Topic: Learning to write poetry criticism
Time: September 8th, 2XX, the morning, the second class
Location: Changzhou No.1 Middle School, Class 1, Senior Two, Teaching Reform
Instructor: Cheng Daijun
Objectives:
1. Familiarize yourself with Three Poems, the first lesson of Chinese Reader.
2. Master the writing form of poetry criticism.
Process:
1. Clear tasks: learning to write poetry criticism
2. Method guidance:
1. Three forms of poetry criticism: guided reading, appreciation, and creation (with elements of content, form, and self increasing)
2. Examples:
(1) Reading 《
(2) Example 1: Change poetry from poetry, such as the rewriting of Meng. It can also be used in prose form.
the millet grows in rows, and the sorghum sprouts. It is difficult to walk away from home, and my heart is bored and chaotic. Those who know me know that I have worries, and those who don't know me when I want something. God, why do you treat me like this? The millet grows in rows, and the sorghum pulls out the ears. It's hard to walk away from home, and my heart is in a daze. Those who know me know that I have worries, and those who don't know me when I want something. God, why do you treat me like this? The millet grows in rows, and the sorghum bears grains. It is difficult to walk away from home, and my heart is depressed. Those who know me know that I have worries, and those who don't know me when I want something. God, why do you treat me like this?
(3) Example 2: Heavy Loneliness (creative)
I dare not write Millet Separation because the title is too big and a famous saying is quoted everywhere. I have heard those two sentences before I heard the Book of Songs, but I feel that they are just like tongue twisters, and the meaning is still somewhat mysterious. Even if I don't understand them, I will still like them.
when he was treating vultures, the following notes told me that it was a courtier who missed his motherland, and I couldn't feel it for so long, only saw the time that passed silently in loneliness.
where did you come from, and I don't know where you are going. It's no different whether you walked in one place for countless times or hurried through different places. You're just a passer-by. Maybe you're not walking at all, but everything around you is changing, or your years are slipping away unconsciously.
you can't get old quickly when you meet something for no reason.
plants close to the earth take root and grow leaves, and as a result, they mature a little and get old a little. Time in The Book of Songs is always changing in a seemingly similar cycle, which won't make people feel that the pain is slowly saturated with bitterness.
So what if you are happy and old? It's just an inevitable experience of all things in the world. What's sad is to experience it alone.
da da dad, I am worried; He who doesn't know me is what I want. It took a long time to understand the weight of this sentence, but he didn't dare to say that he understood it. Such an understanding requires too much experience, but he is afraid of that experience.
Maybe it's too fragile to be exposed. You always need to prove your existence on others, and you are afraid of your own. You can't leave any trace when you rush past.
how many people can understand your mind? "Things between the spleen and diaphragm can't look at each other", and you are born alone. The rest of the time, you have to perform in misunderstanding and play games that deceive yourself. Why ask who you are and who others are?
4. Example 3: Reading "Millet Separation" (creative)
The text/idle clouds have no intention of passing through the former national capital
Looking at the remnants of the west wind
Zhoujiacheng is buried in ruins
Weeds are flourishing. The desolation
arouses your endless sadness
You wander around aimlessly
Piles of graves pass by you in a trance
The autumn wind is strong
You faintly hear the sobbing coming from a distance
Your steps are decadent
Your heart is shaking and helpless
You can't tell everything in front of you
Your feet can no longer support your sad heart < P > I can clearly see that your eyes are full of tears.
Find a tombstone and sit down.
You said to yourself.
I can't help but think of many, many words
Liwang's villain posture
Zhao Gong's helplessness
You Wang's fatuity and helplessness
The savage wolf's cruelty
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