Ma Junqiang
Beijing volume
Read the following materials and write as required. (60 points)
Lao Ji works alone in the depths of the mountains and is responsible for patrolling the railway to prevent falling rocks, landslides and falling trees from endangering driving safety. He has to walk more than 20 kilometers by himself every day. Whenever a train passes by, the old man will solemnly raise his hand and salute the speeding train. At this time, the train also whistled, and the whistle echoed in the mountains for a long time. ...
Single-handed patrol in the depths of the mountains, solemn salute, prolonged whistle ... What feelings and thoughts do these scenes bring to you? Please write an article of not less than 800 words from your own point of view, topic and style (except poetry) within the meaning of the material.
Best masterpiece
When the whistle echoes for a long time
A candidate in Beijing
A person, a lonely lamp, a railway, a mountain, a mountain road of more than 20 kilometers every day, the old man walks on the road of inspecting the railway day after day. With him, the train can hold her steady. But he is more than a simple inspector. Every time a train passes by, he will stop and pay solemn respect to the train, adding a sense of solemnity to this profession. In response, every train will respond with a long sound. However, for lonely travelers in the mountain of reality, our "whistle" has been stingy for a long time.
During the Eastern Han Dynasty, the science of divination prevailed, and the lonely traveler in the academic mountain was called Wang Chong. He is not as familiar with Confucian classics as Ban Gu and Yang Xiong. He once tasted them with the Four Books and Five Classics. He is naturally inferior to those powerful consorts. He just walked slowly by himself, waving Lun Heng with his bloody pen and solemnly saluting the time train he admired. But where is the whistle? At that time, the emperor was busy playing with big and small yellow doors for fun, and celebrities were busy making a living. At present, even though we know that he awakened the first sound of literary consciousness, Wang Chong, who is not as magnificent and powerful as Wei Wu and as handsome and elegant as Ji Kang, is like an inspector who walks alone in the mountains, drifting away from the places most familiar to the public. So they and we, for different reasons, forgot to whistle back.
In the anti-Japanese fireworks, there is an academic circle of National Southwest Associated University. As a merged school of Peking University, Tsinghua and Nankai. Not to mention its cultural background. The professor was brilliant, and the students were knowledgeable and experienced, which suddenly became a much-told story. However, reality always looks darker than appearance. How many professors went overseas from Hong Kong and never came back. How many students are doing part-time jobs and opening restaurants? If we don't mention these now, it may be sad to mention them. But we don't remember giving another person enough honor to blow our whistle. That's Mei Yiqi, the old headmaster of Tsinghua. He is also like a yogi in the mountains, without the celebrity demeanor of Hu Shizhi and Fu Sinian. However, because of his persistence, the congress remained until the victory of the Anti-Japanese War. But where did our whistle go? I knew about Hu Shizhi when I was very young, but after a long time, I caught a glimpse of Mei Yiqi by chance.
If it is understandable to ignore individuals, what about turning a blind eye to groups? Mu Dan, a poet, participated in the expeditionary force in northern Myanmar in the past, so he quietly wrote the following sentence: "Quietly, on that forgotten hillside, the rain is still falling and the breeze is still blowing. No one knows that history has passed through here, leaving a spirit to grow in the trunk. " I have seen pictures of Mu Dan in his later years. This is a naive person even though he is very old. However, when he wrote those sentences, what flashed through his heart was inevitably painful. Yes, it was a forgotten hillside, an unknown sacrifice. Savage mountain's brother China, who died suddenly, fell asleep. The military salute they gave with their lives did not echo. For a long time, the whistle in reality disappeared.
Maybe they are luckier than the old plan, because what they do looks more or less shiny; Maybe they are more unfortunate than the old plan, because they don't have a train to make that persistent whistle, which means they haven't won enough respect. The eyes of the public are always focused on the lights, praising the great heroes and heroes that every generation is singing. However, when the saint was told that his mouth was full of cocoons, we never gave those lonely practitioners a chance to turn back. They have been buried in the corner of history books for such a long time, and slowly rot with the passage of time. However, such tragedies are not just their own. When we ignore their efforts, we often see the absurdity and blank of history, and we can't find the creator of great events, thus feeling a kind of emptiness. Who abandoned these lonely heroes and took away the original history?
Please open your eyes, those people who walk alone in that lush forest are solemnly saluting us. And when can we whistle for a long time? Only in this way can we face the future with a healthy and complete attitude.
Give reasons
The author's thinking is triggered by the "train whistle echoing for a long time" in the material, which lashes the situation of "too stingy respect for lonely practitioners" in history and reality, with unique vision, profound thinking, good intention and thought-provoking. At the beginning, the material is skillfully quoted with "situational method", which is vivid and unique. The author talks about ancient and modern times, compares horizontally, and also talks about groups from individuals, with broad vision, rich accumulation and vigorous brushwork.
You are a lonely cloud.
A candidate in Beijing
Old railway inspectors patrol the mountains alone in the deep mountains every day, guarding the safety of trains coming and going. A thousand is decades. He was lonely and lost, but he still stuck to his post for decades. Why can he stand such a lonely time? I think it's probably because he has a constant passion and sense of responsibility in his heart. He is like a lonely flowing cloud, wandering alone in the horizon.
But this cloud will not be lonely forever, and one day it will meet another cloud, or even another group of equally lonely clouds. Smile at each other under the blue sky. As a result, the flowing clouds gather into a sea of clouds, and the sounds in my heart are intertwined into an indelible sonata under this sky. Then, you seem to hear the call of another group of clouds.
Deep in the open sea, there is a faint light flashing, which is a searchlight that the seabed observers never sleep. He accompanied this lonely darkness all the year round until there was no unknown mystery at the bottom of the sea to stop him from moving forward. In the cold snowy plateau, there is a burning fire dancing, which is a bonfire for border guards to keep warm. They guarded the home behind them day after day until they stood up like a living ice sculpture. In the center of the vast desert, charming green is spreading, which is the mother's wish for her son. Despite the cold eyes of thousands of people, she planted the seeds of hope until the desert was no longer yellow.
Are you, uh, lonely?
"No, I'm not alone." A heavy and steady male voice came from the depths of the dark sea. "I am practicing the promise of scientists, looking for rich resources on the seabed and exploring the unknown world of mankind."
"No, I'm not alone." A gentle voice hovered over the icy mountain peaks. "I am fulfilling the mission of a soldier, guarding the land where I was born and raised, and guarding the thousands of compatriots in Qian Qian."
"No, I'm not alone." The vast desert center echoed with mother's whisper, "I'm fulfilling my dead son's wish." This tree is a continuation of my son's soul. They are my son's afterlife. "
In fact, they are not alone.
Kant once said: "There are only two things in the world that we think more deeply: one is the vast starry sky above us, and the other is the moral standard in our hearts." With the bright starry sky overhead, they walked forward step by step with supreme morality and stepped out of a glorious thorny road. This road may never be accompanied by flowers, and there may never be sunshine ahead, but their hearts are not lonely, because this tortuous road is full of love and responsibility.
It is often said that greatness is often accompanied by loneliness. This group of small and ordinary people, because their hearts are shining with moral light, have blossomed and borne fruit in the polishing of the long river of years, and achieved a great and noble life. This group of lonely clouds are singing lonely songs under the blue sky, running and dancing, spreading the rain and dew of knowledge all over the earth, spreading the heroic spirit all over the world, and letting endless love warm every fragile heart in this world.
Then, enjoy loneliness.
Give reasons
The author thinks of this lonely cloud from the old people in the depths of the mountains, and then associates it with a group of equally lonely clouds, such as submarine observers in the depths of the sea, border guards in the snowy plateau, and mothers in the middle of the desert. This group of small and ordinary people "accompany the lonely time and space", and then make the evaluation that "they are not lonely, they enjoy this loneliness because love and responsibility are in their hearts". The author has quick thinking, broad vision, rich associations, unique ideas and profound thoughts; The article gives people a sense of hierarchy, depth and three-dimensional sense. The article uses the second person address "you" skillfully, in the form of a dialogue between "candidate" and "unsung hero". The atmosphere of the dialogue is strong, giving people a cordial feeling. The article pays special attention to the inscription reference, the beginning and end reference and the front and back reference, with strict structure and exquisite layout.
Tianjin Juan
True topic of composition
Read the following materials and write as required. (60 points)
Two small fish were swimming together when an old fish swam from the other direction. The old fish nodded to them and said, "Good morning, children, how is the water?" Two small fish stared at each other and swam forward. After swimming for a while, one of the small fish glanced at the other and couldn't help but say, "What is water?"
It seems that some of the most common and indispensable things are just the ones that are most easily overlooked by us; Some seemingly simple things can make us think deeply ...
Please write an article of not less than 800 words (except poetry) based on the above materials, self-selected angle, self-selected topic and self-selected style. Please do not copy or copy.
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If I lose three days of light
A candidate in Tianjin
"Qiqi, get up! I can't be late again. "
"Qiqi, have some breakfast. You are full of energy in school. "
"Qiqi, drink more water at school."
Mom's nagging is endless, which is really annoying!
At the bus stop, the bus came and a group of people flocked. Several young people pushed me back to the side of the road standing in the front row. No quality! Finally I got on the bus and looked out of the window through the gap between people. I saw two cyclists arguing. Look at that posture, I'm about to start fighting. I stopped looking and said to myself: no cultivation!
The "Little Yue Yue" incident is in the news again. The indifference of eighteen passers-by is chilling but not surprising. A few days ago, I heard that someone helped an old man who fell down and his money was cheated. Various media tried their best to publicize the spirit of Lei Feng. I sneered and murmured, "What's the use? Moral decline! "
I spend every day complaining and cursing. "Come on, life is still full of love and light." I was advised to say. "Where is love? Where is the light? Everything is dark! " I said loudly.
Tucao sleeps! Beauty can only be found in dreams. In a trance, a voice said to me, "You can only see darkness in your eyes. You need to really go into the darkness and feel the light. You will be blind for the next three days. "
When I opened my eyes, there was still an endless black hole in front of me, and I suddenly knew the real anxiety and fear. "Qiqi, get up. The clothes are on your right. I'll help you eat breakfast when you get dressed. " Mom's voice looks warm today. After breakfast, I was taken for a walk by my mother. Mom's hand is so soft. Holding my hand so tightly makes me feel more secure. The hearing of the blind seems to be particularly sensitive. I heard the rustle of the wind blowing through the leaves, the crisp birds singing in the bushes, and the faint insects singing in the grass. I usually only hear whistles, but I didn't expect such a wonderful sound around me.
The next day, I gradually adapted to this dark world. I'm going to cross the road alone. When I was upset, a pair of strong hands took my arm and helped me walk slowly. "Are you going to the station?" Strange sounds. "hmm." "Here we are. Which bus do you want to take? " "698。" "Here comes the car, up the steps. Goodbye! " "Thank you!" "Nothing." When I heard this voice, my heart was warm. Someone helped me sit down. On the bus, I heard the old man give up his seat and thanked him. I smiled.
On the third day, I listened to the news at home and heard "the most beautiful mother" and "the most beautiful female teacher". The hands that saved a child's life and the weak figure that struggled to push the students away came to mind. How are they now? I want to see it! I want to see the light!
Finally, after three days of darkness, I regained my light, only to find that love and light were always by my side. Accustomed to being dissatisfied blindly, let me only see the darkness and feel the darkness. Can you feel the warmth of family nagging? Can you see strangers' smiles in your life? Can you see the "most beautiful" in society? Light is in our world, don't give yourself a pair of black eyes, look for darkness.
God gave me a pair of black eyes, and I will use them to find the light.
Give reasons
Through the galloping of literary thinking, the author wrote a story "If I lose three days of light", which is fantastic to imagine; The author is good at using details to describe and create many concrete and sensible life pictures with rich imagination; It is reasonable in imagination that the author mobilized his vision and hearing before writing "blindness" and mobilized his hearing after writing "blindness". The article is written in the order of "light, blindness and light", and the clues are clear. There is a strong contrast in the article. Through the clever use of imagination and contrast, the article expresses the idea that "we should look for light with black eyes, not darkness with it, because love and light are in our world", and the theme is profound. Helen Keller's work "If you give me three days of light" has a novel and unique title, which can be called "Bright Eyes"; Gu Cheng's poems are concise and powerful, which can be called "leopard tail".
The new grass, visible from a distance, disappears when it is near.
A candidate in Tianjin
"The rain in Tianjie is crisp, but the grass color is far away." Poetry is easy to understand. Under the nourishment of the spring rain, the grass germinated and looked green from a distance. But when people approached, they found that the green color was too weak to even be seen by the naked eye. From the literary point of view, Han Yu's poems are beautiful; But I think these two poems by Mr. Tuizhi are more appropriate to summarize some phenomena in life.
People worship heroes and hope that they can stand up when they are most in need. But there are also many disappointments, and heroes seem to only appear in distant places.
The story of Zhang Lili, the "most beautiful female teacher", is widely circulated. At the moment when the roaring car rushed to the students, she set up a safe sentry box with her delicate but powerful body; The story of "the most beautiful driver" Wu Bin touched thousands of families. Within 76 seconds after the iron piece hit the flesh and blood, he completed the ferry from disaster to safety with extreme beauty. People look up to Zhang Lili because in this era of "individual first", her vigorous arm strength vividly interprets the highest realm of teachers' morality; People respect Wu Bin, because in this era of increasingly thin morality and responsibility, the scene of him patiently slowing down and stopping is the best illustration of professional ethics and professionalism. The word "the most beautiful" is the highest reward for them, and it is also a call for the complete return of great love.
Sometimes people sigh like this. Why are heroes only far away? When will heroes suddenly appear in my life? The mood can be understood, but understanding cannot be said to be without deviation. Many people think that only those who make earth-shattering events are heroes, and only those who are widely publicized by the media are heroes. By narrow and lofty standards, there are only a handful of real heroes. In fact, the "most beautiful female teachers" and "most beautiful drivers" are ordinary people. Can these two men be called "heroes" if there is no car accident in Zhang Lili and no deadly iron in Wu Bin? It's hard to answer. Our society is not advanced enough to associate a teacher who is not in the "establishment" with an ordinary driver and a hero. Even if you are a teacher deeply loved by students, he is an excellent employee who has been driving without accidents for ten years.
Romain rolland once said, "A hero is a great man at heart." It is appropriate to use Zhang Lili and Wu Bin for evaluation. Around us, there are many Zhang Lili and Wu Bin, just because they are too close to us, just like the grass in the drizzle in early spring, which is ignored by us. Heroes are around, but we have been calling for heroes and looking for heroes! What an interesting paradox!
"What the hell is water?" The problem of fish is childish, so it is not funny; "Where is the hero?" Adults' questions are stupid, of course ridiculous, and extremely ridiculous.
Give reasons
The exercise is based on Han Yu's poem "The grass looks near but there is nothing", which is to the point and innovative. This paper analyzes the phenomenon of ignoring the silent heroes around us in real life, and satirizes and criticizes the psychology of "Ye Gong Long Hao". The two examples of the most beautiful female teacher and the most beautiful driver are fresh and accurate. In particular, the assumption and doubt that "if Zhang Lili had not suffered a car accident and Wu Bin had not suffered a fatal iron piece" made a perverted view of heroism in life "flashy, revealing its true colors", which was thought-provoking. The combination of whole and scattered language, natural atmosphere and the use of questions and interjections add meaning and motivation to the practice.
won't forget
A candidate in Tianjin
The more common it is, the easier it is to be ignored. Then let us observe and experience with our own "heart", because it may be an indispensable part of our life; Then use our "heart" to summon the colorful life and feel the life.
If I incarnate as a grass, I will know that spring is the season of my rebirth, rain and dew are the spring of my life, and sunshine is my longing for life. I need them. Without them, my life will die.
However, I forgot my most needed and familiar old friend-Tu. She is the bearer of my life, and I can't live without her for a moment. My life germinated from her arms, multiplied from her, and finally she accompanied me to grow old. How can I forget her and ignore her?
If I become a white cloud in the sky, I will deeply love this sky, I will have a drink with the wind, chat with the sun, float freely in the blue sky and enjoy unlimited happiness.
However, I forgot, forgot the necessity of my life, where did I come from? Yes! Water and steam are condensed bit by bit, which makes me who I am today. Every drop of water is a part of my life! While enjoying the joy of soaring in the sky, I forgot them and ignored the origin of my life. They are my most familiar and important friends. How can I ignore them and my old friends?
Grass never forgets anything.
In order to repay the kindness of the land, the grass endured the burning of wildfire, turned it into nutrients and nourished the land, and ushered in the rebirth of spring life in gratitude nirvana.
Ziyun will never forget.
It wants its life to be endless, circulating in the initial condensation of life and the final landing on the earth. In this endless cycle, I will never leave the source of my life.
Yes, I will never forget it. Don't forget the roots of life, don't forget the roots of life.
Yes, if I were that little fish, I would know what shrimp is and what aquatic plants are. I will play with aquatic plants, shrimps and turtles every day and live happily. I will be more grateful for the inseparable water that gave me all this, the most common and indispensable water!
Life is colorful and the world is colorful. In the life of "flowers are becoming more and more charming", let us use "heart" to understand those common and indispensable life bits, because it is a flower that never fades in our life.
Give reasons
This paper deduces the proposition from the height of life with the brushwork of prose poetry, and expresses the ideological theme of "never forgetting the source of life and the foundation of life" The writing style is unique and ambitious. Based on the true, reasonable, scientific and accurate definition of the living environment of things and the relationship between things in the environment, the author turned himself into three images of "grass", "white clouds" and "small fish" with the help of strange imagination, and expressed his feelings with expressions, with novel ideas and unique forms. By cleverly setting contrast, the author not only enriches the content, but also makes the writing waves and highlights the main idea. The setting of the image of "small fish" is cleverly buckled with propositional materials.