1, it will be fine after the rain.
Excerpt from the original:
I am a drop of water,
Falling with the wind,
From the clouds,
On earth.
Lost in the fog, the boat and the car are tired.
Appreciate:
The author compares himself to a drop of water, with concise image, profound meaning and harmonious rhythm.
2. Waiting for you in the rain.
Excerpt from the original:
Waiting for you in the rain, waiting for the rainbow in the rain,
The cicada sinks and the frog rises,
A pool of red lotus is like a red flame, in the rain,
It doesn't matter whether you come or not, but it feels like,
Every lotus is like you.
Appreciate:
This poem describes a teenager's anxious and complicated mentality of waiting for a beautiful and innocent girl in the rain, and his feelings are sincere and warm.
3. "Don't rain".
Excerpt from the original:
I really want to open the door,
Running towards you,
Crying on your shoulder: "No way, really no way!" "
Appreciate:
The last word of Shu Ting's poem rhymes, which is fluent, natural and catchy, giving people beautiful rhythm and rhyme. Secondly, in terms of content, poetry should be the most concentrated and concise compared with other styles. I think condensation and condensation are mainly embodied in two aspects: emotion and language. What flows from the bottom of my heart, especially what erupts, is naturally a good poem. The reason why Shu Ting's poems are thrilling is the eruption of concentrated true feelings.