1. In terms of meter, there are many discrepancies in this poem. In particular, the first to sixth words in the fourth sentence of the supplementary poem are all muffled, which completely loses the aesthetic feeling of rhythmic ups and downs.
The metrical rules of the Seven-Unique Flat and Uneven Style are as follows, please refer to them:
Starting form (regular style):
Tong Ping Ping Ping Pian Ping (rhyme),
Tong Ping Tong Pian Ping (rhyme).
ordinary and flat,
ordinary and flat and flat (rhyme).
the first sentence can also be used as "smooth and even".
stand-up (regular pattern):
ordinary and flat (rhyme),
ordinary and flat and flat (rhyme).
ordinary and flat,
ordinary and flat (rhyme).
the first sentence can also be used as "plain and flat".
2. Metric poetry can only express things and aspirations by "connecting the past with the future", and flowery words and empty words have lost the meaning of the poem itself.
3. We should pay more attention to the multiple words in the poem to avoid "making heavy mistakes".
Generally speaking, learning metrical poetry starts with metrical poetry, and you can search for a simple introduction to metrical poetry from Baidu Library.