Having a good mood can turn inferiority into self-confidence;
Having a good mood can turn smallness into greatness;
Having a good mood can turn sadness into joy;
Having a good mood can turn decay into magic. ...
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The stars in the sky are covered by the bright moon; The grass on the ground bowed its head and sighed because of the towering trees; The trickle cries alone because of the vast sea; The lonely ugly duckling is secretly sad because of the beautiful white swan ... Is life really so sad? No, I don't believe it! The light of stars can surpass the moon, grass can grow into towering trees, streams can flow into the sea, and ugly ducklings can turn into white swans ... Please look at the world around you with a good mood, and you will find that "plum blossoms have their own charm, and red apricots have their own beauty".
It can be seen that the key to turning inferiority into self-confidence and smallness into greatness lies in whether you have a good mood.
The story of Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai makes people cry. These stories make people cry and have sad endings. When people are immersed in Liang Zhu's sadness, who can really understand the essence of this story? Tears dried up, can you save Liang Zhu's life? No, I don't believe it! Please taste this love classic with a good mood, and you will find that the ending is so beautiful, and you will inevitably sigh, "If two feelings last for a long time, sooner or later."
It can be seen that whether you can turn grief into joy depends on whether you have a good mood.
Famous writer Helen? Keller, instead of caring for this girl, God made her suffer many hardships-deafness, blindness and inability to speak. Faced with such a fate, will she give up the pursuit of life? No, I don't believe it! Although the misfortune of life has cast a thick shadow on her life, Forget My Happiness has also cast her iron will. Please face life with a good mood, and your life will be full of miracles everywhere.
It can be seen that whether you can turn decay into magic depends on whether you have a good mood.
Please have a good mood and let it pass every minute of your life; Please have a good mood and let it help you treat every setback in your life well; Please have a good mood and let you live a wonderful life under the bright starry sky!
Comments:
This is an excellent and successful exam composition. Its subtlety lies in its ingenious conception, and its success lies in the author's unique perception of life and strong language control ability.
Ingenious conception and rigorous structure. The opening is in the form of an inscription, suggesting the main idea of the article. The main part is composed of three levels, the content of each level echoes the inscription one by one, and all three levels are divided into sections with concise short sentences, which not only summarizes the content of this level, but also forms a symmetrical beauty in structure between levels.
The content is substantial and the viewpoint is unique. Although the materials are not novel, the author's unique understanding of life makes this article full of optimistic themes, especially the new interpretation of Liang Zhu, which is even more refreshing.
The language is fluent and the writing is vivid. The language of this article lies in three groups of "three". The three groups of parallelism add a bit of momentum to the article; Three groups of questions appear repeatedly at intervals to promote the development of the plot; "I don't believe it" three groups firmly expressed the author's point of view.
(liyang city Shen Pei)
Go on the road with a good mood
I don't have any gems or wealth in my bag. I just go with a good mood.
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I threw the food bar and cup aside. I couldn't eat or drink. I pulled out my dagger. I peeped in four directions in vain.
After the second model came down, my mood was terrible. When the teacher reported my name from high to low for a long time, I heard the teacher's helplessness. I was still in the top 20 in my class, but I slipped to 32 at once. I was really confused. I suddenly felt afraid. I was ashamed to look into the teacher's eyes. Looking at my mother's locked eyebrows, my heart ached faintly. I know that the threshold of colleges and universities is very high, and I also know what it means to me not to cross this threshold and what it means to such an ordinary worker's family. Every time I think about it, I can't help crying. ...
I want to cross the Yellow River, but ice will block the ferry and Taihang Mountain will be covered with snow.
The countdown on the blackboard is getting more and more dazzling, and I know it may be a threat to me. After dinner, my father called me to his side and stroked my head with rough hands. He didn't say a word, but I know his touch contains too much. I didn't cry. I know men don't flick when they cry. Only I can save myself. I wrote a damn book that night. Since then, I have studied hard, and I have studied hard in Chinese, English and politics, and I have also worked hard on science topics. However, repeated blows made me begin to doubt the idiom "Heaven rewards diligence". That night, I was walking on the road and cried sadly. Will heaven kill me?
One day, I will ride the wind and waves, raise the Yun Fan and cross the sea.
I still study hard, but I don't listen to anything outside the window. But once the teacher's words changed me. Only then did I find that my heart was actually too utilitarian. Is my study career just to cross the threshold again and again? As long as I work hard and try my best, no matter what the result is, isn't a perfect process great?
I'm calm! I want to go with a calm heart!
I sang until it was difficult to walk. I saw an ill-fated Li Bai, as if I heard his warning.
Now I am sitting in the examination room and my father is standing outside the school gate. I know my father can understand my heart, and I will try my best, no matter what the result is. I swear with a good mood.
Comments:
This article is novel in conception and far-reaching. The inscription "I don't have gems or wealth in my bag, I just go on my way with a good mood" not only closely follows the theme, but also lays the emotional tone for the following content. The structure of this paper is ingenious, and the poems in Li Bai's Difficult to Go are skillfully selected in the form of parallel subtitles. As a subtitle, every two sentences organize materials from three aspects, which are clear, natural and fluent, artistic and lyrical, and brilliant in literary talent. At the same time, the quoted poems and words are also quite consistent and integrated. The thoughts of "frustration and hesitation", "disappointment and confusion" and "positive optimism" of young authors are written respectively, and the profound mental journey of young authors is written. The process of mood change is informative and true, as if it flows naturally from the bottom of my heart, leaving a deep impression on people. The article is eloquent and eloquent, which makes people deeply moved. They feel how difficult the world is, how difficult life is, the greatness of family ties, and the sincerity of understanding. They are heartbroken by the change of young authors' mood, broad mind and optimistic attitude. This piece of paper is neat and tidy, beautifully written, fluent in writing, in one go, with no traces of axe chisel, and natural. The language is unpretentious, fresh and natural, but there is no lack of washing and training, and there is a spark of wisdom everywhere, permeating the philosophy of life. At the end of the topic, you should "calmly go to the ground" and "swear happily", giving people a sense of fit. The article is swaying, ups and downs, and full of emotions. Looking at the complete text makes people ups and downs, with endless aftertaste.
The heart is bigger than the sky
The historical sky, the cultivation of slash and burn, the beginning of chaos, the wind and thunder everywhere, watching heroes come forth in large numbers through the ages! Let the long river of history worry about removing the turbid water, present the truth to us, tell the story that the heart is bigger than the sky, and tell the soul of China's five thousand-year rule ...-Inscription.
I once complained about the buzzing mosquitoes, but I forgot the willow tree that rejuvenated; I once complained about the hot summer, but forgot to draw water; I used to complain about the flowers in front of the window, but I forgot the golden wheat waves. Is the pace of time so hasty that you forget to change your perspective? Oh, it's because we are not in a good mood and can't experience life with our heart!
"Laugh and go out, I am Artemisia." Li Taibai, you are really a poet. "A thousand years' reputation, ten thousand years' reputation can be washed away by what benefits, when you die and leave?" Poet, you want to enter the vast wilderness and dream of crossing utopia. However, without wings and ladders, there are many obstacles and stumbling blocks. Poet, you can "and Dabai Mountain, to the west, is still only the path of birds, you can cross Emei Mountain!" " In the gale, you will blow your white heart on the treetops, and your face will wither with white. Unfortunately, your white hair is three thousands of feet, and your face will be beautiful in an instant. Poet, your heart is bigger than the sky! In "There are gluttonous tigers in the daytime and poisonous reptiles in the night", the scene of "Prince Chen gave a banquet in the Palace of Perfection, which won over thousands of people" was interpreted! Good mood!
Su Dongpo, I know you are dissatisfied with "the clouds are pale outside the green sun, and the branches of red apricots are full of spring." I know you want to sing "River of No Return" and concentrate on "asking for wine from heaven"! Wutai Poetry Case Your career has been bumpy since then, but you have been bold all your life! "I hope that people will live for a long time and have a good scenery for thousands of miles!" You sang the hard life and history. Ah! Good mood! The heart is bigger than the sky!
Ren Changxia, I hope you shine like the sunrise of the sun and the moon. You know, you have been noble and elegant all your life. The female police chief shocked the north and the south! Fight against evil and be willing to be a public servant; Get rid of violence, be calm, and be a pioneer in the struggle! When in office, I always face the sky and success with a smile every day, and my heart is bigger than the sky! Ah, good mood!
Good mood sublimates in history and becomes a bigger heart! Or show Hiraoka's passion of riding a thousand horses and shooting tigers with a bow; Or the performance is bamboo pole with mango shoes, leisurely walking; Or it is more beautiful than the West Lake. Or show inner agility; Or it is manifested as the charm of the cloud breaking the moon; Or the solemn and stirring of an ancient country; Or it is characterized by knocking on Jing and asking savage to value harmony.
The heart is bigger than the sky, with Chinese culture for five thousand years. China rises, the red flag flies, and the soul of the Chinese nation has the bones of Qinchuan. Good mood!
Comments:
If the premise of an excellent composition is clear intention and outstanding will, then the biggest highlight of this paper is the beauty of language. The author skillfully uses rhetoric, such as directly or indirectly quoting many ancient poems and phrases. Flexible quotations such as "riding a swift horse in Hiraoka", "shooting a tiger with a bow", "walking with shoes and bamboo shoes", "light makeup" and "lotus heart shows pearls" are so natural that they show the author's profound cultural heritage and spiritual wisdom. For example, "I have complained ... I have complained ... I have complained ..." It expresses a thought-provoking philosophy with vivid, concrete and emotional things-look at the problem from another angle, "Ah! Good mood! The heart is bigger than the sky! " The parallelism at the end of the paragraph not only renders the atmosphere, but also closely follows the theme, highlighting the main idea everywhere.
As an examination composition, it is very valuable for the author to flexibly quote classics, show the extensive accumulation of candidates, enhance the wording and sentences of the article, and make the article look good. Lingyun's lofty aspirations emerge in the conception, which makes people excited.