How to write a composition with gold in the sand

[Topic Design] Read the following poem, expand your thoughts, boldly imagine and associate according to the artistic conception of the poem, and write an article of no less than 800 words. The topic is self-drawn. Style is not limited, except poetry. It rains everywhere-only sand is the least valuable thing, however, the most precious thing-gold is in it [ideas] This essay topic is very similar to the college entrance examinations in several provinces last year, that is, it provides a meaningful material and gives some hints, but there is no topic. Candidates are required to write according to their "feelings" about the materials. Some people call this kind of composition "meaningful composition" For this kind of composition, accurate interpretation of the meaning of the topic is the key, and candidates should be good at understanding the writing topic from the materials. We should fully understand and accurately grasp the connotation and theme of poetry as we treat the composition of materials. Materials-comprehensive understanding, how to achieve "comprehensive understanding of materials" from a macro perspective? "Comprehensive understanding of the material" means that candidates should grasp the meaning of the material as a whole, summarize the center of the material, refine the point of view of the material, and then determine the center and point of view of their own article accordingly. "Comprehensive" means macro-thinking on the basis of "whole". On the surface, the overall meaning of materials in topic design is the relationship between "gold" and "sand", but the practical significance of this topic should be considered when designing. How can we be "not divorced from the meaning of the material" or "related to the moral of the whole poem"? Candidates should fully mobilize their reading knowledge and reading ability during the examination, and their thinking should conform to the viewpoint or center of the material and the philosophy realized after the macro analysis of the material, that is, the figurative meaning or symbolic meaning of the material. Intention-look at the overall situation from a distance. For a reading material, we can often extract multiple viewpoints from different angles and summarize multiple centers. You should choose the best angle and the best intention. The so-called best angle and best conception refers to choosing an angle that conforms to traditional knowledge and viewpoint on the premise of fully understanding and grasping the overall meaning of the material, and this conception should also conform to the cognitive law or natural law recognized by most people. Those who accurately focus on the overall meaning of the poem and analyze the deep meaning of the material are judged to be "in line with the meaning of the question." For this question, the ideas of "fitting the meaning of the question" in the exam are "the ordinary breeds greatness (Excellence)", "the great love is embodied in the ordinary details" and "the simple life contains great truth". The conception is based on the overall meaning of the poem, but if the depth and breadth are not enough and the social significance is not obvious, it is judged to be "in line with the meaning of the topic". For this question, the original intention of "conforming to the meaning of the question" in the exam is to "discover (excavate) the inner beauty with your eyes" and "not feel inferior and not afraid of smallness". Based on part of the meaning of the poem ("gold" or "sand"), it is judged to be "basically in line with the meaning of the topic". The viewpoints of "basically meeting the meaning of the question" in the exam include "inner beauty is the most important" and "ordinary needs to be honed to become great". It is judged as "deviating from the meaning of the question" if only a few words in the material are used to make a meaning without the whole or local meaning of the material. The ideas of "deviating from the topic" in the exam include "gold always shines", "seeing the essence through phenomena" and "being ordinary sand". We can start with the following points: 1 In order to find the key words (sentences) that suggest the meaning of the topic from the materials, we should attach great importance to several key words in the poem: "the least valuable", "the most precious" and "gold". The first two keywords symbolize ordinary things, and the last two words symbolize a beautiful mind or great and outstanding things. What is the relationship between ordinary and ordinary? This answer is revealed by the key sentence "gold", which is among them. Ordinary things often contain great things. Ordinary things also have noble hearts, which should be the basis of the best idea of this material. 2. Have a holistic consciousness. This poem contains a set of contrasts, the least valuable sand and the most precious gold. According to this group of comparisons, things are connected with people and social reality by imagination and association, so as to sum up things with the same connotation as poetry and endow the article with the flavor of the times. 3. Taking raw materials as the dominant topic and grasping the artistic conception of poetry as a whole. You can express the meaning of the material in straightforward language, so that seemingly endless topics have a fixed topic. [Exhibition 1] Ten miles from the spring breeze, Shang Huashi can easily recognize the east wind, which will always be the color of spring. -inscription forsythia friend, have you noticed the light yellow in the flower bed in early spring? Yellow flowers, sparse leaves, four yellow flowers, very thin and ordinary. Forsythia suspensa is the most common flower in early spring in northern China. It blooms, but it is not as charming as peony; It grows early, but it is not as elegant as daffodils; It's cold-resistant, but it doesn't have Han Mei's ice muscles and bones. Ordinary forsythia, even no one wants to go back and care for it. But, my friend, have you noticed the heat-clearing formula of traditional Chinese medicine? Have you ever remembered this common name and smiled at you in the corner? Forsythia suspensa, as ordinary as sand, is our most respectable Chinese medicine, which tortures itself and benefits all beings! Under the ordinary appearance, forsythia suspensa is the "gold" to maintain people's life and health. Oxalis, a rather circuitous flower name. Friend, you must not have noticed, have you? In mid-spring, the garden is full of green grass and flowers. Friend, you must have not noticed the clusters of bright red and lavender smiling faces under your feet, have you? There are many nameless grass flowers, but they are far less than spring grass "to go further and live better"; Warm, but far less than apricot flowers, "the branches are full of spring"; Bright, but far less than "Liu Hua shines in May". But, look carefully, where are the three petals of Xiaohua and when did they disappear? Fade out of people's sight, but still bloom warmly; Decorated all the love, but not famous. The nameless flower, without you, how can it be beautiful in spring? Although ordinary, your role is not comparable to the public! After being ordinary, you are the "gold" to decorate spring! Enjoy the flowers together, and the flowers will be fragrant. There is no shortage of beauty in the world, just the lack of eyes to find beauty. Wait a minute and you will know that the east wind is always spring! Friend, spring is coming, let's go and enjoy the flowers together! If you are a flower viewer, please be sure to pay attention to the nameless grass flowers on the roadside. They are ordinary, however, behind the ordinary are the great contributions and beautiful things that we ignore. Flower lovers, don't be hindered by "ordinary" to discover beauty! In the sand, there is dazzling "gold"! My friend, if you are a nameless flower, don't be discouraged. Believe that you have your own unique and precious value, save it silently, strive to bloom, and keep your own pure land, and the "gold" of life will eventually bloom with the light of spring! Spring breeze again, my friend. How about going to see flowers together? [Simulated marking] The article is unique and beautiful, which makes people sigh. Small flowers and plants in spring are very common, but these ordinary things have made a colorful spring. This article is famous not so much for its exquisite language as for its lofty thoughts and profound thoughts. [Exhibition 2] Extraordinary Dance in the Ordinary Although you are a stream, you have nurtured a pool of creatures and watered a vast land. Although you are a drop of morning dew, you also reflect the color of the sun and let people see the beauty of the world; Although you are a grain of sand, you also contain precious gold, which attracts people to chase it busily. No matter how ordinary and small you are; No matter how mediocre and humble you are in the eyes of others, you still have your own unique beauty, still writing your own fairy tales in your own asthma book, and creating miracles in the world! Beauty comes from the ordinary, moving from the ordinary, noble from the ordinary, wonderful life comes from the ordinary bit by bit, just like many ordinary grains of sand, with the most extraordinary wealth. Wang Shunyou, a man and a horse, send letters by mail, as simple as a grain of sand. But it is he who, after 20 years of travelling across mountains and rivers, created a legend in the history of postal service, and communicated with the old people and wandering wanderers in the depths of the mountains year after year. His mediocrity brought shock to people. Mother Teresa, short and unattractive, has neither the peerless elegance of Princess Diana nor the billionaire wealth of Bill Gates. But it is she who, with her ordinary life, has created miracles for world charity. She can lower her noble head and beg people in the Royal Swedish Hall to save 60,000 pounds for the Nobel Prize celebration luncheon, in order to make more suffering people smile sweetly. She can tolerate the arrogance of the donor, in order to let the spring breeze of love melt the tears of suffering on the children's faces. It is this passionate love that makes her life shine and makes the whole world admire her. She created an extraordinary life in dribs and drabs and ordinary. Walking on the tree-lined road, it is the humble wild flowers and weeds that decorate your road; Walk by the stream and decorate your road with clusters of ordinary waves; Walking on the road of life is also full of love and affection. Affection, friendship, love and life are full of affection, and ordinary emotions can shake our hearts best. We were moved by the lofty sentiments of "the wind blows and the water cools, and the strong men are gone forever". We are moved by the distant love of "ten years of life and death, never forgetting", and even more by the silent affection of "the thread in the hands of a loving mother, making clothes for the body of a wayward boy" ... Behind the ordinary words is extraordinary love and affection, which will accompany us all our lives. ...