interest. Oil flies sing here and crickets play the piano here. Turning over broken bricks, sometimes I meet centipedes; There is also Mylabris. If you press your finger on its spine, it will clap its hands and spray a puff of smoke from behind. The vines of Polygonum multiflorum Thunb and Manglietia are intertwined. Manglietia has the fruit of Alternanthera philoxeroides, and Polygonum multiflorum has swollen roots. Some people say that the roots of Polygonum multiflorum Thunb are human-shaped, and they can become immortals after eating them. So I often pull them up, and I have been pulling them up constantly, and I have broken the mud wall, but I have never seen one of them like a person. If you are not afraid of thorns, you can also pick raspberries, like small coral beads, which are sour and sweet, and the color and taste are far better than mulberry.
Analysis: The articles recited in the first grade were boring at that time, but now I feel very enjoyable to read. First of all, the two "needless to say" arouse readers' interest, while "Zi Shan" is more attractive. Two "don't have to" is full of fun, so "short mud walls around" is even more fun! There are also "oil flies" and "crickets" behind, which are also full of childhood fun.
We are now walking a narrow and dangerous path, with a vast and boundless mire on the left and a vast and boundless quicksand on the right. There is a destination hidden in the fog ahead.
Appreciation: This is what rural people written by Lu Xun can't do. I like this sentence very much. He vividly described the concept of life of the country people at that time in profound and beautiful language. Lu Xun thought that rural people would not write such a "burning" punch line, and also wrote that the quality of rural people at that time was low, which laid the foundation for the later impermanence of writing.
However, it is everyone's intention to joke with impermanence, because he is frank, talkative and human, and it is also the place where he finds true friends.
Appreciation: This sentence reveals Mr. Lu Xun's admiration for impermanence, which can be seen from his respectful name "Mr. impermanence". Since even ghosts can be so human, why don't we be human? Therefore, Mr. Lu Xun also borrowed the impermanence of "valuing human feelings" to enlighten us. As a person, jurisprudence is important, but it should also be endowed with strong sympathy like Mr. impermanence. The whole article is permeated with the author's admiration and praise for the impermanence of life. First of all, I wrote about my fear of him when I was a child and compared it with my admiration for him now. I also compared Yan Luowang's stupidity with the horror of impermanence of death, highlighting the goodness of impermanence of life. The author also wants to tell us that even ghosts have such kindness. What should people do?
I refuse to put a panacea on my tongue. I can't think of "injustice" Naturally, what's the use of eating "drum pills" for more than 100 days? Still unable to break the edema, my father finally lay in bed panting. Please pay a visit to Mr. Chen Lianhe. This time it's Teba, and the ocean is ten yuan. He still wrote a prescription calmly, but he stopped using the pill of drumming skin, and the drug introduction was not very magical, so he poured it down after decocting for a long time, but he came back from the quarrel.
Brief analysis: Lu Xun studied medicine in Japan. In this paper, with his own personal experience, he profoundly exposed and analyzed the backward concept and current situation of China's medicine at that time. There is even a saying that "Chinese medicine practitioners are liars intentionally or unintentionally". With a profound medical student's conscience and insight, he hit the key point of the traditional concept of conformism, and also showed the ideological transformation process of saving lives first. In the future, China may lose a radical thought/strict ethics.
When Mr. Wang is absorbed in reading, it suits us very well. Some of them put paper armor on their nails to play with. I am a painter. I use a kind of paper called "Jingchuan Paper" to describe the Xiu Xiang of the novel one by one, just like the shadow writing when I study Chinese characters. The more books you read, the more you draw; I have never read a book, but I have gained a lot in painting. The most fragmentary are The Journey to the West's Dangkou Zhi and Xiu Xiang, both of which are very big. Later, because I needed money, I sold it to a rich classmate. His father runs a tin foil shop; It is said that I have become a shopkeeper now and will soon rise to the status of a gentleman. This thing is long gone.
Brief analysis: despite the strict instruction of Mr. Shou, the three pools are printing the moon, but they still can't stand the childishness in students' hearts. When he was absorbed in reading, he didn't find that his students were doing all kinds of things. Some of them were putting paper nails on their nails to put on a good show, while Lu Xun was absorbed in painting ... All the feelings were so naive and unforgettable, which may have caused an echo in my heart. I really don't understand myself.
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6. What are the main methods of sentence appreciation?
1. Find an analysis point 1) Rhetoric metaphor, personification (vivid image) parallelism, repetition (emphasis), 2. Expression effect 3. Content effect 4. Example of emotional effect: 1) Without cement and wooden boards, there would naturally be no tombstone. Gobi is busy hugging him: this sentence is anthropomorphic rhetoric. The word "Bao" vividly reflects the harsh environment at that time and the hopeless hope ahead. Expressed the sadness and despair of people at that time. "Without cement, without boards, there would naturally be no tombstone" uses the rhetorical device of parallelism, which highlights the indomitable spirit of the protagonist and also shows the deep sorrow and sadness of the living. Answering such questions needs to be clear and accurate, and different teachers teach them in different ways.
7. Appreciate the 20 paragraphs of the sentence and ask for more than 60 words in each paragraph.
In my dream, I often come to his grave, which looks at the sky like round eyes. There was never a sky in my dream, but I looked up and saw his smiling face with glasses. His poetic hair covers the sky and land of my China and the world. I was born, but I didn't die. I passed by in my fleeting life. I will always remember it in my heart. I hope his shadow flying in heaven will continue to fly on the earth. I also want to gaze through time and space, reach the end of the world without sky, and embrace Haizi, which will always belong to us. Appreciation: Haizi's life is short, but he becomes eternal by pursuing a purely poetic world. Choose Haizi as the theme to express his pursuit of Haizi and his poetic world. It shows that the author is related to Haizi. The success of this paper is mainly manifested in the following aspects: 1. The artistic conception is profound and heavy. On the one hand, the author has a special liking for Haizi and his poems and is good at quoting easily. The quietness, sadness and persistence in Haizi's poems enrich the connotation of the article. On the other hand, the author's eternal deep memory of Haizi and his desire and pursuit of Haizi's poetic world make him rich in imagination and ingenious in conception. Haizi is romantic, so is the author who admires Haizi. The author breaks the common structural pattern and uses rich imagination to reproduce Haizi's "life", "death" and "me" after his death. There are jumps between sections, which is also imaginative, and there are clever jumps between the lines.
8. Appreciation of good sentences in Jane Eyre is just a good sentence plus appreciation (every sentence has it). Remember to enjoy it.
I felt an inexplicable sense of freedom and victory that I had never felt before, as if I had broken the invisible bondage and finally gained unexpected freedom. Thanks to Jane. Love gave vent to the injustice she had suffered in the past nine years and made her taste revenge for the first time. Freedom and Victory vividly describes Jane's temporary relaxation and happiness. 2. but if you can't avoid it, you must endure it. You can't stand what you are destined to stand. Appreciation: Helen, Jane's beloved friend, said a seemingly ordinary but reasonable sentence to her. Facing the injustice of life, we should learn to be patient, stand the test, and show courage and perseverance to tide over the difficulties. 3. Flowers stick out from under the green leaves, including Saussurea involucrata, crocus sativus, purple primrose and pansy with golden eyes. Now, we spend half a day every Thursday afternoon. You will also find more lovely flowers under the fence beside the path. Appreciation: Jane Eyre adapted to school life and began to discover the beauty of life slowly. "Lovely flowers are blooming." This became the turning point of Jane Eyre's character. If God gives me wealth and beauty, I will make it as hard for you to leave me as it is for me to leave you now. God didn't do this, but our souls are equal, just like the two of us crossed. Appreciation: People should be equal. No matter a billionaire or a street beggar, the soul is equal! What matters is not the illusory wealth status and family background, but whether we have done anything in this world and regretted it. "When our souls pass by the grave and stand in front of God's heel", what we show is no longer the prosperous and ethereal things, but our inner heart, our quality and our personality, which have nothing to do with our wealth, dignity, beauty and ugliness and height. You have no money. "Appreciation: People should be equal. No matter a billionaire or a street beggar, the soul is equal! What matters is not the illusory wealth status and family background, but whether we have done anything in this world and have regretted it. " When our souls pass by the grave and stand in front of God's heel, "what we show is no longer prosperous and ethereal things, but our heart, our quality and our personality, which have nothing to do with our wealth, dignity, beauty and ugliness and height."