There is a kind of writing material with cultural factors and rich cultural background. This kind of material concentrates classical artistic conception, flashing ancient poems, well-known historical celebrities and exquisite classical Chinese sentence patterns, and goes straight to a theme from the tunnel of history, the sky of literature, the folk market, the plank road of language and the rhythm of poetry, that is, the combination of them forms a strong atmosphere: cultural atmosphere, which makes the fragrance of culture evaporate into a gorgeous auspicious cloud, become an organic carrier combined with personal thoughts and become the writing of candidates. Such materials are easy to find in textbooks, which is another trick to defeat the enemy in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.
In 2009, the article "This is Happiness" in Zhejiang's perfect score essay wrote:
Tao Yuanming's "Picking chrysanthemums under the hedge, leisurely seeing Nanshan" is a kind of happiness, Li Bai's "Long Wind and Waves, and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea" is a kind of happiness, Wen Tianxiang's "Immortality since ancient times, Danxin as a history book" is a kind of happiness, and Fan Zhongyan's "Worrying about the world first, making the world happy afterwards" is a kind of happiness ... Since we can't have exuberant happiness,
This exquisite parallelism quotation is full of classical poetry, just like bundles of fragrant and gorgeous flowers, which makes the marking teacher shine at the moment and highlights the various meanings of happiness. The light of poetry is suspended above the words, brilliant into a cloud of literary talent, which makes the tired and heavy marking suddenly excited. This candidate is very rich in literature. He took materials from ancient and modern literary works and combined with related happy poems to express new themes and new views on happiness.
Thinking about how to make the composition have cultural flavor.
First, pay attention to cultural heritage and have a superior geographical position.
Please take a look at the clip of "A Scene that Shocks the Mind" from the examinee in Chengdu, Sichuan in 2008:
Our cultural heritage is the witness of history. The Terracotta Warriors and Horses of Qin Shihuang stand proudly up to now, and the waves of the Sui Grand Canal are still beating on the banks of the Millennium ... Meng Jiangnv's cry is sad and piercing, and the tracker's song seems to still linger in his ears. After thousands of years of ups and downs, prosperity, humiliation and indignation, these cultural heritages have burned their bumpy hearts and presented their solemnity to the world. The sword shadow has gone, Long song's sad cry has stopped, and his lofty sentiments have disappeared ... Everything follows the river of no return, and only the pines and cypresses in the Millennium whisper to the breeze.
This perfect work combines elements of cultural heritage such as the Terracotta Warriors and Horses of Qin Shihuang, the Grand Canal of Sui Dynasty, Meng Jiangnv and the disabled. From the perspective that cultural heritage is the witness of history, it shows the inheritance of cultural heritage, appeals to people to save our cultural heritage, and shows that China culture needs to go global, and we must protect it well, with strong arguments and fluent language.
Second, skillfully into the text, sound, painting, calligraphy, surrounded by colorful.
Wen Yin's calligraphy and painting, as a representative element of China's traditional culture, integrates literature, music, calligraphy and painting, which will make the article glow with colorful brilliance and attract people's attention.
Please take a look at the clip from the 2009 Henan examinee's "Master's Covenant":
Chinese and foreign cultures, after China opened its doors, collided with a string of sparks of wisdom. Yu had a date with Tagore, traveled through time and space, and had close contact. Their meeting may be arranged by God, or it may be a coincidence of Tathagata. I took my masterpiece "Cultural Journey", Tagore took his own "Birds", and two literary giants met under a big banyan tree. A man who seeks the cultural soul and secret of life through scenery has explored the historical fate of China culture and the personality of China literati. The other gives the people of the world a drop of dew and a cloud of eternal feelings, expressing the spirit of freedom and love and revealing the beauty of harmony. Two different cultures suddenly collided into a gorgeous rosy cloud on the horizon.
The author's rational thinking on Chinese and foreign cultures is rich in imagination and extraordinary in bearing. In this clip, the styles of Chinese and foreign prose masters are briefly evaluated, indicating that every culture will become the most precious spiritual wealth of the country and even mankind. After experiencing the baptism of culture, we will smile and hold up all the cultural classics, whether traditional or modern. A true literary lover will love all the cultural treasures in the world. Open your heart and we will have the whole world.
Third, describe the scenic spots like a dream.
Any area with ornamental, cultural and scientific value, concentrated natural and cultural scenery, beautiful environment and a certain scale and scope for people to visit, rest or carry out scientific and cultural activities is called a scenic spot. Maybe you have climbed Mount Tai, and all the other mountains look short under the sky. Maybe you have visited the beautiful Lijiang River, maybe you have been to a foreign country with different scenery; Maybe you have noticed the skyline of the city, maybe you have seen the "Xanadu" like a paradise, maybe you have enjoyed the beauty of the old people melting into the sunset in the evening ... These can be written in your composition, creating a beautiful artistic conception, attracting people, and dressing your composition like a dream and a fairy.
Please look at the fragment of Tianjin examinee's "Confessing the Great Wall" in 2009:
I stood on the wide wall, daydreaming heartily; Under the vast sky, the ancient city wall stretches between the mountains and peaks, and it is like a black dragon lying on the land of China. Some tall castles look up at the sky like warriors rising in Ran Ran; Some are like brooding giants, staring at the sky silently. This greatness, this heroism, is a record of life and a witness of history. I stood on the solid gray wall and shouted from my heart: Great Wall, hello!
The article diligently pursues a unique cultural attraction with national spirit-the Great Wall, an ancient and deep symbol of China, and deeply understands the true feelings of China people. The atmosphere is heavy, showing strength, and the heavy lyricism of singing and sighing runs through the whole text.
Pay attention to the use of cultural materials.
Pay attention to polymerization. In the composition, to show the cultural connotation of the composition, we might as well aggregate several fragments, several materials and several poems related to a topic to show a theme related to the topic, which requires us to constantly learn and accumulate and prepare enough materials related to classical culture.
Pay attention to migration. When writing, you can transfer according to your actual needs. For example, we can adapt the endings of classic historical stories, add some stories that are contrary to history, and make the works full. We can also use or imitate classical poems in the composition to increase the literary grace of the composition.
Pay attention to infiltration. In order to make our composition profound in literature and art, one of them is to infiltrate the cultural atmosphere, "stand on the shoulders of giants", that is, to repeatedly render the cultural atmosphere between the lines, instead of directly quoting a lot, otherwise it will appear deliberately artificial and read stiffly.
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Apricot flowers and spring rain in the south of the Yangtze River. Liuge, maybe that piece of soil is in it. Whether it is Chixian, Shenzhou or China, it is changing. As long as Cang Xie's inspiration persists and his beautiful China is not old, his image and magnetic centripetal force will inevitably grow. Because a square character is a world. At the beginning, there were words, so the memories and hopes of his ancestors were pinned in the hearts of Han people. For example, write a word "rain" out of thin air, dribs and drabs, torrential rain, all love and rain will be in it. What can be satisfied with this visual beauty? Jin Mu, like fire and water, has become the world by itself. Entering the "Rain" Department, the ancient China is ever-changing. Beautiful frost, snow, clouds, terrible thunder and lightning, except God's good temper and bad temper, nothing was shown, and the meteorological station took pains to read an encyclopedia that laymen could not understand.