Keywords: 300 words in the third grade of primary school
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This composition is about 300 words in grade three of primary school. The topic is: I want to write a poem in the new semester. Everyone is welcome to contribute. In the new semester, I wrote a poem with a score of red 100 as rhetoric, with Lang Lang's reading voice as the text and diligence and modesty as the topic. It must be as colorful as the rising sun, bright and dazzling, and it travels through the busy city every day. Dear teacher, dear parents, hug your chest. Teacher's comment: The little author tried to write a poem in the new semester. The first half of this poem is well written. "Take scarlet 100 as the rhetoric, Lang Lang's reading sound as the text and diligence and modesty as the title." Although these sentences are not poetic, they are relatively smooth to read and basically meet the format requirements of poetry. "Walking through the busy city every day, my dear teacher and dear parents hug my chest." These last words are not like poetry. What does the little author want to express? What needs to be reminded is that poetry itself is very demanding, that is, the sentences are neat, profound and poetic. This paper is still far from these requirements. I hope the little author will continue to work hard, write more and practice more in the future. (Xue Le China: Teacher Lin Yaoji) 22: 53: 00, August 30, 2009